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Looking for more story’s to listen to.

Any recommendations for story’s that are mainly dark, twisted, heavy or mystery types (especially with some kind of twist or jaw dropping realizations); short or long. I can handle anything, love the feeling of a deeply disturbing vibe, not triggered by anything so don’t hold back. Need to be audio format like narrated on YouTube, I haven’t really gotten into audio books yet, but not opposed to it. (Only reason I want audio is cause I listen to them at work)

Here is a list of my absolute favorites so far for reference:

• Borasca

• Pen pal

• Third parent

• Tales from the gas station

• Feed the pig

• Paradise pine

• Body and black and gold

• Autopilot

• The pancake family

• Pornfields of cog 7

• Psychosis

• Theresa

• The left right game

Thanks in advance :)

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u/anna_bortion9 — 9 hours ago
▲ 12 r/creepypasta+2 crossposts

NANCY JIRACYN

Nancy Jiracyn is oc I created!

Sorry because I not good English, because of that I use google Translate

Nancy Jiracyn's storyline

Nancy Jiracyn is a 19-year-old girl. She stands about 1m52 to 1m53 tall and weighs only around 38 to 39 kg. She suffers from severe depression along with several other psychological disorders, yet no one notices, despite her showing severe symptoms of these conditions. Even her own family refuses to get her medical help; instead, they constantly berate her, calling her insane and autistic. Trapped in a vicious downward spiral, she has absolutely no one by her side in life. One fine day, she stumbles upon the "Doll 096" experiment and volunteers for it. She genuinely believes that she will transform into a perfect, beautiful doll, allowed to sit quietly in one place instead of struggling with the endless misery caused by her family.

But she was gravely mistaken. She is subjected to horrific torture; the experimenters perform surgery on her directly without any anesthesia. They plunge a knife into her eyes and gouge them out, replacing them with red buttons that have a cross etched in the center. Terrified and bewildered, she is muffled and threatened with a gunshot to the head if she makes a sound. The side effects of unknown, homemade drugs and injections cause her skin to turn a ghostly grey. Because she constantly screams and writhes in agony from the excessive violence, they eventually sew her mouth completely shut. Spending 5 years in that hellhole, a helpless and pitiable 14-year-old girl who fell into despair instantly traded away her entire future.

Now, at 19 years old, on a dark and gloomy night, she notices a researcher accidentally dropping a utility knife. She sneaks over, grabs the knife, and stabs several of the experimenters who tortured her before escaping. Once a physically weak and timid girl, she has grown and hardened into a silent young woman consumed by deep hatred and resentment. After fleeing, she ends up in a deserted suburban area, crying out in agony over her tragic fate. There, a towering entity—Slenderman—spots her. What happens next remains a mystery, but she ultimately becomes one of Slenderman's proxies, residing in the Slender Mansion.

Her words when she met the victim: "I hate number 96, I'm a flawed doll. Let me slash you too and make you an even more pathetic doll than me!"

And my youtube, everyone can search and see more content about Nancy Jiracyn later! : @Saphirre-XinO

u/SaphirreRinape — 18 hours ago

Random ahh art

random ahh art of Jeff bc he’s still my fav and uh it’s so ahh but it took like an hour so :3 anyway ya JTK (Jeff The Killer) anyway :3

u/Late_Explorer9764 — 1 day ago
▲ 120 r/creepypasta+3 crossposts

Rose the killer

My name is Rose.

People at school call me a freak.

Maybe they’re right.

I got into another fight today. Three boys cornered me behind the gym like always. Jacob ended up with a broken arm, Cameron lost three teeth, and Tim… well, Tim couldn’t stand after I slammed his head against the concrete.

I don’t regret it.

The ride home was silent except for the sound of my mother’s old car rattling down the road. She kept glancing at me with disgust.

My messy black hair covered most of my face, hiding the empty glass eye sitting where my real one used to be. I was born different. Broken. At least that’s what everyone says.

“You need to stop obsessing over Jeff the Killer,” my mom snapped finally. “He murdered people in this town three years ago. Your father says evil like that spreads.”

I stared out the window.

“He isn’t evil,” I whispered. “He’s free.”

My mother looked horrified after I said that.

Good.

When we got home, my father was already waiting for me. Sage. The town priest. Everyone loved him.

If only they knew.

“You should be ashamed of yourself,” he yelled, grabbing me by the collar. “Hurting people in God’s world!”

Then he hit me.

Again.

And again.

His fists slammed into my ribs until I collapsed onto the kitchen floor gasping for air. The smell of whiskey poured from his breath while my mother stood there and watched.

Like always.

He dragged me to the table and forced a notebook in front of me.

“Write it,” he snarled.

I’m sorry.

I wrote the words over and over until my hand cramped and blood dripped from my knuckles onto the paper.

I’m sorry.

I’m sorry.

I’m sorry.

Finally, he threw me into my room.

I locked the door and stared at myself in the mirror. Pale skin. One brown eye. One fake eye. Long black hair hanging over my face like a curtain.

I hated myself.

But I hated him more.

I reached into my drawer and pulled out my favorite scissors. The blades were stained dark from years of use.

Every time he hurt me, I cut myself.

Not because I wanted to die.

Because I wanted to remember.

Thin red lines opened across my arms and stomach. Blood slid down my skin while tears burned in my eyes. My body was covered in scars already. Proof of what he really was beneath the priest act.

A monster.

The next morning, I went to school pretending nothing happened.

That was my first mistake.

Tim and his friends were waiting for me near the football field. Tim’s arm was wrapped in a cast from the fight yesterday.

“Hey, freak,” he laughed. “We got you a present.”

He pulled out a flare gun.

Before I could move, he fired.

The pain was unreal.

I remember screaming.

I remember the smell of burning flesh.

Then darkness.

When I woke up, I was in a hospital bed. My face felt like it was melting. I could hear my parents arguing outside the room.

“He looks like a monster now!” my father shouted. “He looks just like that killer she worships!”

I slowly climbed out of bed and looked into the mirror beside the sink.

Half my face was destroyed.

The skin was blackened and peeling away in strips. My hair on one side had burned off completely, exposing raw flesh underneath. Blood dripped from my jaw onto my hospital gown.

I should’ve been horrified.

Instead…

I smiled.

For the first time in my life, the monster on the outside finally matched the one inside.

I grabbed my scissors from my backpack before the doctors could stop me.

Slowly, I pushed the blades into the corners of my mouth.

The metal sliced through skin.

Blood flooded down my neck.

I kept cutting wider and wider until my cheeks split open into a permanent grin. The pain made my vision blur, but I couldn’t stop laughing.

I looked beautiful.

The smile kept tearing, so I grabbed a stapler from a nearby tray and stapled the skin together piece by piece.

Click.

Click.

Click.

My smile would never fade again.

I walked into the hallway covered in blood.

My parents froze when they saw me.

“Rose…” my mother whispered.

I buried the scissors into her throat before she could scream.

Blood sprayed across the hospital walls while she collapsed choking on her own blood. My father tried to run, but I tackled him to the floor.

“For God?” I whispered into his ear. “Where was God when you beat me?”

Then I stabbed the scissors into his eye.

Again.

Again.

Again.

I didn’t stop until his face was nothing but torn flesh and shattered bone.

The hospital alarms screamed around me as nurses ran in terror.

I laughed the entire time.

By the time the police arrived, I was gone.

The woods became my home after that.

Years passed.

People started disappearing near the forest. Campers. Hunters. Lost teenagers.

They always found the bodies smiling.

Some say I began worshipping Jeff the Killer like a god. Others say I became something worse than him.

Now people whisper my name the same way they whisper his.

Rose the Killer.

If you ever hear laughter outside your window late at night…

Don’t look.

Because if I see your face—

I’ll make sure you smile forever.

u/AnxiousFace9721 — 1 day ago
▲ 52 r/creepypasta+3 crossposts

Walking to my apartment. Everyone keep staring.

I just arrived back home from work. I am terrified of what they might do to me if they work their way into my building, but for the time being, I need to write this down as evidence in case of my disappearance.

It started a few hours ago, when I walked back from my quiet office downtown. Today was like any other. I walk in at 8:45, turn on my computer, grab coffee, and start my day. An hour later, bathroom break, and 30 minutes of doom scrolling. I burnt both my hands making hot water for tea, but otherwise fairly chaos free. After putting out a few fires with some unruly clients, I enjoyed a brief happy hour with my coworkers.

Jason works in IT, and usually keeps to himself. I never had a reason to dislike the guy, but I usually avoided him due to him trying to convert us over to his church. Given we don't see him outside of the office too much, I asked him to join us at the nearby bar.

"Drinking is a sin," Jason snapped. Turning his head towards me and realizing my invite was genuine, he muttered "But if you need the extra accompaniment, there's no harm in joining for a soda." I recall almost regretting inviting him right then.

I walked with Jason and the rest over to the bar. Jason slinked behind the rest of us. He's normally enthralled by the tablet he keeps by his side, but today was different. He stared directly at me the entire walk to the bar.

Sitting down, we yapped about the office drama, unruly clients, annoying bosses, etc. But Jason just kept staring. Not just staying silent and looking up at us - his eyes were piercing right at me. Not with alarm or disgust, but a strange intrigue.

It wasn't until everyone was wrapping up that Jason finally spoke. "Th-thanks again for inviting me," he said, still glaring. "I know you guys do these things a lot, I never wanted to be a bother." It was at that moment that I began to question: how long has it been since he last blinked?

"You really should come by the church. I'm sure everyone else would really love to meet you."

I told him no. He seemed disappointed, but smiled back to me gently, with a look of anticipation. "The one who endures in the end is the one who will be saved, I guess."

I put on my airpods and began my walk home. My commute to and from work takes roughly an hour, and with summer almost here, I try to get my steps in by walking to and from. It took about twenty before I walked by a man staring directly at me. No blinking.

If it weren't for the man's dilapidated clothes, I would have guessed it was Jason again. But no, just a random homeless man. A stranger, who bears no weight in my life whatsoever. He didn't move, he didn't say a word, and no one else seemed to say a word. As I stepped closer, I could see his body shake uncontrollably, until he got down on his knees. Staring, with a strange innocence to his face.

Though I wasn't too scared, you can't be too careful in this city. I rushed by him, blaring my metal music to amp me up and get home faster.

The music was only interrupted by bell-ringing. Specifically, from a church. Worse yet, the alleged "church of rejuvenation". Jason's church. I knew it, only because Jason wouldn't stop inviting us to mass, christian singles functions, and movie nights where they only played veggie tales.

The priest (I assume - he wore a long white robe with an orange sash around his neck??) came out quickly. Like the homeless man before him, his whole body vibrated until he got to his knees.

Unlike the homeless man, he quickly rushed towards me, walking still on his knees, and staring without blinking. What the hell has been going on? The priest began weeping, not from fear, though I certainly was afraid. With my airpods in, I couldn't hear what he was trying to tell me, but I could tell he kept repeating the same words over and over again.

This cycle of behavior continued the rest of the hour. Random strangers would prostrate themselves in front of me. Looking around, it didn't even seem like anyone noticed. Was it just that people mind their own business? Could they not see what was happening to me? I ran back faster, hoping to avoid this madness. I looked down on the ground, trying to avoid more eye contact, but I could feel their glares pressing down on me, harder and harder all the way back to my apartment.

My building is old, but it is my sanctuary from these unblinking strangers. I've worked hard for this place - a corner apartment on the seventh story. Windows outstretch the entirity of its walls, with the East wall facing into the city street. Across the street, a larger apartment complex, with patios lined systematically. I've always been worried people could stare inside, but the distance is too great that even if one could look, it would take extraordinary vision to see what was going on.

That's what I thought at first, until on each of the patios were individuals, all glaring at me. I almost fell down, from concern. It wasn't just looking at my apartment, they were looking at me. They are looking at me, even as I write this.

Looking up from my laptop screen, I notice some are crying, others laughing, but all unblinking, with almost void expressions preventing them from feeling anything. Others seem to have vanished altogether.

I realized where they went looking down onto the pavement. Most unmoving, with a few still writhing on the ground since the height of their patios weren't high enough to finish them off. Looking closer, the survivors (at least, the ones still moving) kept their gaze toward me. Even if I hid behind a wall, I could feel their bleeding eyes directly on me.

Walking upstairs to my room, I found a note. Welcome, our chosen - Matthew 24:14. Someone entered my home!

I've hid myself in the bathroom, and called the cops. Though to be honest, I'm unsure if they will be able to help me given the growing number of bodies piling outside.

I'm no expert in contagion, psychopaths, religion, cults, or whatever, but if anyone can help explain what is going on, and what any of this means, please help.

And if you live in my area, please avoid looking directly at me at all costs.

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u/Lich_Light — 1 day ago
▲ 23 r/creepypasta+1 crossposts

Man-Eater

A man walked alone through the Amazon Basin. He was a conservationist and had dedicated his entire life to protecting endangered wildlife. But at fifty-six years old, his body was beginning to slow down. Before retiring, there was one thing he wanted to see one last time: the endangered Amazon river dolphin in its natural habitat.

He had been trekking through the jungle all day, and night was quickly approaching. Exhausted, he sat on an old rotten log and began setting up his tent near the riverbank. Mosquitoes already swarmed around him in thick clouds, so he decided to build a small fire to keep them away during the night.

He pulled out a flint and steel and worked patiently until sparks caught the kindling. A small flame flickered to life. He fed it carefully, watching it grow brighter against the darkness of the jungle.

Once the fire was stable, he unpacked an MRE and activated the chemical heater. Steam rose from the bag as the meal warmed. He smiled tiredly, licking his lips in anticipation of the ravioli. After mixing in hot sauce, he ate slowly while listening to the sounds of the rainforest around him.

For the first time all day, he felt content.

After finishing his meal, he crawled into his tent and unbuckled his gear. He needed a good night’s rest before continuing his exploration in the morning.

Hours later, he awoke suddenly to a low, rumbling growl.

His eyes snapped open.

Another growl echoed from outside the tent—deeper this time.

Dangerous.

Slowly, he unzipped the tent and peeked outside.

A massive jaguar stood near the edge of the campfire’s light.

The animal moved silently toward him, its golden eyes fixed on his face.

He immediately stood tall and shouted, trying to scare it away. But the jaguar didn’t flinch.

Instead, it kept coming.

The man grabbed a burning branch from the fire and waved it in front of him. The jaguar growled and swatted at the air. He thrust the flaming stick closer to its face.

Now he could smell its horrible breath.

Still, the jaguar refused to back down.

Fear surged through him. Acting on instinct, he swung the flaming branch and struck the animal across the muzzle. The jaguar snarled violently as the fur around its face singed from the heat.

For a moment, the two stared at each other.

Then the jaguar slowly backed away into the darkness.

But before disappearing into the jungle, it stopped.

It looked back at him one last time and roared.

The man suddenly understood something horrifying.

He was being hunted.

The rest of the night was miserable.

He threw every remaining piece of firewood onto the flames, desperate to keep the blaze alive until sunrise. Even then, he barely slept.

Before dawn, he packed his gear quickly. He wanted to get as far away from the jaguar’s territory as possible.

For hours he hiked through the basin, sweat soaking through his clothes as the jungle closed around him. By midday he estimated he had traveled nearly six miles.

Finally, he allowed himself to relax.

Maybe the jaguar had given up and he was far enough away from its territory.

He stopped beside the river to eat breakfast and recover some energy. Afterwards, he pulled out his camera and prepared to photograph the wildlife.

He waited patiently beside the muddy water.

A small caiman drifted through the river nearby before suddenly diving beneath the surface, as if startled by something below.

Then he saw them.

Two adult Amazon river dolphins emerged from the cloudy water, their gray bodies tinted faint pink beneath the sunlight. Between them swam a calf.

The man’s heart nearly stopped with joy.

After weeks of searching, he had finally found them.

And they had a healthy calf.

With shaking hands, he lifted the camera and began taking photograph after photograph. He became so focused on the dolphins that he stopped paying attention to the jungle behind him.

A growl erupted only feet away.

He turned slowly.

The jaguar stood directly behind him.

Its eyes burned with hatred.

Before he could react, the animal lunged.

Both of them crashed into the river.

Murky water swallowed him whole. He thrashed violently as the jaguar clamped its jaws around his arm, ripping and tearing through flesh.

He screamed underwater, but only bubbles escaped his mouth.

The jaguar was trying to drown him.

His lungs burned. His strength faded. Darkness crept into the edges of his vision.

Desperate, he grabbed the camera hanging around his neck and smashed it against the jaguar’s face. The flash exploded underwater.

The jaguar recoiled slightly—but it refused to let go.

Summoning the last of his strength, the man jammed his thumb deep into the animal’s eye.

The jaguar jerked back violently, tearing a chunk from his arm before finally releasing him. Growling in pain, it swam to shore and disappeared into the jungle once more.

The man crawled from the river coughing violently, water pouring from his lungs.

Blood streamed down his ruined arm.

He knew he would die if he didn’t stop the bleeding.

Using his knife, he cut a long strip from his shirt and wrapped it tightly around the wound. He shoved a stick beneath the fabric and twisted until the tourniquet tightened.

Agony exploded through his body.

But eventually the bleeding slowed.

Barely able to stand, he stared into the jungle.

Somewhere out there, the jaguar was still watching him.

He knew there was a small village several miles away.

If he could reach it, maybe he could survive.

So he started walking.

Wet. Bloody. Exhausted.

Hours passed beneath the crushing jungle heat. Several times he heard movement in the trees beside him.

The jaguar was still following.

Keeping its distance.

Waiting.

The man collapsed to his knees repeatedly, but every time he forced himself back up. He grabbed vines and branches to pull himself forward.

Eventually he noticed something wrong with his arm.

The flesh around the bite had turned a deep raspberry red.

Infection.

He tried to ignore it and kept moving.

But after several more miles, the skin began turning black.

Sepsis was setting in.

Soon he could barely think clearly. Fever consumed him. His head pounded. His body felt freezing cold despite the humid jungle air.

A few trees away, the jaguar watched him silently.

It knew he was dying. Just waiting for him to be weak enough to not fight back.

Night began to fall.

The man staggered forward, barely able to lift his feet anymore. Then suddenly he smelled smoke.

A village.

Hope surged through him.

The jaguar crept closer between the trees.

The man tried to shout for help, but his voice came out weak and broken.

Using the last of his strength, he stumbled into a run.

For a brief moment adrenaline made him feel light again.

He was so close.

Then something slammed into his back.

The jaguar.

Its claws buried deep into his flesh as both crashed to the ground.

The man screamed as the animal raked its claws across his face. He tried to reach for its eyes again, but the jaguar caught his hand in its jaws.

His hand crushed.

The man couldn’t fight anymore.

He was too weak. Too sick. Too exhausted.

Slowly, the jaguar moved its jaws toward his neck.

Then it bit down.

The man stopped resisting.

He could feel his life draining away with every fading breath. His vision darkened as the pressure around his throat tightened harder and harder.

His face turned purple.

And finally…

He relaxed.

Days later, searchers found the man’s camera near the river basin.

Inside were hundreds of beautiful photographs—birds, trees, sunsets, and finally the rare river dolphins swimming peacefully with their calf.

There were also several older pictures of the man smiling beside his two sons.

But investigators were disturbed most by the final image stored on the camera.

A blurred photograph accidentally taken during the attack

It was Staring at him with blood thirsty eyes wide open.

u/purple_fucker — 1 day ago

Why is Godzilla NES considered the best videogame creepypasta?

Don't get me wrong, I've picked this story to give it a read multiple times and I have a blast everytime I do it since I am also a Godzilla fan and I love the MC, the antagonist, the plot, all of it. But I've wanted to hear everyone's thought about it that makes people think that it is better than other also very good videogame creepypastas, like Ben Drowned or the Lavender Town Sydrome.

Remembering, that being good does not mean more famous! The most famous videogame creepypasta is probably Sonic.exe but the story itself is dogshit.

So, what do you think that the Godzilla creepypasta has that the other videogame creepys do not have?

u/HealthMother3125 — 1 day ago
▲ 28 r/creepypasta+6 crossposts

He needs an excuse to go to the store. Another afternoon coming off a long high, he takes a few edibles at around 8:30pm. He’s running out, but he doesn’t mind. Pay day’s less than a week away, & he has the ingredients to make more at home. Well, everything except butter. He refused to use vegetable oil, per the instructions on the box, because he swore that the fat content in the rendered butter bonds better with the THC distillate .

So, at 9:15, he decides to walk to the store. It’ll be a thirty minute round trip, nearly fifteen minutes each way. He wants snacks anyways, despite the overwhelming options in this pantry. He has his sights set on a frozen delicacy. A supreme Tombstone Pizza.

Bluey slippers on each foot, & his Smoke-Shop, Delta-9 vape in his pocket, he makes his way out into the muggy, Virginia summer night. The mosquitoes buzz as they flock to his exposed skin, so he picks up his pace.

As he makes his way under the first light pole of the trip, he thinks he sees something. The lights of the neighborhood porches & the streetlamps illuminate his immediate surroundings, but between the trees & the edges of the fences, shadows held firm like curtains.

He takes his earbuds out. He only hears the few cars on the nearby highway. As he gets closer, he can make out the faint visage of a woman, hiding in the dark.

Just like that, there it is. The faint sound he could've sworn he heard. The sounds of buzzing & chirping, like the sounds of a machine, maybe a printer. As he passes her, maybe fifteen feet away, she watches him, & he realizes something that makes his skin prickle. The mechanical noises were coming from her, & even though he couldn’t clearly see her face moving from the dark, he knew the sounds were mimicry made by a human voice, repeating perfectly on a loop. He picks up his pace slightly more. He keeps his sights ahead after he passes her, trying not to attract her attention.

“Maybe I’m just higher than I think,” he mutters. He didn’t see her head rotate to watch him, just her eyes, but even then, his mind could’ve just been playing tricks on him. He goes through the light of the immediate next street lamp & looks back at her. He was now about twenty-five feet away. She was staying still, her position unflinching. He turns away & continues. Under the next streetlamp, he repeats, looking back again. Still, nothing. At least forty-five feet away by this point, he lets out the breath he hadn’t even realized he had been holding, & pops his earbud back in.

“Huh, weird.”

Sixty feet away, under the last umbrella of light on his street, he humors a last glance back, just before he bolts. She’s strolling briskly towards him, calculated & confident. She’s not even on the road, she’s cutting through dark driveways & lawns in a direct beeline. As she gets closer, he runs faster & faster. By now, he’s closer to the store than to his mobile home.

“Holy shit! I need to get somewhere with fucking cameras & lights," he thinks.

He rounds past the small, vacant Sheriff Deputy building, & under more streetlights. He was now out of the neighborhood, on the sidewalk right next to the sparse highway, no further than two closed establishments from his destination. He looks back, momentarily grateful to see she’s not visibly behind him anymore. He begins to slow slightly, his unfit joints & atrophied muscles shrieking in pain. The cramps nip his ankles & thighs, & his pace loses steam. That is, until he sees two individuals across the road to his left.

They keep his pace & watch him predatorily. He can’t make out their faces clearly, but he can see they’re wearing something on their heads. Something silvery that went down just above their mouths that exposed their eyes. Something was… off. Uncanny about their expressions. They looked so angry, & their faces were flush. Too flush.

To the contrary of his body, he speeds up again. Some predators try to surround their prey & block off the exits. He was going to take his chance before he lost it. With one last burst of energy, his feet smacked from pavement, to grass, & back onto pavement as he crossed the threshold into the parking lot of the open Family Dollar. Nearly tripping, he threw himself into the unlocked glass doors, & with a blinding light, he’s done it. He’s inside the store.

Relief blossoms in his stomach & warms his fingertips. He wipes his mouth & looks around. The small shop is nearly empty. His heartbeat flutters rapidly, & he desperately tries to regain his breath.

“Dude?”

He snaps his neck to face the person who spoke & took his earbud out. A small employee, donning a nametag that says, “Grenda,” looks at him like they’d been trying to get his attention for several seconds.

“Dude. You good?” Grenda asks, visibly concerned.

He looks back out the glass doors. No one in the parking lot, in the road, on the sidewalk. No normal people, no one with helmets. He turns & looks at Grenda again.

“Yeah, I think. Sorry.”

He picks up a basket & wearily begins traversing the store. The shelves are like a thin maze. He grits his teeth & pushes on. He grabs a few small snacks. Some Pork Rinds, a case of kool-ade & a jar of pickled jalapenos. But he has his sights set on the refrigerator section. A pizza & some butter. Looking both ways like he’s crossing the street first, he makes his way to the brightly lit, freezing cold aisle. As he does, he bumps into an older woman, another customer.

“Oop, sorry ma’am.”

She mouths something in response, but he can’t hear her over the sound of his reactivated earbuds.

He crouches down to look at the selection of frozen pizzas, & his earbud runs out of battery. As soon as it does, he hears that sound again. The person imitating a robot. In surprise, he falls back onto his ass & looks up. There it is, fully illuminated. She looked like she used to have a thick head of blond hair. She’s bright pink, like a lobster. Flush as if she’s been exerting a great amount of effort, but she doesn't breathe, her nostrils don’t even flair. She just stands there, wide enough to block the entire aisle, & built like a bulldog. Her lips are pulled up in a sneer, & her teeth look rotten, gritted together so hard that her jaw visibly strained from the effort. The part that made him want to cry was what it was wearing. She was wearing normal houseware, a tanktop & some basket-ball shorts. She looked like a normal person, juxtaposed against something horrendous on its head.

Covering the cranium down to the tip of the nose, was a filthy wrapping of duct-tape. It partially concealed all manner of exposed wires & blinking things, motherboards & copper shavings that reflected the light's glint. The only thing that was not covered were her eyes. They were bulged out of her noggin like overfilled water balloons, squeezed through a thin pipe. Blood leaked from the edges of their duct-tape sockets, & from under the border that covered her cheeks & the tops of her ears ran streams of blood across her blushed skin as well, dripping all the way under her chin. & down her neck. He was frozen for a moment from sheer panic. What was this?

As soon as he gathered his bearings enough, he scrambled up & backed away, trying to keep sudden movements to a minimum.

“Lady, lady!” He gasps, addressing the older customer who he’d bumped into earlier.

“What?!”

“What is that?”

She glances over, her eyes trained on the same spot as his, at the end of the aisle.

“What?”

“Look!”

“Look at what?”

He momentarily turns to assess the old woman. She looks dumbfounded.

“You don’t see her?” He breathes.

“See who, young man?” She gulps, frightened & a little flabbergasted.

He looks back at the thing, & it’s moved closer. Now merely five feet away, more details become noticeable. The antenna on top of its head. The two pulsing buttons on the side of its left temple. The way that even though the eyes were on the verge of bursting, they stayed locked on him.

He didn’t even bother taking the items with him. He just dropped everything & ran out the door. He tried to call 911, but his phone ran out of battery too. Once outside, he didn’t look back, but he did hear it start to catch up. He closed his eyes & pumped his legs, pushing harder than he ever had before. He wouldn’t look back.

When he was a kid, he heard the story about the man whose family got a pass out of Sodom & Gomorrah. The wife had looked back, & got turned to salt. As he heard the sound of the thing getting closer behind him, footsteps smacking the pavement at a constant, precise speed, he tried not to think of all the things that might happen to him if he dared.

He ran, & it kept a steady pace behind him. A couple of times, he got some good distance, others, the thing was almost close enough to brush him with its fingertips. At some points, he swore he heard other footsteps, like the pack of them were coming back to finish him off, but over the sound of his heartbeat, he couldn’t have been sure. The entire time, he heard that repeating sound. The whirring, puffing, beeping & buzzing. Its vocal chords were worn out, & they strained to continue droning, but on they did.

A round trip that wound up usually being thirty minutes was done in twenty-five this time. The wood of the porch thumped under his slides & he gripped the handle, twisting & yanking with all his might. The automatron sounded like it could've been just yards behind him. He slammed the metal door shut behind him & slumped to his knees, letting out a half sob, half wheeze. He whimpered & crawled to his blinds, shutting them too. The tears were welling up almost as hard as the stomach bile in his throat. He hadn’t run like that in so long, he almost felt like he’d pulled something in his calves. Everything burned. He sat down on his couch & tried to plug his phone in. That was the last thing he did before he realized someone was under his table.

That night, his neighbor reported seeing him run into his camper, & then a few minutes later, screaming. When the police arrived, all they found was the top of his skull, scalp still intact, & a puddle of bloody spinal fluid.

“What do you think, Detective?” A policeman asked as he placed yellow caution tape over the door of the trailer.

The detective picks up a brownie from the microwave & smells it.

“It’s these damn kids & their weed, it's always these damn kids & their weed…”

Thanks to everyone who checked out my story last night! The encouragement was great, so I finished editing this one I had in the making and figured I’d share it tonight. This one was really fun. I hope it translates well into written format, this was originally intended to be a short film. Hope y’all enjoy!

u/4THEB3TTERG00D — 1 day ago

PINKAMENA

i drew pinkamena!!! i used to love this creepypasta, but it would literally give me nightmares ;-;

u/vennIs0 — 1 day ago

Jeff the killer bear (TW sewn on bloody mouth scars)

I found this build a bear on eBay and had to customise him as Jeff the killer

u/Undead_GhostFish — 1 day ago
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THE LIZARDMAN OF SCAPE ORE SWAMP.

As featured on the cover of DAVID WEATHERLY’s book -
‘PALMETTO STATE MONSTERS - CRYPTIDS & LEGENDS OF NORTH CAROLINA. With a foreword by Micah Hanks.

In the folklore of Lee County, South Carolina, the Lizard Man of Scape Ore Swamp (also known as the Lizard Man of Lee County) is an entity said to inhabit the swampland of the region. First mentioned in the late 1980s, the purported sightings and damage attributed to the creature yielded a significant amount of newspaper, radio and television publicity.

Was it a deformed or 'burn-victim-bigfoot' wearing an alligator pelt...? Or a real 'Lizard-Man'...? or was it something else entirely...?

Print available here!

Merch & More here!

u/MisterSamShearon — 2 days ago
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My little brother came back from vacation different. Last night, I found out he never came back at all

I need to get this out before I lose my mind, or before whatever is wearing my skin decides I've said too much.

I'm writing this from the closet in my bedroom. It's 4:12 AM. The house is doing that thing again—breathing. Not the normal expansion and contraction of old pipes. I mean breathing. A slow, wet inhale somewhere behind the walls, followed by a sigh that ruffles the dust on the floorboards. I can hear Liam's door creaking open down the hall. Soft footsteps. They'll stop outside my room in about thirty seconds.

They always do.

But I'm getting ahead of myself. Let me start at the beginning, because if I don't organize this, I'll convince myself I imagined all of it. I didn't. The bruise on my wrist proves I didn't.

One week ago, my family got back from our annual summer trip. Every August, we rent the same cabin on the Oregon coast. It's nothing fancy—knotty pine walls, a kitchen that smells like coffee and old spices, a wraparound porch facing the craggy shoreline. We've been going since I was twelve. Liam's eleven now, and this year he spent the whole trip doing what eleven-year-olds do: complaining about the Wi-Fi, collecting obscene amounts of shells, and following me around like a shadow.

I'm twenty-six. I moved back home after college to save money, which is its own kind of horror, but up until last week, it was fine. Boring, even.

The last day of the trip, we went to a beach we don't usually visit. A cove about two miles south of the cabin, accessible only at low tide through a gap in the cliffs. Mom found it in some coastal guidebook. "Mermaid's Grotto," it was called. Touristy name, but the place itself was strange. The sand was darker than it should've been, almost black, and the tide pools were filled with water that seemed too still, too clear, reflecting a sky that looked two shades too green.

Liam wandered off.

I was on the rocks, taking pictures. Mom was reading. Dad was napping on a towel. It was maybe fifteen minutes before I realized I couldn't hear him—that constant hum of a boy narrating his own adventure to no one. I found him at the far end of the cove, standing at the mouth of a sea cave with his back to me. He was perfectly still, which was wrong. Liam doesn't do still. He's a kid made of springs and noise.

"Liam?"

He didn't turn. The cave behind him was dark, and the air coming out of it smelled wrong—not like seaweed and salt, but sweeter. Staler. Like water that's been sitting in a closed room for years.

"Liam, come on. Tide's coming back."

He turned then, and I remember thinking his eyes looked odd. Not the color—just the way they focused. Like he was looking at me from the bottom of a well.

"I was just exploring," he said, and smiled. A normal smile. Liam's smile.

I didn't think about it again until the drive home.

We pulled into the driveway at 9:47 PM. Seven hours of traffic, two rest stops, one screaming match about who forgot the cooler in the cabin (me). We were exhausted. Dad unlocked the front door, and we all stumbled inside, and the first thing I noticed was the smell.

Our house shouldn't have a smell. We'd been gone a week. It should've been neutral, maybe faintly musty. Instead, the hallway hit me with this thick, damp sweetness—like saltwater left to rot in the sun, underneath something floral I couldn't place. The kind of smell that coats the inside of your nose and stays.

"Ugh, did something die in the fridge?" I asked.

Mom just wrinkled her nose. "I'll check. Someone grab the suitcases."

I turned to go back to the car—and stopped.

The suitcases were already in the living room. All four of them, lined up neatly by the couch. Ours are the hard-shell kind, and they're heavy. Mine alone is forty pounds when full. I stared at them, that wrongness settling into my chest like a cold stone.

"Who brought these in?"

Dad was already heading upstairs. "Not me."

Mom called from the kitchen: "I thought you did."

I looked at Liam. He was standing by the suitcases, one hand resting on top of mine like he'd been waiting for me to notice.

"They were heavy," he said, matter-of-factly. "I helped."

A ten-year-old who weighs seventy pounds soaking wet did not carry four packed suitcases up a flight of porch steps. I opened my mouth to say so, but he was already walking toward his room, his bare feet padding softly on the hardwood.

I stood there for a long time, looking at the suitcases. They were damp. Condensation clung to the shells, like they'd been out in the fog.

We hadn't had fog.

The first night, I didn't sleep.

Jet lag, I told myself. The drive. The weird smell. I lay in bed staring at the ceiling, listening to the house settle. At 2:47 AM, I heard footsteps. Light, bare ones. Pacing the hallway. I assumed it was Liam going to the bathroom—kids wake up, it's normal—but the pacing didn't stop. Back and forth. Back and forth. A slow, deliberate rhythm that went on for forty-five minutes.

At 3:00 AM exactly, the footsteps stopped outside my door.

I held my breath.

The door was cracked open an inch—my room gets stuffy—and through the gap, I could see a sliver of the hallway. A sliver of Liam. He was standing perfectly rigid, facing my door. Not looking through the gap. Just facing it, the way a camera faces a subject. His arms hung at his sides, straight as rods. He didn't move. He didn't blink.

I lay there, heart hammering so hard I could taste copper, watching my little brother stand like a mannequin in the hallway for eleven minutes. Then, without a sound, he turned and walked back to his room.

In the morning, he was eating Cinnamon Toast Crunch and watching Transformers. He burped at me and laughed. Normal. Completely normal.

"Liam, were you up last night?"

"Mom says sleepwalking runs in the family," he said, not looking up from the TV. "We don't remember it."

We. The word snagged on something in my brain, but I let it go.

I shouldn't have let it go.

Day two. I went into Liam's room to return a book I'd borrowed, and I stopped in the doorway. Something was different, and it took me a second to place it.

The mirror. The full-length mirror on the back of his door, the one Mom put there so he could check his "school fit" every morning. It was covered with a towel. A ratty blue beach towel—the one he'd taken on the trip.

"Liam, why's your mirror covered?"

He was sitting on his bed, legs crossed, sorting his shell collection. "I don't like it anymore."

"Since when?"

"Since it shows the wrong things."

My throat tightened. "What do you mean, wrong?"

He held up a sand dollar, examining it in the light. "Like when you look in a mirror and your face is yours but it's not yours. It's the wrong one." He said this with the same casual tone he'd use to describe a video game level he couldn't beat. Then he looked at me, and for a split second, his expression flickered—something old and hungry passing behind his eyes like a cloud across the sun. "We don't like that lamp either."

I looked at the lamp. The desk lamp by his bed. It was the same lamp he'd had for years—a blue ceramic one with a rocket ship.

"What's wrong with the lamp?"

"We just don't like it."

He turned back to his shells. Conversation over.

I backed out of the room and went straight to the hallway. The family photos. I don't know why I checked them—some instinct, some part of my brain that had been quietly cataloging wrongness and was now connecting dots.

Every photo of Liam on the wall was blurred. Not the whole picture—just his face. Like he'd moved during a long exposure, a smudge of features where his grin should be. But the photos had been fine when we left. I'd dusted this hallway the day before we drove to the coast.

I leaned in to look closer. The glass on the frames was slightly fogged with age, and in the reflection—only in the reflection—I could see Liam's face. Not blurred. Perfectly clear. And he was smiling. Not his gap-toothed, braces-glinting smile. This was wide and lipless, the grin of something that learned what a smile is by being told about it. Too many teeth. No teeth. Both at the same time.

I jerked back. Looked at the photo directly. Blurred again.

I told myself it was a trick of the light.

Day three. The footprints.

I got up for water at midnight and found them on the hardwood floor of the living room. Small, bare footprints. Child-sized. They started at the front door and tracked across the rug, through the dining room, and down the hallway toward Liam's bedroom. Wet. I knelt down and touched the edge of one—cold, damp, and the smell. God, the smell. That same sweet, stagnant rot. Like the water in a tide pool where something's been decomposing for weeks. Like the ocean back in that cove.

I followed them. They led all the way to Liam's room, and that's when my stomach dropped.

The footprints stopped three feet from his bed. Just stopped. The last one was perfectly intact, as if whoever made them had simply ceased to exist, or as if they'd been lifted from that spot and placed somewhere else. Somewhere without footprints.

I checked Liam. He was asleep—or his eyes were closed, his chest rising and falling in slow rhythm. Normal. Except his hands were folded neatly on his chest the way you'd position a body in a casket, and his room was freezing. My breath didn't fog, but it should have.

I didn't sleep again that night.

Day four. Mom and Dad stopped humoring me.

I showed Mom the photos. She looked at them, tilted her head, and said, "Honey, they look fine to me." I showed her the footprints. By then they'd dried to faint salt rings, and she said the dog from next door probably got in. We don't have a dog door. The neighbors don't have a dog.

"Maybe you should talk to someone," she said, not unkindly. "You seem really on edge. It could be stress. You know, post-vacation blues."

"Mom, there is something wrong with Liam."

Her face hardened. "Liam is fine. He's adjusting to being back. Kids need routine, and we disrupted his. You're projecting."

"DID YOU SEE HIM LAST NIGHT? He was standing in the hallway at three in the morning like a—"

"I'm scheduling you an appointment with Dr. Reeves." Her voice was steel wrapped in mom-concern. "I won't have you obsessing over your brother. It's not healthy."

She walked away. I stood in the kitchen shaking, and that's when I saw it.

She was at the end of the hall, standing in front of Liam's closed door. And her face—God, her face. She was staring at the door with an expression I've never seen on another human being. Her eyes were wide, her lips parted, her skin the color of old paper. She looked terrified. Not concerned, not confused—primal, prey-animal terror, the kind of fear that paralyzes.

She stood there for ten seconds. Then her face went blank, smooth as a mask, and she turned and walked to her bedroom like nothing had happened.

She saw something. She knows. And whatever it is, it won't let her say it.

Day five. My phone.

I was scrolling through my photos, looking for the ones from the trip—trying to find a picture of that cove, that cave, something to anchor me to reality—when I found the folder.

It was at the bottom of my gallery, timestamped starting the night we got back. Thirty-seven photos I didn't take.

They were all from inside Liam's closet. The slatted doors, the view through the narrow gaps between the wood. They showed his room at night. His bed. His small form under the blankets, sleeping. Photo after photo after photo, all taken between 1:00 AM and 4:00 AM, all from the same angle. My phone had been on my nightstand. Charging. I'm a light sleeper. I would've heard someone take it.

I swiped to the last photo and my skin tried to crawl off my body.

It was the same angle—the closet, looking out at Liam's bed—but in the foreground, resting on the edge of the closet door's interior frame, was a hand. Small. Pale. The fingers were too long, the joints sitting wrong, bending slightly in directions fingers shouldn't bend. The skin had a translucent quality, like something that lives where light doesn't reach. It wasn't Liam's hand. It wasn't anyone's hand.

It was the hand of whatever was holding my phone.

I deleted the photos. My hands were shaking so badly I dropped the phone twice. When I checked my gallery an hour later, they were back. Every single one.

That night—last night—at 2:14 AM, I woke up unable to breathe.

Something was sitting on my chest. Heavy. So heavy. I opened my eyes, and Liam was straddling me, his knees pinning my arms. He was looking down at me, and his eyes—his eyes were open but empty. Like glass marbles pushed into dough. No recognition. No Liam behind them.

He leaned down until his face was an inch from mine. His breath smelled like brine and something older, something that made my hindbrain scream.

"Remember when you almost drowned when you were eight?" he whispered, and the voice was his but also not his—layered, doubled, like two people speaking in imperfect unison. "The water was so cold. It filled your lungs. We remember."

I couldn't move. I couldn't scream. All I could do was stare up at my little brother and feel the cold spreading through my chest like I was back in that pool, going under, the chlorine burning my throat—

He blinked. Life flooded back into his eyes. He looked confused, then embarrassed. "Sorry. Bad dream." He climbed off me and shuffled back to his room, and I lay there gasping, tears running into my ears.

I almost drowned at the YMCA pool when I was eight. I never told anyone. It was my secret, my shameful near-death that I buried so deep I barely admitted it to myself. Liam was a baby when it happened. He couldn't know.

But it could.

Tonight. The whispers.

I couldn't take it anymore. The not-knowing. The gaslighting. The slow rot of my own certainty. At 1:30 AM, I crept to Liam's door and pressed my ear against the wood.

He was whispering. That much I expected. But what I heard nearly broke me.

It was Liam's voice, yes. And underneath it, layered like harmony in a song no one should sing, was my voice. My own voice, reciting my fears in a singsong tone. "I'm afraid of the dark because I think something watches me sleep. I'm afraid I'll die alone and no one will notice. I'm afraid of the ocean because I can't see what's below." Every private, wretched terror I've never spoken aloud, poured out in my own voice through my little brother's lips.

I threw the door open.

Liam sat cross-legged on the bed, hands in his lap. The room was empty. Just him, the covered mirror, and the faint smell of low tide. He blinked at me, sleepy and sweet.

"Just talking to my friend," he said, yawning. "He says you're a good sister. He wants to meet you soon."

My mouth opened. Nothing came out. I backed into the hall and ran to the attic and grabbed the old nanny cam Mom never returned—the one from when Liam was a toddler. It's small, wireless, connects to my phone. I set it on the top shelf of his closet behind a stack of board games, aiming it at the bed.

I told myself I'd watch the feed. I told myself I'd get proof. I told myself then someone would have to believe me.

I watched the footage live for an hour. Nothing. Liam sleeping. The closet door cracked open. Normal. I dozed off with my phone in my hand.

At 3:33 AM, a notification woke me. Motion detected.

I opened the feed.

Liam's body was rising from the bed. Not sitting up—not a kid getting up. Rising. Like something was lifting him by the sternum. His arms dangled, his head lolled back, and his body folded upward in a way that made me gag because spines don't bend like that, joints shouldn't hinge in those directions. He hung in the air for a moment, suspended like a marionette whose puppeteer was testing the strings.

Then his shadow peeled off the wall.

I'm not being poetic. It peeled. It detached from the shadow his body cast and crawled—vertebra by vertebra, like a spider made of darkness—up the wall and across the ceiling. It moved wrong. Too many joints. Limbs that bent where there shouldn't be knees. It stopped at the corner of the room, and I swear to God, it looked at the camera.

The closet door swung open. Not violently—slowly, like it was being pushed by breath. Behind it was black. Not the black of an unlit closet—black. A void that had texture, depth. It pulsed. It breathed, that wet inhale I'd been hearing in the walls, and the darkness expanded and contracted like lungs.

And then Liam's head turned toward the camera.

He was still floating. His head turned—rotated—on his neck. Not the way a head is supposed to turn. He kept turning past the point where a neck should snap, kept rotating until he was facing the camera directly, and he was smiling that smile. The wide one. The one with too many teeth and no teeth.

And the voice—the double voice, his and not-his—spoke directly into the camera, directly to me:

"We see you watching. Come play. You promised we could all be together."

The head kept turning. Full rotation. Past 360 degrees. And still that smile.

The feed cut to static.

I threw the phone. I heard it crack against the wall. I didn't care. I was on the floor of my room, hyperventilating, my whole body shaking so hard I bit through my lip.

The nanny cam is in pieces on my floor now. But before I smashed it, I checked the footage one last time. The recording was corrupted—static, noise, broken frames. Except for one frame. One single, crystal-clear frame.

My own face. Eyes wide, mouth open in a silent scream. But I'm not in the closet. I'm not in Liam's room. I'm somewhere dark and wet, and the thing behind me in the frame has its arms around my shoulders, and it's smiling.

I don't remember that. I don't remember that happening.

But I found the note.

After I smashed the camera, I went to my desk to find something—anything—to ground me. In my top drawer, under my journal, in handwriting that is unmistakably mine, was a note.

"You said yes at the beach. You said you'd trade places to save him. The trade is almost done."

I don't remember writing it. I don't remember saying yes. But I remember the cove. I remember finding Liam at the mouth of that cave, and I remember—God, God—I remember feeling something brush my ankle in the water. I remember a voice, low and wet and ancient, saying, "The short one is open. But the tall one is stronger. Choose."

And I remember thinking, so clearly, so desperately: Not him. Anything but him. Take me instead if you have to take someone.

I said yes. I said yes, and I forgot. And whatever came back from that beach has been wearing me during the hours I can't account for, filling my phone with photos, writing notes in my handwriting, living in my body while the real me—while the part of me that's writing this—has been blind to it.

That's why the footprints stopped. They weren't walking to Liam.

They were walking back from wherever I've been going.

It's almost 5:00 AM now. I can hear Liam's door opening. The soft footsteps in the hall.

But this time, I'm not going to watch through a camera or listen through a door. I'm going to confront it. I have to. If I made a deal, I'll unmake it. If there's a way to save Liam—really save him, pull him back from whatever has been wearing him like a coat—then it's in that room. In that mirror he covered.

I can hear my own voice coming from down the hall. Singing. That singsong tone, reciting my fears, laughing between verses.

I'm going to post this now. If I don't update, you'll know why.

And if you're reading this and you live near the coast—any coast—don't go to the coves at low tide. Don't look into the caves. And if something asks you to choose, don't answer. Don't answer, don't answer, don't—

He's at my door.

[UPDATE — I'm adding this part after. I don't know how long I've been sitting here. It might be minutes. It might be hours. But I need to finish this before I can't anymore.]

I went into Liam's room.

The towel had fallen from the mirror—it was on the floor, crumpled, like it had been pulled down. The mirror was uncovered, and the room was bathed in that pre-dawn gray that makes everything look like a photograph of itself.

Liam was standing in front of the mirror. Not the real Liam. The reflection. The real Liam was—I think the real Liam was—

The reflection was wearing his body like an outfit. Smiling that smile. And when I stepped up beside it, I looked at my own reflection, and my reflection was smiling too.

Not my smile. That wide, lipless, toothless grin. My reflection's eyes were wrong. Too knowing. Too old. And behind my reflection—behind me in the glass—stood a shape. Tall. Too tall. Limbs folding and unfolding with too many joints, a silhouette that seemed to be made of the darkness between stars, and it was pressing its face against the back of my reflection's head like a lover.

It spoke with my voice.

"You were the strong one, so we chose you. Liam is just the door. You're the house."

And then I heard the real voice. Liam's real voice. Small. Terrified. Coming from inside the mirror, muffled, like he was trapped behind glass in a room that was filling with water.

"Help me, please. It's so dark in here. Why did you leave me? Why did you leave me?"

I could see him in the glass—behind the reflection, behind the thing wearing my face. My little brother, pounding on the inside of the mirror, his fists leaving ripples on the surface like the glass was water. His face was streaked with tears and something darker—seawater, brine, black as the void in his closet.

He was drowning in there. He's been drowning since the beach, and I didn't even know.

I pressed my hand to the mirror.

The surface rippled. Not like glass—like water. Cold water. It closed around my fingers, my palm, my wrist. And from the other side, my reflection's hand—the thing's hand—reached through and gripped me with a strength that crushed bone. It pulled. I pulled back. The glass rippled and stretched and I felt cold, salt water close over my head, filling my nose, my throat, my lungs, and the last thing I heard before everything went dark was Liam screaming my name and that double-voiced laugh—

I woke up on the floor of Liam's room.

Mom found me this morning, asleep on the rug next to his bed, and said I looked peaceful. She smoothed my hair and asked if I had a nightmare. Liam was sitting at the kitchen table eating pancakes, and he smiled at me—his real smile, the one with the gap in his teeth—and said, "Good morning."

Everything is normal. The photos are fine. The mirror is covered again. My phone gallery is empty. The footprints are gone.

But I'm writing this because something is wrong with my hands. When I type, my fingers bend just a little too far. And when I look in the mirror—any mirror—my reflection blinks a half-second after I do.

And last night, while I was brushing my teeth, I heard my own voice come out of my mouth without me speaking: "The house is warm. We like it here."

Mom says I look peaceful.

She doesn't know I'm still screaming inside.

I'll update if anything changes. But I have a feeling it won't.

I think this is just how it is now.

We like it here.

I tried drawing that one image of Smile Dog Hopefully Y'all Like it because I'm still deciding if I liked how I drew it or not 😅

u/issiah06 — 2 days ago
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Camp Hallowed Grounds pt 1

Hello, my name is Jerry. I’ve been a devout Christian all my life, which means I spent most summers at church camp. Looking back now, there was always something wrong with that place. Not obvious when you’re a kid, of course. Kids ignore things adults would run from. But sometimes I think the camp counted on that.

The place was called Hallowed Grounds.

The first strange thing I remember happened when I was in third grade.

My parents dropped me off the same way they always did. Mom leaned out the driver-side window and smiled while Dad unloaded my duffel bag from the trunk.

“We love you,” Mom said. “And don’t do anything stupid.”

I rolled my eyes because I was eight and thought I was way cooler than I actually was. Instead of saying I loved them back, I grabbed my stuff and sprinted toward the camp entrance before they could embarrass me anymore.

That’s when I spotted Buck standing near the registration table.

“Buck!” I yelled. “Did you play Halo 3 yet?”

His eyes lit up instantly. “Yeah! Wish you’d get Xbox Live so we could play together though.”

I shrugged. “Never gonna happen.”

My parents hated online gaming ever since my older cousin Steve made somebody so angry in a match that they somehow found our house and egged it. After that, my parents treated the internet like it was a portal straight to Hell.

“Yeah,” Buck said, grabbing his backpack. “It also sucks we live so far away. C’mon, let’s go inside.”

We carried our bags into the main cabin, and even now I can still picture it perfectly. The building was massive, two stories tall with dark wooden beams and huge stained-glass windows that made the sunlight look red and gold across the floor. The first floor had the dining hall and chapel, while the second floor had games, bunk rooms, and an old rec area with broken arcade machines and a pool table missing half its balls.

But the outside was what everyone loved most.

Behind the cabin sat a huge lake wrapped in thick forest. There were trails everywhere, winding between trees so tall they blocked out the sky in some places. Off to the side were the animal pens: goats, chickens, horses, rabbits, and pigs, the camp let us feed and take care of as part of their “responsibility lessons.”

Buck nudged me with a grin.

“I can’t wait to see the animals. I love the pigs, especially Peaches.”

Everybody loved Peaches.

She was this fat little potbellied pig with muddy pink skin and floppy ears that twitched whenever you scratched her head. The counselors treated her more like a dog than a farm animal. She followed people around, rolled over for belly rubs, and would sometimes wander into the chapel if someone forgot to latch the gate.

We went to the main area to be oriented in the camp, led by the main man himself, Pastor Florence, 6 ft tall with brown hair and a handlebar mustache. He was the coolest guy (other than my dad) that I have ever met. 

“Everyone, settle down!”

We all sit down immediately, all waiting in anticipation for what the plans will be for the day. There couldn’t have been more than 30 of us, but when Florence talks, our asses listened. 

“Important announcement: the animal pens are off limits today since our local vet is visiting today to check on them. We don’t want anyone to bother her.”

We all groaned in unison. The animals were the best part about camp, and I have to wait till tomorrow to see them. A girl stood up from her table. She had red hair and freckles and was honestly super cute.

“This place is a prison!!” 

“Oh, be quiet, Sidney, we have plenty to do around here besides animals.”

She sat back in her chair, clearly upset 

As Buck and I headed toward the pens, I remember hearing the chapel bell ring somewhere behind us.

Three slow chimes.

The woods around the lake suddenly went quiet.

No birds.

No wind.

Nothing.

Buck stopped walking. “Did you hear that?”

I nodded.

At the edge of the tree line, just past the fence behind the pig pen, something moved between the trees.

At first, I thought it was a deer.

Then it stood up.

We froze, we didn’t know what to do 

The thing standing in the trees was tall. Too tall.

Its body looked wrong somehow, like its arms and legs bent in places they shouldn’t. Through the gaps between the trees, I could see pale skin stretched tight over something unnaturally thin. It stood perfectly still, half-hidden in the shadows, staring directly at us.

Buck whispered, “What the hell is that?”

I didn’t answer.

I couldn’t.

Even at eight years old, every instinct in my body was screaming at me to run.

Then Peaches squealed.

The sound exploded from somewhere behind the pig pen, sharp and terrified. The creature’s head snapped toward the noise so fast it looked unnatural, like a bird spotting prey.

And then it dropped back onto all fours.

I still remember the sound it made when it moved.

Not footsteps.

Cracking.

Like tree branches snapping one after another.

Buck grabbed my arm. “Jerry, RUN!”

We bolted.

I nearly dropped my bag as we sprinted away from the fence line. Behind us, something heavy tore through the brush. Leaves shook violently. Branches whipped back and forth. Whatever was chasing us moved fast—way too fast.

Kids near the cabin started yelling as Buck and I burst from the trail.

Pastor Florence stepped off the chapel porch. “What’s going on?”

“There’s something in the woods!” Buck shouted.

Before Florence could answer, the screaming started near the animal pens.

Not playful screaming.

Real screaming.

Adults started running toward the noise while the campers crowded together in confusion. One of the counselors grabbed my shoulders hard enough to hurt.

“What did you boys see?”

“I-I don’t know,” I stammered. “It stood up like a person—”

A horrible squealing cut through the camp.

Peaches.

Then suddenly silence again.

Pastor Florence’s expression changed instantly. The calm smile he always wore vanished like somebody flipped a switch.

“All campers inside,” he barked. “NOW.”

Nobody argued.

The counselors rushed us into the main cabin while Florence and three other adults sprinted toward the pens carrying flashlights and something long wrapped in cloth. At the time, I thought maybe it was farm equipment.

Now I know they were rifles.

Inside the chapel, every kid was talking at once. Some were crying. Sidney sat beside me, clutching her knees to her chest.

“You really saw something?” she asked quietly.

Buck nodded immediately. “It was huge.”

“You’re lying.”

“I’m not!”

I looked toward the stained-glass windows facing the woods.

Outside, the sun was starting to set, turning the lake orange red.

And for just a second, I saw a shape standing between the trees near the shoreline.

Watching the chapel.

Watching us.

Then one of the counselors pulled the curtains shut.

An hour later, Pastor Florence returned alone.

Mud covered his boots up to his knees.

One side of his shirt was torn.

He stood at the front of the chapel silently for a moment before smiling at all of us again, though now the smile looked forced.

“Good news, everybody,” he said. “There’s nothing to worry about. A black bear wandered close to the animal pens, but we scared it off.”

A few nervous laughs spread through the room.

Buck leaned close to me. “That was not a bear.”

I nodded slowly.

Because I noticed something nobody else did.

Pastor Florence’s hands were shaking.

And behind him, through the tiny window in the chapel door, I could see two counselors dragging a large tarp toward the barn.

Something underneath it was still moving.

The rest of the morning felt wrong after that.

Even though Pastor Florence acted calm again, nobody really believed the whole “bear” story. Not after the screams. Not after the way the counselors kept whispering to each other whenever they thought we weren’t paying attention.

Lunch was worse.

Usually the dining hall was loud—kids throwing crackers, arguing about video games, counselors yelling for people to stop standing on benches—but that day everyone talked quieter than normal. Like we were all waiting for something.

Buck stabbed at his mashed potatoes. “You think Peaches is okay?”

I shrugged even though I’d been wondering the same thing all day.

Across from us, Sidney leaned closer.

“You two really saw something in the woods, didn’t you?”

Buck answered immediately. “Yes.”

“It looked at us,” I added quietly.

Sidney glanced around to make sure nobody was listening. “I heard one of the counselors crying outside the girls’ cabin earlier.”

Buck frowned. “Why?”

“She said something got into the pens.”

That made my stomach drop.

Before either of us could answer, Pastor Florence stood from the staff table.

“Alright, everyone,” he announced, clapping his hands together. “Free time until evening service. Stay away from the forest trails and remember the animal area is still closed.”

A chorus of groans filled the dining hall.

The second Florence sat back down; Sidney smirked at us.

“We should go anyway.”

Buck blinked. “What?”

“To the pens,” she whispered. “Obviously.”

I nearly choked on my drink. “Are you insane?”

“You want to know what happened to Peaches or not?”

Buck looked at me.

I looked at Buck.

And honestly? We were already thinking it.

Sidney grinned when she saw our expressions. “Thought so.”

Ten minutes later, the three of us slipped away from the main cabin while everyone else headed toward the lake or basketball court. We cut behind the chapel and followed the fence line toward the barns.

The deeper we went, the quieter it got.

Even the cicadas had stopped buzzing.

Buck kept glancing toward the woods. “I hate this.”

“You’re the one who wanted to come,” I whispered back.

“No, Sidney wanted to come. I’m just dumb enough to follow.”

Sidney rolled her eyes. “You boys are dramatic.”

The animal pens came into view through the trees.

At first glance, everything looked normal.

The goats wandered around chewing grass. Chickens pecked at the dirt. A horse shifted nervously inside its stable.

But then I noticed the pig pen.

The gate hung crooked.

One of the wooden boards had been completely shattered inward.

Buck stopped walking. “Oh no.”

We hurried closer.

Mud covered the ground inside the pen like something had churned the earth up during a fight. Deep marks carved through the dirt, too big to be footprints but too narrow to be tire tracks.

And Peaches was gone.

Sidney frowned. “Maybe they moved her.”

Then Buck pointed silently toward the far end of the enclosure.

There were dark stains splattered across the fence.

Even at eight years old, I knew what blood looked like.

Nobody spoke for a second.

Then we heard movement coming from the barn.

Slow scraping.

Like something heavy dragging across wood.

Buck grabbed my sleeve hard enough to hurt. “Jerry…”

The barn door was slightly open.

And from the darkness inside, something breathed back at us.

None of us moved.

The breathing from inside the barn was wet and uneven, like whatever was in there had something stuck in its throat.

Buck whispered, “Tell me that’s a cow.”

“There are no cows here,” Sidney muttered.

Another scraping sound echoed from inside.

Then came a soft snort.

For one brief second, relief washed over me.

“Peaches?” I called quietly.

The breathing stopped.

Buck immediately looked at me like I had lost my mind. “Jerry, shut up!”

The barn door creaked wider open on its own.

Inside, sunlight barely reached past the entrance. Dust floated through thin beams of light cutting through holes in the wooden walls. I could smell hay, dirt…

…and something rotten underneath it.

Sidney stepped forward first.

“Why are you going IN?” Buck hissed.

She grabbed a nearby rake from the wall like it was a weapon. “Because if Peaches is hurt, we can’t just leave her.”

I hated admitting it, but Sidney was braver than both of us combined.

Buck grabbed a shovel with shaking hands. I picked up an old rusted lantern even though it wasn’t lit.

Together, we stepped inside.

The barn felt colder immediately.

Not normal cold.

The kind that sinks into your skin.

Our footsteps creaked against the wooden floor as we moved deeper into the darkness. Animal stalls lined the walls, most of them empty except for scattered hay and overturned buckets.

Then Buck suddenly stopped.

“Oh my God.”

I looked where he was pointing.

A massive gouge ran across the wooden wall beside one of the stalls. Four deep claw marks had shredded through the boards like they were cardboard.

Sidney crouched near the floor.

“These aren’t bear claws.”

She was right.

The marks were too long.

Too thin.

Almost human.

A low squeal suddenly echoed from somewhere deeper in the barn.

Peaches.

Alive.

We rushed toward the sound.

At the far end of the barn sat a small storage room with its door hanging halfway open. The squealing came from inside.

Buck pushed the door wider.

Peaches was there.

Tied to a support beam with thick rope.

The little pig shook violently the second she saw us, squealing harder while pulling against the ropes around her stomach.

“Oh thank God,” Sidney breathed.

I hurried forward to untie her—

—and froze.

Symbols had been carved into the floor around her.

Circles.

Crosses.

Words scratched deep into the wood.

Some looked like Bible verses.

Others looked… wrong.

Like somebody trying to copy scripture from memory and getting it horribly twisted.

Buck stared at the walls. “Who did this?”

That’s when we noticed the photographs.

Dozens of them.

Nailed all over the room.

Pictures of campers.

Counselors.

Families during drop-off.

Every single photo had the eyes scratched out.

A cold knot twisted in my stomach.

Then Sidney pointed upward slowly.

“Guys…”

We looked up.

Something was on the ceiling.

At first my brain couldn’t understand what I was seeing.

A long pale body clung upside down between the wooden rafters like a spider. Its limbs bent backward unnaturally; fingers dug deep into the beams above. Matted black hair hung over a face that looked almost human except for the mouth—too wide, filled with jagged animal teeth slick with fresh blood.

And its eyes.

Milky white.

Unblinking.

The creature smiled at us.

Then, in a perfect imitation of Pastor Florence’s voice, it whispered:

“Children shouldn’t wander after curfew.”

Buck screamed first.

Not yelled.

Screamed.

The creature dropped from the ceiling before any of us could move. It hit the wooden floor with a horrible cracking sound, limbs twisting sideways as it landed on all fours.

Peaches shrieked and thrashed against the ropes.

“RUN!” Sidney shouted.

We bolted for the barn entrance.

Behind us, claws slammed against the wood as the thing charged after us impossibly fast. I heard Buck crying while we ran, panicked sobs mixing with the sound of splintering wood.

The creature laughed.

Not its own laugh.

Mine.

Perfectly copying my voice.

“WAIT FOR ME GUYS!”

I nearly tripped hearing myself behind me.

Sidney grabbed my arm and yanked me forward. “DON’T LOOK BACK!”

We burst out of the barn into blinding sunlight.

For a second I thought we’d made it.

Then Buck slammed into something hard and fell backward into the mud.

Pastor Florence stood in front of us.

Three counselors stood beside him holding rifles.

Nobody spoke.

Buck scrambled backward on the ground, shaking violently. “IT’S IN THERE!”

Florence looked past us toward the barn doors hanging open in the wind.

His face went pale.

Then something inside the barn slammed against the walls hard enough to shake the whole building.

The counselors immediately raised their rifles.

Florence looked down at us slowly.

“You children,” he whispered, sounding genuinely terrified, “were told to stay away from this place.”

Sidney stepped in front of us. “What IS that thing?”

Another crash exploded inside the barn.

Something shrieked.

The sound almost didn’t sound human anymore.

One counselor muttered, “It’s awake again.”

Florence snapped his head toward him. “Quiet.”

I stared at Florence. “Again?”

He ignored me.

“Take the children back to the main cabin,” he ordered the counselors.

“No!” Buck shouted. “Peaches is still in there!”

At the mention of the pig’s name, Florence’s expression darkened.

“She’s gone, son.”

“But she was alive!”

“She won’t be for long.”

The barn suddenly went silent.

Completely silent.

Even the wind stopped.

Every adult there tensed instantly.

Florence slowly raised one hand toward us without taking his eyes off the barn.

“Back away,” he whispered.

A low voice drifted from inside the darkness.

“Pastor…”

It sounded exactly like a little girl.

One of the counselors began quietly praying under his breath.

The voice came again.

“Pastor Florence… please help me…”

Sidney frowned. “That sounds like Abby.”

I recognized the name immediately. Abby was one of the younger campers staying in the girls’ cabin.

Buck looked confused. “Why would she be in there?”

Florence’s voice became sharp. “Because that is NOT Abby.”

Something moved inside the doorway.

A small figure stepped into the sunlight.

At first glance, it really did look like Abby.

Same blonde hair.

Same church-camp T-shirt.

Same tiny glasses.

But her smile stretched far too wide across her face.

And her arms hung almost to her knees.

The fake Abby tilted her head.

“Why are you scared of me?” she asked sweetly.

Then every bone in her body cracked at once.

Her jaw unhinged downward impossibly far as the skin around her face split open.

Buck threw up immediately.

The counselors opened fire.

The sound of rifles exploded across the camp.

The creature shrieked and sprinted sideways so fast it blurred, climbing the side of the barn like an insect before vanishing across the roof into the trees beyond the lake.

Then silence returned.

Smoke drifted from the rifle barrels.

Nobody moved.

Finally, Pastor Florence looked at us with exhausted eyes.

“You three,” he said quietly, “have now seen something you were never supposed to see.”

Then the chapel bell rang again.

Three slow chimes.

And somewhere deep in the woods beyond the lake, dozens of voices rang back in response.

The voices in the woods sounded almost like singing.

Soft.

Distant.

Wrong.

Every counselor immediately looked toward the tree line. One of them whispered, “There’s too many this time.”

Too many.

That sentence has stuck with me for years.

Pastor Florence grabbed Buck by the shoulder and pulled him to his feet.

“Get every camper inside the chapel,” he ordered. “Lock the doors. Nobody leaves until sunrise.”

Sunrise?

At eight years old, hearing that terrified me more than the monster did.

Sidney crossed her arms. “You’re seriously not going to explain anything?”

Florence stared at her for a moment. Sweat rolled down the side of his face despite the cold air.

“You think you want answers,” he said quietly. “You don’t.”

Then he turned toward the counselors.

“Bring the lanterns out. Salt the entrances. Move the younger kids downstairs.”

One counselor hesitated. “Should we call the county sheriff?”

Florence looked genuinely offended.

“And tell them what? That scripture-eating skinwalkers are surrounding a church camp?”

Nobody answered.

That was the first time I ever heard the word skinwalker.

At the time, it meant nothing to me.

Now I wish it still didn’t.

The counselors rushed off in different directions while Florence marched us toward the chapel. The entire camp had descended into chaos. Kids were crying. Counselors were dragging boxes from storage rooms. Older campers carried candles and bags of something white I later realized was salt.

The sun was sinking fast now.

And the woods around the lake were getting darker than they should have been.

As we climbed the chapel steps, Buck suddenly stopped.

“Wait,” he whispered.

I followed his stare toward the forest.

Shapes stood between the trees.

Dozens of them.

Tall.

Motionless.

Watching us.

Some looked human.

Others absolutely did not.

One appeared to have antlers stretching through the branches overhead.

Another looked too thin, with arms dangling almost to the ground.

And all of them were smiling.

Sidney grabbed my sleeve tightly. “Jerry…”

One of the creatures stepped forward just enough for the fading sunlight to hit its face.

It looked exactly like Pastor Florence.

Same mustache.

Same brown hair.

Same smile.

Except its eyes were completely white.

Buck let out a terrified noise.

The fake Florence slowly lifted one finger to its lips.

Then all the figures vanished back into the woods at once.

The chapel doors slammed shut behind us.

Inside, the atmosphere was even worse.

Every window had been covered with blankets.

Candles flickered across the room.

Counselors pushed pews against the entrances while younger kids sobbed into their sleeping bags.

It no longer felt like church camp.

It felt like a bunker.

Pastor Florence walked to the altar and removed something from underneath it wrapped in black cloth.

When he pulled the cloth away, I saw an old shotgun covered in carved crosses.

Sidney blinked. “There is NO way that’s legal.”

For the first time all day, Florence actually laughed a little.

“You’d be amazed what becomes legal when monsters are real.”

Then the lights went out.

Every candle flickered violently.

And from somewhere above us—

on the chapel roof—

came the sound of footsteps.

Slow.

Heavy.

Circling.

The footsteps continued above us.

THUMP.

…THUMP.

…THUMP.

Every sound made dust drift from the ceiling beams overhead.

Nobody in the chapel dared speak.

I sat between Buck and Sidney in the front pew while Pastor Florence and the counselors stood guard near the doors and windows. Some held rifles. Others clutched crosses so tightly their knuckles turned white.

One of the younger kids started crying loudly.

Immediately, every adult in the room looked terrified.

Florence hurried toward the child’s mother and knelt beside her.

“You need to quiet him down,” he whispered urgently.

“He’s scared!”

“I know, but they listen for distress.”

The footsteps above us suddenly stopped.

Silence swallowed the chapel whole.

Then came scratching.

Long claws dragged slowly across the roof.

Buck buried his face in his hands. “I wanna go home.”

“Me too,” I whispered.

Sidney stared upward without blinking. “How many of them are out there?”

Nobody answered her.

A counselor near the window slowly pulled back the blanket covering the glass just enough to peek outside.

The color drained from his face instantly.

“Pastor…”

Florence walked over carefully. “What is it?”

The counselor swallowed hard. “They’re standing at the edge of the lake.”

Florence looked through the gap in the blanket.

For the first time since I’d met him, he looked truly afraid.

Then something tapped on the chapel door.

Three slow knocks.

Every adult froze.

Another knock came.

Then a voice.

“Pastor Florence?”

Buck’s eyes widened. “That’s Abby again.”

“No,” Sidney whispered. “That’s not Abby.”

The voice came again, sweeter this time.

“Please let me inside. I’m cold.”

A younger camper stood from the pews. “Abby!”

Before he could move, Florence grabbed him hard.

“DO NOT open that door.”

The thing outside began softly crying.

“I don’t understand why you’re being mean to me…”

The crying sounded painfully real.

Too real.

I could hear some of the younger kids starting to sob with it.

Then the voice changed.

Not suddenly.

Slowly.

Like a radio station drifting out of signal.

Abby’s voice deepened into something wet and monstrous underneath.

“Let…me…in…”

The chapel doors shook violently.

BANG.

Kids screamed.

Another slam hit the doors hard enough to splinter the wood.

BANG.

Dust fell from the ceiling beams.

One counselor raised his rifle. “It’s trying to break through!”

Florence shook his head immediately. “No. It’s testing us.”

Another voice suddenly called from outside.

Then another.

And another.

Within seconds, dozens of voices surrounded the chapel.

Some sounded like campers.

Some sounded like parents.

One sounded exactly like my dad.

“Jerry!” the voice shouted from outside. “Open the door, buddy!”

Every hair on my body stood up.

Buck looked at me. “That sounds exactly like him.”

“I know.”

Then my mother’s voice joined in.

“We came to pick you up, sweetheart!”

I almost stood up automatically before Sidney grabbed my wrist.

“That’s not your parents.”

Outside, the fake voices kept talking over each other.

“Please let us in!”

“We’re hurt!”

“They’re attacking us!”

“Jerry!”

“Buck!”

“Sidney!”

The creatures knew our names.

The realization hit all three of us at once.

Buck started crying again.

Florence stepped into the center aisle holding the shotgun tightly.

“Everyone listen to me,” he said loudly. “No matter what you hear tonight, no matter whose voice calls for you… DO NOT answer them.”

Another violent slam hit the doors.

This time the lights overhead flickered back on for half a second.

And in that tiny flash of light—

I saw something hanging upside down from the stained-glass window above the altar.

A pale face pressed against the glass from the outside.

Smiling directly at me.

I couldn’t breathe.

The thing outside the stained-glass window looked human at first glance, but the longer I stared, the more wrong it became. Its neck was too long. Its smile stretched too far back across its face. Thin black veins pulsed beneath pale skin like worms moving under paper.

And its eyes—

completely white.

The lights died again.

Darkness swallowed the chapel.

Kids screamed as the room erupted into panic. Counselors shouted over each other while flashlights flickered on one by one.

Then came the sound of breaking glass.

Everyone looked up.

A crack spread across the stained-glass window above the altar.

Another crack followed.

Then another.

The creature outside slowly pressed one clawed hand against the glass from the other side.

Pastor Florence raised the shotgun immediately.

“GET AWAY FROM THE WINDOWS!”

Too late.

The stained glass exploded inward.

The thing dropped into the chapel in a shower of colored glass and twisted limbs. It landed directly on top of the altar with a wet crack, crouched like a spider.

People screamed.

The creature’s head jerked around violently as it sniffed the air.

Then it smiled.

“Found you,” it whispered in my mother’s voice.

Florence fired instantly.

The shotgun blast deafened me.

The creature flew backward off the altar, slamming into the pews hard enough to splinter wood. Black blood sprayed across the floor.

For one second, I thought it was dead.

Then every broken bone in its body snapped back into place.

Buck stared in horror. “Oh my God…”

The thing lunged.

One counselor didn’t react fast enough.

The creature hit him with enough force to send both of them crashing through the pews. Screaming erupted as kids scattered everywhere.

I’ll never forget the sound that came next.

Not roaring.

Not growling.

Eating.

Florence grabbed the nearest child and shoved them toward the basement stairs beneath the chapel.

“MOVE! EVERYONE MOVE!”

Sidney grabbed my arm while Buck stumbled beside us crying.

The creature screamed behind us as more gunshots exploded through the room.

We sprinted for the basement entrance while adults fought the thing near the altar.

I glanced back once.

Big mistake.

The creature stood upright now, nearly touching the ceiling. Its jaw hung open unnaturally wide around the counselor’s head while blood poured down its chest.

And surrounding it—

more shapes crawled through the shattered stained-glass window.

At least four.

Maybe five.

One moved like a deer walking on human arms.

Another wore the stretched skin of a person like badly fitted clothing.

The basement door slammed shut behind us.

Darkness.

Heavy breathing.

Children sobbing.

Someone locked the door above us with shaking hands.

The chapel basement looked ancient, older than the rest of camp. Stone walls dripped with moisture. Shelves lined the room filled with candles, canned food, medical kits, and boxes stamped with Bible verses.

Like they had prepared for this before.

Sidney noticed it too.

“This has happened already,” she whispered.

Nobody answered her directly, but the silence told us enough.

Pastor Florence stumbled down the stairs moments later covered in blood that definitely wasn’t all his.

He slammed another lock into place before turning toward us.

“How long will the door hold?” a counselor asked.

Florence didn’t answer immediately.

That alone terrified me.

Then—

SCRAAAAAPE.

Something dragged its claws slowly across the floor above us.

More footsteps joined it.

Then more.

The ceiling creaked under the weight.

Buck stared upward, pale as paper. “There’s a lot of them…”

Florence finally looked at us kids.

And for the first time, the tough camp-pastor act completely disappeared.

“They usually only send one,” he whispered. “I don’t know why the whole forest came tonight.”

Nobody spoke after that.

The only sounds in the basement were children crying and the creatures moving above us.

Scratch.

Thump.

Scratch.

Every noise made the old ceiling groan.

Pastor Florence paced near the stairs while the counselors checked weapons and lit more candles. In the flickering light, the basement looked less like a storage room and more like some kind of underground chapel.

Crosses hung on the walls.

Salt lines circled every doorway.

Bible verses had been carved directly into the stone.

Sidney noticed something near the back wall first.

“Jerry,” she whispered. “Look.”

There were names carved into the stone.

Dozens of them.

Dates beside each one.

Some went back years.

1987. 

1988. 

1989. 

1990. 

Most of the names had crosses carved beside them.

Some didn’t.

Buck stared at the wall. “What is this?”

Pastor Florence’s expression darkened when he saw where we were looking.

“Memorials,” he said quietly.

“For who?” Sidney asked.

Florence hesitated too long.

Then a little girl nearby answered for him.

“My brother’s name is up there.”

We turned toward her.

She couldn’t have been older than six.

“He disappeared here last summer,” she continued softly. “Mom says the camp helps keep him close to God.”

The entire room went silent.

Buck looked horrified. “What does THAT mean?”

Before anyone could answer, a massive crash shook the ceiling overhead.

Dust rained down.

One of the younger counselors panicked. “They’re breaking through!”

Another crash hit.

Closer this time.

The creatures above us shrieked and scraped across the floor like animals fighting over food.

Then—

silence.

Complete silence.

Pastor Florence suddenly looked even more afraid.

“That’s worse,” he whispered.

A soft voice drifted down the stairwell above us.

“Pastor…”

Not Abby this time.

A man’s voice.

One of the counselors froze.

“David?” he whispered.

Florence grabbed him immediately. “Don’t listen to it.”

“But that’s my brother—”

“YOUR BROTHER DIED THREE YEARS AGO.”

The counselor’s face went pale.

The voice upstairs laughed softly.

Then another voice joined it.

Then another.

The creatures were talking to each other now.

Using stolen voices.

I heard my dad laughing somewhere above us.

Buck heard his mom crying.

Sidney heard somebody calling her name over and over in a gentle voice.

And somehow, they sounded more real than ever before.

One of the younger kids suddenly stood up.

“I hear my mommy.”

Before anyone could stop him, he bolted for the stairs.

His mother screamed.

The kid unlocked the first latch before Florence tackled him to the ground.

At that exact moment—

BANG.

Something slammed against the basement door from the other side.

The entire frame bent inward.

Kids screamed.

Another slam followed immediately.

BANG.

Wood splintered.

The creatures upstairs began laughing all at once.

Not human laughter.

Something deeper.

Hungrier.

Florence stood slowly, gripping the shotgun so tightly his hands shook.

“Everyone move to the prayer room,” he ordered.

A counselor stared at him. “You really think that’ll work?”

Florence looked toward the shaking basement door.

“No,” he admitted.

Then the lights overhead flickered once.

Twice.

And went black.

In the darkness, something whispered directly beside me.

“Jerry…”

I turned instinctively.

And saw Peaches standing in the corner of the basement.

Only it wasn’t Peaches anymore.

The little pig’s body looked twisted and stretched, ribs bulging beneath torn skin. Her eyes were milky white just like the others.

And when she opened her mouth—

she spoke in a human voice.

“Why did you leave me in the barn?”

 

 

 

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I’m the police chief of a small mountain town. The men we pulled from the crater should have been dead. [Part 3]

Part 1 - Part 2

I rushed back into the house, hoping that Margaret was fine.
The only noise in the house was the teapot.

I entered the kitchen and almost screamed in Margaret's face.
"MARGARET! WHAT HAPPENED?! ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!"

She slowly turned to look me in the eyes. I’d never seen someone look that empty.
Her eyes were so full of tears I could barely see her pupils.
She stood there frozen, right beside a broken cup, arms wide open as if she was trying to cover her face, but she just couldn't move.

"I'm so sorry Margaret, I'll send someone to come get Buddy, I don't want you to see him like that."

As if she was a painting, she just looked back at me.

My radio crackled.
"Chief, you there? Warren said there's something you need to see up at the crater. He sounded pretty worried."

The radio crackled again.

Margaret finally blinked.

"Go". I went. I left her there. Alone.

I got back in the car and went back where all started.

The area was completely blocked off by the local firefighters and the volunteers.
They moved the roadblocks as they saw my car coming, and Warren waved at me from afar.
I got off the car and reached him.

"Chief I... I..." he kept stuttering, I've never seen him like this.
"Get ahold of yourself Warren, why did you ask for me to come here?"
"Sorry, I'll just show you."

He stopped talking completely and I followed him as he brought me to a part of the woods near the crater.

"Something happened here. It looks like a trail of some kind." His voice shivered on every word.
"What kind of trail?"
"Death. Everything's dead. Plants. Animals. All dead and..." A pause. "Wrong."
"Show me."

We entered the forest.
I could feel the dead and grass crunching under my steps. The trees were completely leafless and gray. The trail kept changing directions, I couldn't see a pattern in it.
Then animal corpses started to appear, everywhere around the trail, not just where the dead grass was, but everywhere around it too.

"They're just like the dogs." I murmured to myself.
"What dogs, chief?"
"Mr. Harris and Margaret's. I just saw them, and they were in the same conditions as these animals. The eyes as pale as ash and torn out of their skulls."
"What the hell is going on chief? Is this some kind of chemical spill or weapon?!"
"I don't know, but let's try to keep this as quiet as possible, the only thing missing now is mass hysteria."

Warren looked ready to fall apart.
I needed him away from the trail.

"Listen Warren, I'll keep searching the area for a bit. Do me a favor and call Melanie, ask her what Barrett and Pike found. Then come report me what she tells you."
"You got it man, I'll go call her right away".

As he got back to the road I started to search for something new.
All looked the same. Just... Dead.

Until trees began to bend out of the way of the trail and ground flattened beneath my feet.
That's when I found it.

Just at eye level.
Its wings completely open.
Stuck in place.
Unable to move.

A small blue bird trapped in the middle of the air.
Like it was carved into stone.

I tried to touch it and it was cold.
It looked like it had been hanging there for hours.

I tried to move it but it wouldn't budge. It didn’t move at all.
Like the air itself was holding it there.

Everything around that bird still sounded normal.
Warren shouting somewhere near the road.
Dead leaves and grass crunching under my boots.
Water splashing in the distance.

But that thing stayed there like the world had forgotten it was supposed to fall.
And not even the wind would move its feathers.

I turned towards the road and yelled for Warren.
"WARREN! WARREN! COME I FOUND SOMETHING!"

Just as I turned back to face the bird, it fell to the ground.

"What did you find chief?"
"This... What?"
"You okay there?"
"I haven't gone this long without a drink in years. I think I'm seeing things."
"Okay... Well I heard back from Melanie and the guys. She said they're at the house of the young kid we found. And..."
"And what? Did they find anything?"
"The mother said that she last saw him with Jeremy Tom. I think you should go there."

I ran to my car and drove to Tyler's house as fast as I could.

I knocked on the door and Pike let me in.

"Good evening Ms. I heard you last saw Tyler with my son."
"Talk to me like a human being Tom, if I hear you call me Ms. one more time I'll send you beside my son." She said, her eyes were filled with rage and fear.

"I'm sorry Catherine. Truly I am. But I haven't heard from Jeremy since yesterday, and I'm really scared something might have happened to him. Do you have some idea of where they were headed?"
"They always hang out in the old house by the liquor store."
"You mean the Kennedys' house?"
"Yeah, exactly."
"Thank you so much and Cath, I promise you, I'll find out what happened."

As we walked away we could hear her cries.

Barrett and Pike followed me to the house.

"What would they even be doing out here?" Pike asked.
"Probably drinking and smoking, we're right by the Jefferson's store" Barrett answered.
"You two shut up and help me search the place." I told them.

The house had been abandoned for at least 15 years now, the Kennedys were forced to leave after the accident at the mill.
The wood floor was crooked, there were more windows than walls.

The stink of mud and bird shit filled the area. But I could still feel that constant old coin smell that seemed to follow me everywhere I went.

"Search everywhere, if you see something out of place, shout."

I started from the first floor, Pike searched the perimeter and Barrett went upstairs.

It didn't seem like anyone had been there for a long time, dust covered everything everywhere,
But that smell. I knew we would have found something.

"Chief! Pike! Come! There's something here!" Barrett screamed.

We rushed up the stairs. Barrett was pointing with his flashlight at a sealed bottle placed perfectly on a shelf in the hallway.

I recognized it immediately, it wasn't a random bottle. It was whiskey, my whiskey.

"I have to call my wife." I said to the two while my heart started to pump like a drum.
"Why? What's with the bottle?" Pike asked, confused.
"That's my whiskey, it disappeared from my kitchen this afternoon. Keep searching, but be ready for trouble."

I rushed outside and called my wife.
"Are you home?" I asked. My voice barely sounded like mine.
"Yes, why?"
"Go to your car. NOW!"
"Why? What’s going on?!” Her voice cracked immediately.
"Just go!"

A few minutes passed.

"Okay I'm in the car. What's going on? Where do I have to go?!"
"Just stay put for a moment, don't go back in, the house isn't safe."
"Why? Did someone threaten you?!"
"No... but are you sure Jeremy hasn't been home all day?"
"Yes, I told you, you were the only one coming and going all day."
"Tell me each time you saw me or heard me come or go."
"Let's see... You left for the crater, came back, then you went to the hospital, but you must have forgotten something and came back just a few minutes later, and left before I could see you. Last time I saw you or heard you it was when Monica came."

"When I left for the hospital... I didn't come back in."

Silence.

I could hear her breath through the phone. Mine too.

And for the first time since Mercer Ridge, I wasn't sure if I was the one in control.

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u/ToastWithWifi — 2 days ago

Skinwalker Source?

Me and my teammate are making a presentation on skinwalkers. And while we have more than enough data on the original Native American one, we have next to nothing on the modern internet version. (Ww doing both for comparison)

Does anyone have any sources they can recommend or give me?

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u/Humble-Passage6561 — 2 days ago

Harvest

Sometime in the 1600s

The settlers and the Native Americans fought each other to the death over food and land. That year, the soil turned sour. Crops failed. Winter was coming, and the settlers weren't willing to freeze and starve.

They slaughtered most of the native population in the area. most of the bodies were burned, their ashes scattered across the fields to enrich the poisoned earth. The bodies that were not burned were stuffed, dried, wrapped in burlap and mounted on wooden posts to stand watch over the next year’s harvest.

The fields grew again.

1992 — Thanksgiving Break

The town’s annual harvest festival buzzed with noise and neon lights. Rides spun, games clattered, and the smell of fried food drifted through the cold evening air. The carnival sat right beside the old cornfield.

At the center of it all stood the town mascot.

The Dancing Scarecrow.

It had a cheerful burlap face, stitched into a permanent smile. Its button eyes reflected the carnival lights as it swayed gently beside the stage.

Mayor Adams stepped up to the podium, tapping his microphone.

“Welcome to the 320th Harvest Festival! Tonight we celebrate what we’re thankful for—and honor the Native Americans who shared their food with our town’s founders during a harsh winter.”

A group of college students stood off to the side.

“Look at that big-nosed asshole,” Brett muttered. “Same speech as last year.”

“He’s a lazy mayor,” Diane said. “And an even lazier speechwriter.”

“I heard he was sleeping with his secretary,” Albert added. “Fired her when his wife found out.”

“Unpaid vacation,” Ethan said. “Permanent one.”

Becca laughed. “I would’ve trashed his office before leaving.”

The group snickered.

Albert said " I heard she got a job up north"

Diane glanced toward the cornfield.

“Too bad that scarecrow can’t get a job up north,” she said, pointing.

Albert shrugged. “ if it makes you feel any better, there are two more out in the field.”

Diane shivered. “Why do they keep them up all year?”

“I wouldn’t touch one to pull it down,” Brett said. “Probably diseased and digusting from bird shit.”

Later, just before sunset, they cut through the cornfield toward their dorms.

The path was narrow, the stalks tall and dry, whispering in the wind.

Albert called out, “Pregame and be ready at seven!”

7:00 PM

They returned to the festival, each slightly drunkened and laughing.

The Dancing Scarecrow greeted them at the entrance.

“Welcome! Here is some Glow sticks and don’t forget to have fun.”

Its voice sounded… off. Flat. Like it was being forced through something dry.

Albert took the glow sticks. “Thanks.”

The scarecrow didn’t respond.

The night went on.

They drank too much, rode bumper cars, and played games. Albert won Diane a stuffed animal. Becca complained Brett never did that for her.

Eventually, they returned to the scarecrow mascot for more glow sticks.

“Hey, can we get a few more?” Albert asked.

The scarecrow didn’t move.

Albert repeated himself.

Slowly—too slowly—it reached into its pocket and handed over four glow sticks.

No words.

No expression.

Just that stitched smile.

Suddenly, the stage lights flared.

Mayor Adams’ voice rang out. “I proudly present tonight’s entertainment—the Flying Acrobats!”

The performers soared on trampezes above the crowd, flipping and catching each other midair.

The crowd roared with excitement and laughter.

Kids pointed and told their parents, they wanted to try it at home.

Then a loud snap roared.

One of the ropes gave way.

Two performers plummeted.

One hit the stage screaming, his leg twisted unnaturally.

The other landed headfirst.

A sharp crack echoed through the silent crowd.

He didn’t move again.

The crowd went silent except for the fallen man. He screamed in pain.

Mayor adams told everyone to leave. The structures had been tampered with and was unstable.

The carnival was emptied quickly after that.

The lights of ambulances soared through the carnival and lit up the cornfield.

The group walked back through the cornfield, shaken and quiet.

“I don’t think he made it,” Diane whispered.

Brett suddenly vomited.

“That was… disgusting,” he said, wiping his mouth.

No one disagreed.

Halfway through the field, Albert stopped.

“Wait… where’s the scarecrow?”

The post near the path was empty.

The group exchanged uneasy glances.

Then—

“There.”

Brett pointed.

The Dancing Scarecrow stood ahead of them, between the rows of corn.

“What the hell are you doing here?” Brett called.

No answer.

Albert stepped forward. “Quit messing around.”

He shoved it.

The burlap mask slipped off.

Underneath—

A mummified face wrapped in old burlap

No mouth.

Just dark, hollow eyes.

“What the fuck—”

The corn rustled.

Two more scarecrows emerged.

Before anyone could react, one grabbed Becca. She screamed.

Brett swung, landing a punch—but another scarecrow drove something sharp into his side.

He gasped.

Then they dragged him into the corn.

“BRETT!” Becca screamed.

Albert grabbed her arm. “Run!”

They ran blindly through the field, crashing through stalks, losing the path.

Diane tripped and fell.

Albert turned back—

Too late.

A scarecrow drove a blade into her back.

She coughed blood as it dragged her away into the darkness.

Albert and Becca barely made it back to the dorms.

They called the police.

Search parties combed the field.

They found nothing but blood… and pieces.

The police blamed Clarence Darby—the man hired to play the Dancing Scarecrow.

They said he sabotaged the trapeze stadium, then killed the students while wearing a mask.

Becca and Albert insisted there were multiple scarecrows.

The police didn’t believe them.

They were drunk. Unreliable.

And hell would be made if they spoke about it again.

Clarence Darby was never found either.

The following year, the cornfield stood tall again.

And in the middle of it—

Three new scarecrows watched over the harvest.

u/purple_fucker — 2 days ago