u/Embarrassed_Spite546

Took me two days to build, but that's because I had work and sleep to do between sessions of building.

Stabbed myself a few times on her arm claws too, wicked sharp they are.

I'm also looking for a Beta reader/potential Co-author for a Zoids Fanfic I started from a wildly vivid dream, that later turned into a request for a longer fic, I'm not the best at dialogue or action scenes, so feedback and suggestions on how to improve a scene or dialogue would be appreciated.

(build pics from my old liger zero for engagement)

Hey! So I've been commissioned to write a fanfic story that involves two Liger Zero in a battle at least once, I'll add a snippet for context of where I'm stuck at the end, and I'd appreciate a bit of help figuring out how to progress the sequence as I'm not the best at fight scenes... And I refuse to use "that which must not be named" just because I have writers block... And I don't want the fight to be too short or clunky... Please advise?

• snippet (and with the call to fight the two Ligers pounced forward into action, the light gleaming off the golden plates of armour that Hunter's Liger wore in stark contrast to th**e standard Helic republic silver/white of Bit's. The twin Ligers raced forward, triggering their booters to gain speed in a direct line to each other until they finally met in a titainic clash, biting and clawing, both trying their best to get the upperhand in the brawl. Bit and his Liger were the first to break away and start to circle the other Zoid, superficial level damage coating his Zoid's armour as it shook itself off and they prepared to charge back in.

The two lion type Zoids broke off from one another, and Bit took the opportunity to circle back and charge in with his boosters on full burn, the white flames of the thrust growing bright as the Liger raced forward at max speed for the base armour. The indicator for a Strike Laser Claw popped up on the HUD, showing Bit what Liger wanted to do, he grinned his signature smirk are he focused in. "You got it bud! Let's go! Strike! Laser! Claaaaaawwww!"

the attack looked like it was on target, the Gold Liger still in the motions of turning to start their own charge,)

Some rules before we start:

•Romance is on the table(Celeste is a lesbian, so women OCs definitely preferred.) leave a 💜 in the comments if you wanna romance her.

No R18 🔞 stuff in the public comments, if you want R18 ask and I’ll see about taking it to DMs.

•This is preferably a non-combat situation, but if it must come to that, she’s a Cleric/Druid so she’s got plenty of healing and divine spells, along with the ability to turn into wild animals and fantasy creatures.

•BE POLITE, BE NICE, AND IF I SEE ANY RUDE COMMENTS I WILL REPORT YOU AND BLOCK YOU.

Other than that, hope you have fun and I’ll respond when I can!

During your OC’s travels they come across the doors to a Tavern that was never there before in their familiar haunts, should they enter they will see there is a man behind the bar casually wiping a cup with a clean rag while humming a light tune, how do they interact?

**Rules:

1. Start the chat with the 😈 emoji. I won’t answer otherwise.
2. Romance is allowed, but not likely, he is het, but not really all that aware.
3. Combat is allowed, note: he is very OP any combat will be non-lethal to OCs and be treated as more of a workout/spar to Nicklaus.
4. Be nice, in character it’s fine to be a bit rude, but no cussing or being a complete jerk OOC, in character: try not to go overboard.

*Bio: Nicklaus KungsVarg
Former Cursed Half-demon warrior and adventurer Nicklaus is the child of a demon-god, Luciferius D. Satanian: the hidden true origin of demon kind, and brother of the one that goes by “God.” In most religions. Half of his power was sealed by a twelve point cage made with holy relics melted down and their power and fragments of his own personality and soul fused to form distinct entities within his mindscape, a fragment of his demonic power developed into its own persona as well, only released when Nicklaus was on the verge of a true death. Once Nicklaus conquered his power and remerged his disparate soul into a single whole again, after killing a slew of corrupted pantheons, he became: the god of heroes, the son of the dawn, and the god slayer. Conversely he is also known as the drake of the end, the red eyed dealmaker, and the child of darkness, As he is two sides of the same coin all in one form. He now runs an interdimensional Tavern that hops from universe to universe, reality to reality, making Deals helping destined heroes and serving warm food and a safe bed. All with an Ever Present Cup of Hot Beverage.

“I don’t only seek the heroic, at least not those that are already heroes. I find myself drawn often to those that could be heroes, or the disparate and the ones in need of a helping hand…. Or a Deal to get them started.. for some it comes at a cost, one that is always fair, but too often not one they wish to pay. Are you one such soul who wishes for a Deal?”*