What if Carrie from Sex and the City was in Mortal Kombat (Feedback request)
Just looking to get some specific thoughts on this writing exercise.
What if: Carrie from Sex and The City was in Mortal Kombat
As I ripped Sub Zero's spine out from the hole I had punched through his ribcage I couldn't help wondering how this would affect my relationship with Big?
Sub Zero screamed for mercy as his midsection collapsed into itself like an accordion. I started to wonder if Miranda had been right and by taking part in this death tournament between realms I was really just avoiding my issues with Big. I had asked him to be here and he wasn’t, just as the girls had predicted. I knew after I was finished tearing out Sub Zero’s spine I would have to face the fact that my boyfriend chose not to see me as I really am. My friends would say I told you so, Big would say I really wanted to be there, and I would have to say I was wrong about us. These were moments that would have to happen but I was not looking forward to them. I suppose that doesn’t excuse me for intentionally drawing out Sub Zero’s demise.
“Why are you drawing this out?! Please just kill me quickly” shouted Sub Zero.
“I’m sorry for not killing you faster, it’s just that I think I have to break up with my boyfriend after this and it’s just going to be really awkward” said Carrie
“Break ups are just the absolute worst but you have to do what’s best for you” said Sub Zero clearly struggling to remain conscious.
“Awww, thank you so much for saying that Sub Zero”
I decided that Sub Zero was right, I had drawn this out long enough to avoid pain but no longer. With one hard yank I ripped out his spine. Blood and viscera sprayed out everywhere, completely ruining my cute new outfit, and Sub Zero soon bled out and died. I looked to the audience, I still didn’t see my boyfriend. The crowd seemed to be waiting for me to do something. I awkwardly displayed my enemies spine over my head while striking a victory pose. I had survived mortal combat. Being a woman in the big city it can be hard to assert yourself especially when dealing with a murderous cryomancer from the Lin Kuei clan. But if I could stand up to a murderous cryomancer from the Lin Kuei clan maybe I could stand up for myself and survive another break up.
I guess I had expected applause or maybe some clapping. What I got was silence. But then as my smile started to wane I heard it. Cheering from the backrow. I knew it was coming from the three best friends a gal could ask for.
"Can't say I'm going to miss him, did you know last week he gave me the cold shoulder" remarked Samantha.
"It's about time she got a spine" quipped Miranda.
"Okay that's me, thanks everyone for showing up" said Carrie to the crowd.
"Very well Carrie of Earth Realm" shouted Shao Khan ruler of Outworld and conqueror of realms.
"But before you depart I demand you tell me.... where you got those 4 inch pumps? They are simply fabulous" said Shao Khan.