u/Exotic-Abroad8131

I use a translator for this, so there may be mistakes.

As the title suggests, I'm interested in what flaws your chapters have. Below, I'm sharing the flaws in my recently formed chapter, "NIGHT BLOOD," which was founded during the 21st foundation. I'm also interested in what flaws other chapters that were founded during the "Cursed Funding"

As a result of the Ossmodula mutation, their fangs are noticeably elongated and sharpened.

As a result of the Haemastamen mutation, their blood, which is still rich in oxygen, has an unnaturally dark color, and in poor lighting, it often appears pitch-black.

As a result of the Omophagea mutation, marines exhibit a blood hunger, which can be replaced by sensing hormones produced during fear. If an Astartes has stable access to one of these things, there is no problem, but if they lack it for a prolonged period, they will fall into a "terror hunger," during which the Astartes loses all tactical thought and thinks only of inflicting the greatest pain possible, in the most horrific way possible, turning into a true psychopath. This state persists until the Astartes kills everyone present or dies.

Due to mutations in the Occulobe, their vision is highly sensitive and acute, allowing them to see in zero-light conditions as well as in low-light conditions, and in low-light conditions as well as during normal daylight. However, this means that if an Astartes is exposed to normal lighting without any protective vision, they will suffer severe damage. Additionally, Astartes are capable of entering "hunter mode," during which they see in infrared.

Due to severe mutations in the Sus-an Membrace, this organ becomes completely inoperable, preventing them from entering sleep mode when near death.

Due to mutations in the Melanchromic Organ, their skin takes on a very pale color, their hair falls out completely, and in rare cases, what hair remains turns black. Additionally, their eyes turn black, and the whites of their eyes disappear, rendering them completely black.

Due to mutations in Betcher's Gland, none of the Astartes are able to speak above a whisper. Therefore, the Astartes always use a speaker in their helmets to sound normal.

Additionally, throughout the Space Marine creation process, candidates can "experience" their own deaths through a vivid vision of how they will die. This causes candidates' minds to break, and they often die, further complicating the process.

However, many of these mutations are unnoticeable because Chapter members rarely remove their helmets in the presence of strangers.

Now I'm waiting to see and read about flaws in your Chapters.

The First World War was won by the Central Powers. After the war, revolution broke out in Great Britain, and the royal family fled to Canada. Socialists rose up in France and seized power. In the Balkans, Bulgaria became the dominant country. In the USA, political instability led to another civil war. This is the world of the Kaiserreich, in a nutshell.

The scenarios presented below are taken from the official series on the channel "Kaiser Cat Cinema." The following scenarios can be adapted in any way, as this entire world is one large alternative scenario.

If you're unfamiliar with this world but are interested, feel free to contact me and I'll explain anything you'd like.

—

Chicago 1940

*Static voice from radio*

“Washington has fallen, Union President Howard Langdon has declared victory in the former capital. This final victory is a fatal blow to the remaining Federal forces on the Eastern Shore.

General McAllister, leader of the Western Democratic forces, is missing and now presumed dead.

The growing victories of the Union states are putting increasing pressure on the Combined Syndicalists in the north. Within the Combined Syndicalists, fighting among leftist groups has sparked protests following the dramatic bombing of the Chicago Board of Trade. Many blame infighting within the Syndicalist government as the reason for the lack of progress in the war. Many factions propose more radical changes to the government.

Chicago, after losing its ports on the Peninsula and being blockaded by the Canadian government, is surviving on the last of its fuel and food. And the city may be reaching its breaking point. Riots have broken out in the city center, unseen since the beginning of the war. Revolution.

Chairman Crowter, after taking control, announced… [radio changes stations]

News from Europe.

Tensions on the border between Imperial Germany and Socialist France are escalating…”

*The radio is drowned out by a knock on the door, followed by a voice*

“Comrade Faulkner! We’re from the Bureau. Please open the door immediately!”

—

This is the first scenario, focusing on a resident of Chicago in 1940, in the midst of the Second American Civil War. From this point on, there are several directions you can take. Are you a member of the party? Or perhaps a member of radical groups? Or are you hiding from the government and now you have to flee? There are many options.

---

Orkney, 1938

*The sea waves crashed against the steel walls, dozens of warship wrecks lay disarmed on the islands’ beaches. Battleships, destroyers, cruisers, and even aircraft carriers. Each of these ships, once the pride of the British Navy, now lay rusting on the shore. Seagulls nested in the windows and turrets of the ships. But it wasn't just the seagulls that made this area their haven.*

*In one of the aircraft carriers, barely holding itself upright, stood hundreds of men, all holding various weapons and rifles. All were focused on one man standing in the very center of the old hangar where the planes once stood.*

"I told you so, didn't I? What the world took from you... We will take it back!" *The older man, clearly seen by his gray hair. Shouted* "German Imperialists, French Socialists, Russian Communists, British Fascists. They all peddle lies. They peddle dreams! Only we have seen what lies on the other side of their pretenses. Only the Lancers. They call us 'Killers for Hire.' But brothers, my eyes are wide open. I know what they're building there, in the endless deserts of South Africa. I know it will change everything!" *The man raised his voice, and with each successive word, the crowd began to cheer him on.* "I'm going to find it! I'm going to steal it! And I'm going to sell it to the highest fucking bidder."

*The entire gathered crowd began to cheer, many firing their rifles into the air.*

—

Another interesting scenario, this time focusing on members of a group of mercenaries who have taken it upon themselves to discover what the German Empire is testing in the deserts of South Africa. And they intend to sell it for the highest possible price. But will you be loyal to your brothers? Won't you betray them when the Germans offered you a better life? Won't you seize the secret weapon yourself?

—

So these are two ready-made scenarios. If you want something different, play as someone from a different country in a different year, in a different situation. Feel free to write. Tell me which country you'd like the RP to take place in, who you'd like to be, and tell me what you expect from it.

As for me, I have six years of experience in RPs, primarily as a GM in various RPs, mostly sci-fi or fantasy worlds. Writing multiple characters at once is no problem for me, of course. I can write in first and third person. I can easily write from 100 to 1000 words, and if I have the time, I can even write 3000 words. I like to write some OOC before we start the RP because there's a lot to discuss. I'm usually active and should reply back soon.

The First World War was won by the Central Powers. After the war, revolution broke out in Great Britain, and the royal family fled to Canada. Socialists rose up in France and seized power. In the Balkans, Bulgaria became the dominant country. In the USA, political instability led to another civil war. This is the world of the Kaiserreich, in a nutshell.

The scenarios presented below are taken from the official series on the channel "Kaiser Cat Cinema." The following scenarios can be adapted in any way, as this entire world is one large alternative scenario.

If you're unfamiliar with this world but are interested, feel free to contact me and I'll explain anything you'd like.

—

Chicago 1940

*Static voice from radio*

“Washington has fallen, Union President Howard Langdon has declared victory in the former capital. This final victory is a fatal blow to the remaining Federal forces on the Eastern Shore.

General McAllister, leader of the Western Democratic forces, is missing and now presumed dead.

The growing victories of the Union states are putting increasing pressure on the Combined Syndicalists in the north. Within the Combined Syndicalists, fighting among leftist groups has sparked protests following the dramatic bombing of the Chicago Board of Trade. Many blame infighting within the Syndicalist government as the reason for the lack of progress in the war. Many factions propose more radical changes to the government.

Chicago, after losing its ports on the Peninsula and being blockaded by the Canadian government, is surviving on the last of its fuel and food. And the city may be reaching its breaking point. Riots have broken out in the city center, unseen since the beginning of the war. Revolution.

Chairman Crowter, after taking control, announced… [radio changes stations]

News from Europe.

Tensions on the border between Imperial Germany and Socialist France are escalating…”

*The radio is drowned out by a knock on the door, followed by a voice*

“Comrade Faulkner! We’re from the Bureau. Please open the door immediately!”

—

This is the first scenario, focusing on a resident of Chicago in 1940, in the midst of the Second American Civil War. From this point on, there are several directions you can take. Are you a member of the party? Or perhaps a member of radical groups? Or are you hiding from the government and now you have to flee? There are many options.

---

Orkney, 1938

*The sea waves crashed against the steel walls, dozens of warship wrecks lay disarmed on the islands’ beaches. Battleships, destroyers, cruisers, and even aircraft carriers. Each of these ships, once the pride of the British Navy, now lay rusting on the shore. Seagulls nested in the windows and turrets of the ships. But it wasn't just the seagulls that made this area their haven.*

*In one of the aircraft carriers, barely holding itself upright, stood hundreds of men, all holding various weapons and rifles. All were focused on one man standing in the very center of the old hangar where the planes once stood.*

"I told you so, didn't I? What the world took from you... We will take it back!" *The older man, clearly seen by his gray hair. Shouted* "German Imperialists, French Socialists, Russian Communists, British Fascists. They all peddle lies. They peddle dreams! Only we have seen what lies on the other side of their pretenses. Only the Lancers. They call us 'Killers for Hire.' But brothers, my eyes are wide open. I know what they're building there, in the endless deserts of South Africa. I know it will change everything!" *The man raised his voice, and with each successive word, the crowd began to cheer him on.* "I'm going to find it! I'm going to steal it! And I'm going to sell it to the highest fucking bidder."

*The entire gathered crowd began to cheer, many firing their rifles into the air.*

—

Another interesting scenario, this time focusing on members of a group of mercenaries who have taken it upon themselves to discover what the German Empire is testing in the deserts of South Africa. And they intend to sell it for the highest possible price. But will you be loyal to your brothers? Won't you betray them when the Germans offered you a better life? Won't you seize the secret weapon yourself?

—

So these are two ready-made scenarios. If you want something different, play as someone from a different country in a different year, in a different situation. Feel free to write. Tell me which country you'd like the RP to take place in, who you'd like to be, and tell me what you expect from it.

As for me, I have six years of experience in RPs, primarily as a GM in various RPs, mostly sci-fi or fantasy worlds. Writing multiple characters at once is no problem for me, of course. I can write in first and third person. I can easily write from 100 to 1000 words, and if I have the time, I can even write 3000 words. I like to write some OOC before we start the RP because there's a lot to discuss. I'm usually active and should reply back soon.