I started writing lyrics as a hobby, but over time it became a way for me to let my emotions out. I rarely share my lyrics because they’re very personal, but with this last one I felt the urge to share it. I’m interested in what people who don’t know me think, so if it’s not a problem, feel free to share your opinion. Any criticism is welcome.
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[Verse]
I wear a winning smile
But I always lose
Bright glare in my eye
But dark is the truth
Stare me down
With your eyes of abuse
Pierce me now
With the words you use
[Chorus]
As I spit blood out
No empathy from you
My tears bend light
I feel sympathy for you
You gave me life
But tyranny is all you do
So take my love
It's something that you never knew
[Verse]
Anxious face as a scar
From the battles you fought
Scary place, we're in a car
Empty bottles, angry talk
Yelling like we are so far
But it takes so little to be kind
Feeling emptiness inside
So take this heart
It's no longer mine
[Chorus]
As I spit blood out
No empathy from you
My tears bend light
I feel sympathy for you
You gave me life
But tyranny is all you do
So take my love
It's something that you never knew
[Verse]
Middle of the night
I hug the person next to you
Worried is my smile
But enough to comfort you
Saying you have nothing to lose
It hurts that I'm nothing to you
Another punch another bruise
It hurts the way I'm needing you
[Chorus]
As I spit blood out
No empathy from you
My tears bend light
I feel sympathy for you
You gave me life
But tyranny is all you do
So take my love
It's something that you never knew
[bridge]
It's all in the past
But I'm still the same to you
Even now
I'm not enough for you
All of my scars
Made me look like you
[Chorus]
As I spit blood out
No need for empathy
My eyes are dry
It's time for a different me
You gave me life
But it's up to me
To spread my love
With another seed
Unconditional love, the way it should be
F
[Verse]
It was sweet
But never pure
I've done what I never did before
Falling for someone else's love
It was wrong but I was more
It was sweet but never pure
Short-lived flame
In blazing form
[Chorus]
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
As I was strong
Now I feel insecure
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
From happy to greedy
Down to my core
[Verse]
It was sweet
But never pure
I've done what I never did before
Felt no guilt, no remorse
Stealing someone else's love
Now karma waits at my door
Never found another
Spending days alone
[Chorus]
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
As I was strong
Now I feel insecure
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
From happy to greedy
Down to my core
[Verse]
And every day I blame myself
But how come when I text you
You never left me on seen
Lines blurred but I'm
Reading in between
I guess it wasn't meant to be
Hope you're happy with him
Holding you instead of me
[Chorus]
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
As I was strong
Now I feel insecure
Oooh
You made me
Change my form
From happy to greedy
Down to my core
[Bridge]
In a few songs
I said everything.
Our love
Nine minutes long.
All that it was,
Now, just a few notes.
But thank you, though,
For helping me.
All the right words
Are finding me.
[Chorus]
Oooh
You made me
Go the wrong road
Ther's nothing left
But i still want more
Oooh
You made me
Change my tone
It was all about the love
Now I'm singing a sad song
[Outro]
It was sweet
But never pure
I've done what I never did before
