u/Fair-Bear728

My HCs for Haunted Hotel characters

  1. Abaddon and Mortoth were friends in hell but weren’t that close

  2. Nathan and Charlie are ex boyfriends

  3. Charlie is mixed race (half black half white)

  4. Nathan and Katherine used to fight all the time when they were kids/teens

  5. Nathan used to look a lot like Ben when he was a kid

  6. Abaddon didn’t like his wife in hell so he used to go off and cheat on her with multiple demon women just to piss her off

  7. Esther would find stories of Abaddon on the internet and is fascinated to see a drawn picture of his demon form

  8. Nathan became a gambling addict at teen hood and hid it from his family (only Charlie knew)

  9. Katherine was afraid of clowns as a kid but Nathan wasn’t (he would use clowns to scare her off if she was annoying him)

  10. Ben would act like he hates Abaddon but would secretly leave him gifts outside the cupboard for him (like a big brother :3)

  11. Nathan used to carry Abaddon around like a baby just to make himself feel like a father

  12. Esther learned Black magic from Ron, which led to Katherine and Ron arguing about it.

  13. Charlie’s stepfather and 3 half brothers (except his mother) used to be racist to him, calling him half breed, mixed breed or any other racist insult but Charlie never cried in front of them.

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u/Fair-Bear728 — 1 day ago

Who here feels like giving Charlie a dark backstory?

Bc his personality could be a mask, right? Share ur backstories u made for him

u/Fair-Bear728 — 11 days ago

Is it okay to make Jesus gay with Judas in a fictional story?

I’m not a Christian but I’m making a comedy story abt God and Satan and I thought abt Jesus and Judas, is it okay to make them gay?

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u/Fair-Bear728 — 12 days ago

Any opinions abt a comedy show abt God and Satan? (I’m not religious irl)

God is a woman in this - I wanna make a show where God and Satan act like enemies to each other but then they would go to a pub and have a pint together.

Any opinions? Should I make this show?

u/Fair-Bear728 — 19 days ago

Let’s talk abt these two :3

In my previous post abt Nathan and Charlie, I made a HC of the two being exes and I really like the two :3 I wanna talk more abt them.

Can you guys give me opinions?

u/Fair-Bear728 — 28 days ago

Have you ever wrote a story and just abandoned it? Not just because of writers block but also because you hated the main character?

I tried writing a zombie apocalypse action comedy called Penelope.

It was about a young 17 year old girl named Penelope. 8 years go when it was early morning, Penelope was getting ready for her 9th birthday when the zombie outbreak began. Her mother was bitten and Penelope had to chop her head off. She decided to take her mother’s head with her and the axe to survive.

Years later, she lives and survives with her gang at a huge hideout where soldiers and clever people help out. I had every cool character that I enjoyed, a character named Vivzi was my favourite and the writing was clever until I got writers block and got bored of it.

But here’s another reason why I left it:

I hated Penelope.

She was childish, she was annoying, she was a brat and she refused to listen to those who tried to tell her off about her behaviour.

I remember writing a scene where the leader of the group scolds Penelope and gives her a safety lecture, and she yells “F*ck you!” While storming off.

And a scene where a character named Vivzi finally gets through to her and finally convinces her to listen to them more and behave, as she could die out there if she continued her chaotic ways.

Penelope tells the group that she will listen and behave more but the next day when they were out to collect food and more survivors, she continued acting like a teasing bitch even though I wrote the script of her finally realising that her actions will get her killed.

I tried going back to rewrite her but her personality is what would piss me off. So I just abandoned the story.

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u/Fair-Bear728 — 1 month ago

Can you guys share your opinions about this dialogue?

I’m writing a horror Snow White adaptation and I wanted to know what you guys think of what I’ve written so far. Warden is the huntsman btw

u/Fair-Bear728 — 3 months ago

Can someone help me?

I’m wanting to write a sci fi comedy and figure everything out. The part where an Alien parasite named AVO reveals his real name as Vaélor, before the character Sylvia asks a relatable question - I’m not that smart with comedy so I need some help :(

Also is the comedy a bit too inappropriate or is it ok?

u/Fair-Bear728 — 3 months ago