personal statement help!!
is an essay about how I always get free concert upgrades a good idea? I would talk abt how I never spend more than $100 and I always negotiate to get pit or closer seats. and then I would connect it to how I love talking to people etc and I always find a way to connect to people. and then how I use this skill for good where I advocate for people who maybe cant talk and just how I help people in general through service and volunteering. I would talk abt how I was really quiet as a child so the concert negotiating skill is an example of huge growth for me. Ik this essay can make me come off as arrogant or entitled so I would try my best not to do this.
is this a bad idea, or too overused? how can I make it better?