u/FirstOven7540

One Piece (alternative story)Prototype

"Wealth, fame, power... Gold Roger, the Pirate King... conquered these heights! The words he spoke before his death inspired countless brave souls from all over the world to sail the seas. 'My treasures? Take them, if you need them so much... Try and find them! I left all the riches of this world there!' And so began... the Great Age of Pirates!"

The story, like many others, begins from the beginning, so our story began with a village called Foosha, a wonderful place where our main character Monkey D. Luffy lives... so, stop, stop, somewhere all this has already happened, the reader may object and will be right, but this time the story will go in a different direction, listen carefully and you will understand everything, life on this island went on as usual until a marine ship headed by Admiral Shanks stopped near the port, he was dressed in a black shirt and the same dark pants, but also on his shoulders was a coat with gold epaulets, a distinctive sign of all Marine Admirals, and his hair was bright red, among his own he even had the nickname "red-haired" they looked here not for the first time, so Luffy was already familiar with him and his squad and this day was no exception, upon arrival they decided to rest first, choosing a bar for these affairs and of course Luffy could not pass them by, Shanks take me with you, Luffy said with reproach, I can become a marine and fight these vile pirates and suddenly he fell off the chair and everyone laughed, sorry guy, children are not taken into the patrol, said Shanks with a grin, but if you grow up, although no, you are too weak, his entire squad laughed harmlessly, stop laughing, it's not funny, Luffy climbed back onto the chair and noticed the chest, opening it he noticed a strange fruit that seemed to attract him against his will in the end he could not resist and ate it, and at first he did not feel anything, but then Shanks noticed and asked, did you eat what was in there? I thought it was dessert, Luffy replied carelessly, do you even understand what you've done? He abruptly grabbed Luffy by the legs to try to get the fruit and suddenly his legs stretched out and his body fell to the floor, what the hell, Luffy shouted, my legs are stretching, Shanks only sighed slightly, yes, this will not be easy and then suddenly pirates enter the bar, led by a particularly large pirate with an unremarkable appearance, and all the guards immediately surround them, but Shanks gave a hand command to relax and they sat down calmly, I must say Shanks was an unusual guard, he tried to communicate with everyone and be friends, but nevertheless he did not neglect his duties, come in guys, Shanks said with a smile, yes, we just came to drink with a rough and heavy voice, the pirate said and we do not intend to have anything to do with the guards, but to tell the truth, the waitress looked at the pirates, these young people drank everything, the pirate looked at her with anger, yes, relax sharply Shanks drew attention to himself, we still have a bottle left and if you want... the bottle suddenly flew into pieces and all the booze spilled over his face, we will not take handouts from dirty patrol rats, the pirate stood with a flintlock weapon in his hand from which smoke came out, the patrolmen were immediately about to get up, but Shanks stopped them, and he himself laughed oh well, it's just a bottle, the pirate looked at him with disdain, let's go guys, let's find a place where there is booze, they started chatting and left the bar, then the waitress came up to him, are you all right? Don't worry so much, everything is fine, Shanks suddenly spoke up to Loofy, why didn't you do anything, you just let them make fun of you, he's a pirate, the most terrible people in the world, Shanks laughed and patted him on the head, maybe but it's just a drink, Loofy suddenly fell silent, but after a while he left the bar, Loofy couldn't stand such injustice, he found these pirates and started shouting, hey you empty-headed fools, pirates are trash and I came to defend the honor of the patrol, they laughed, hey kid, you better get out of here said the same main pirate from the bar, but instead Loofy ran and kicked him in the leg, oh you bastard, they suddenly surrounded him and knocked him out, oh well, I'll teach him some manners, then suddenly the waitress asks if anyone has seen Loofy, they say he was last seen near some pirates, Shanks suddenly jumped up and his squad ran after him, so you he He looked at his squad, "Get our ship ready, apparently the pirate hunt is on." They saluted him and ran toward their ship, while Shanks himself went to the spot where the pirates were last seen, but there he only encountered these pirates. "Where's Luffy?" He asked calmly, "That little brat? I left him at sea to be devoured by the sea kings, what did you do?" Shanks, the bastard, was incensed, but the pirate quickly hurried to hide behind his henchmen. Shanks quickly dispersed them, which wasn't particularly difficult, and their captain, meanwhile, escaped. As soon as his ship set sail, a patrol ship sailed to intercept it, making sure the situation was under control. Shanks set out to sea using his abilities, and eventually found the raft Luffy was on. "Oh, my God, why did you even..."he climbed on it, I wanted to prove that the Marines are very strong and they will defeat all the pirates, making the world safe and fair, and at that moment a huge sea monster appeared from the water, Shanks felt it with his special sense in advance and only having noticed her, he was able to knock her out with one glance, he was still standing on the raft, holding Luffy, well, everything is fine now, but Shanks, your hand ... And indeed, in the place where the hand should be, there was a gaping hole, yes, this is nonsense, he laughed as usual, he returned it to the ground and at that moment he receives a report that the pirates were captured and require their transfer, he just calmly nodded his head, well, it's time for me to go again, Shanks, one day I will become the best Marine, I will surpass you, he laughed, yeah, of course, you're a weak child, he and his squad laughed easily, okay, let's do it, he took off the pendant with the symbol of the Marines from his neck, seagulls, let's do it when you return it to me When you become the best marine, he put his loofy around his neck, good luck, they climbed on board and sailed, yes, I will surpass you Shanks, you'll see I will become the best marine he shouted, decent years passed, loofy grew up and being already of age to begin his journey, he took a small boat and headed to look for the nearest marine base, goodbye everyone, I will return and you will still know my name it will be known throughout the world he waved to everyone on the island as he slowly sailed out to sea and that same pendant glinted in the sun.

This is my first attempt, please don't judge too hard

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u/FirstOven7540 — 12 days ago

Is it worth making and developing a fan universe based on anime and manga one piece?

I had the idea to make a fan universe based on anime and manga one piece, but where Lufi will not be a pirate, but a marine and the story will basically change slightly and the characters will change places, only I'm not sure if it's worth it?

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u/FirstOven7540 — 12 days ago

Is it worth making and developing a fan universe based on anime and manga one piece?

I had the idea to make a fan universe based on anime and manga one piece, but where Lufi will not be a pirate, but a marine and the story will basically change slightly and the characters will change places, only I'm not sure if it's worth it?

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u/FirstOven7540 — 12 days ago