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No more retreating-part 3

Part 2

The hospital was quiet.

Too quiet.

A stark contrast to the chaos of Octavian’s childhood in the orphanage, or even the controlled noise of military training.

He had rested enough.

At least, that’s what he told himself.

Slowly, he got out of bed and made his way to the door.

He wasn’t limping anymore, but every step still hurt. The scar that ran from his collarbone down to his navel burned with each movement. In some ways, it felt worse now than when it still had stitches.

He tried to ignore it but every step he took seemed to burn his whole body, he kept walking

The corridor stretched out ahead of him, bright and pristine.

As he walked, he felt it.

Eyes.

People moving out of his way.

Staff greeting him as he passed.

“Commander.”

“Good morning, sir.”

It felt… strange.

Unfamiliar.

But he couldn’t deny it...

he liked it.

He reached the reception desk.

A young woman stood behind a terminal.

“Good morning,” Octavian said. “I’d like an EH-pad.”

She straightened immediately, slightly flustered.

“Of course, Commander. I just need your citizen identification number and your military identification number.”

He gave them without hesitation.

She typed quickly.

Then paused.

Her expression shifted.

“I’m… sorry, Commander. It says clearance level insufficient.”

Octavian frowned.

That didn’t make sense.

Even a lieutenant had access to an EH-pad.

“Try again,” he said.

She did.

Same result.

A third time.

Still nothing.

“Well,” Octavian muttered, exhaling lightly, “there goes my hope for an interesting evening.”

The girl laughed.

A bit too much.

Then noticed his expression, and immediately straightened.

“I’m sorry,” she said quickly. “Why did you need it?”

“I wanted to check enemy movement,” Octavian replied. “Fleet status. The usual.”

She hesitated.

“That sounds… restricted.”

Octavian looked at the terminal for a moment.

Then back at her.

“It is.”

A brief pause.

“But I guess information isn’t the only sensitive thing around here.”

She blinked, not fully understanding.

“What do you—”

But he had already turned away.

The corridor felt different now.

Not quieter.

Just… clearer.

As he walked back toward his room, the stares didn’t bother him anymore. If anything, they made more sense.

The young scientist got out of the shower, she hoped a hot shower would calm her down, but still all she could think about was Octavian in the hospital bed. He would bear that scar his entire life, was it her fault? Her system saved him but it was she that came with the idea to install it, still would he even have done such a thing if it he didn't have the ejection system? Of course he would, she thought.

Just like the day when they met, Tesla was supervising the systems for the chase combat training module, cutting edge technology from a friendly state in the Galactic Community, tweaked by Tesla herself to better suit it's use by humans, a fresh batch of recruits from the academy were going to be the first to try this tweaked version.

She took a look at the spreadsheet with their names and background, nothing special, except one "Octavian" 17 years old, Mars national orphanage, Northern District. "huh, another orphan" she said to herself before taking a sip of coffee, the door opened.

"The recruits are ready, miss Tesla" said one of her assistants

"Good let's go to the observation bay"

Nothing out of the ordinary, some failed almost every level of the module, some did great, others, not so much.

But then came Octavian's turn, as was customary, orphans were last, he aced every single level, it couldn't have been more than his 3rd or 4th time flying a spaceship, for all she knew it could have been his first time and yet he maneuvered it masterfully.

On the last level, an actual chase scenario where you'd have to outrun 10 enemy vessels inside an asteroid belt, he turned on them, slowly beating every enemy ship with surprise maneuvers and blitz attacks through very narrow gaps, when the last ship was hit the system encountered an error, it hadn't occurred to her someone might actually fight the ships instead of running, so the system had no way to calculate the results.

After fixing the system she transferred this young recruit's file to her personal EH-PAD, and headed to the barracks, she wanted to meet him in person, try to understand how and why he did what he did.

Looking in the cloudy mirror of her bathroom Tesla ran her fingers through her long coal black hair, and she caught herself smiling, she always did it, subconsciously and never noticing, but she smiled almost every time she thought about him.

Like she smiled when he called her ma'am when they met, he looked like a child, but she could sense his pain, and the numbness in his eyes carried a life story she could not even imagine, unlike 'perfect' earth, or the more rural frontier colonies, Mars was a single massive city meant to house the more than a billion farmers and other lower class citizens needed for the planet to function.

Mars was known as the concrete garden, name given on one side from the endless farmlands and on the other from the massive housing blocks, which unlike Earth's towers had no aesthetic to them, just boxes of concrete meant to house as many people as possible as efficiently as possible.

Octavian didn't even have that, growing up in the dangerous streets of the outskirts, where his orphanage was located.

"It must've been hard..." She said, looking in his eyes,

"I would choose those streets anytime, over that 'home' they kept me in" Octavian answered.

Looking at her he could sense her being uncomfortable

"sooo anyway, smartest human alive and you didn't think someone might not want to run?" He asked, smirking

"only an idiot would not run in that situation, but i guess you don't count since you still passed, technically and...."

Her daydream was interrupted "Liz! Dinner's ready sweetie I'm waiting for you" Nick shouted from downstairs.

Liz, Beth, Lizzie, She hated hearing those words, reminded her of her mother.

Sitting down for dinner she could sense something was in the air, her father, while usually a very serious person given his position, was not like this at home

"Anything on your mind dad?" Tesla asked

"Actually" nick said between chews as he set his fork down "Yes, something that came up during my last council meeting, almost slipped my mind, This Octavian, is he the same from the file you asked me to give to the Grand Admiral a few years ago? And don't lie honey, please"

She looked in her father's eyes, he wasn't angry he seemed.. worried?

"Yes..."

"Ok, and did you modify his ship?"

She thought for a second before deciding to not lie to her father

"Yes I did"

Nick leaned back in his chair, exhaled before taking a sip of water

"Listen very carefully honey, i think you of all people know what's the punishment for illegal modifications of government property, this time tho, I don't think i have to intervene, all is well if it ends well, the ship is gone and he is alive" he leaned forward "you are a grown woman and you do as you please anyway, but i highly advise against involving yourself with him anymore, at least for a while, he has all the attention from the council now and if they see you with him, it won't take long before they make the connection"

Nick got up, finished his glass

"I'm going to bed it's gonna be a busy month, we have to up quotas to refit the fleet, goodnight sweetheart" he said giving her a kiss on the forehead

"Goodnight dad"

Her father's words were stuck in her head "stay away from him", she had already visited him, the Grand Admiral had seen her there, most likely every council member knew she was there, how could her father not know?

Or maybe he knew, chose to ignore it for now, see what she does next. As she was struggling to go to sleep her EH-PAD lit up, and a notification chimed, she got out of the bed and picked up the PAD, it was from Octavian.

"Hey sorry if this arrives at a late hour. I didn't get to telI you this at the hospital, but I hope you don't get in any trouble because of the ship. It looks like they cut my credentials, I wasn't allowed an EH-PAD just a regular one, I feel like I'm stuck in time in here, too quiet. Do you know if your father will be there, at the war council? It's not exactly how i would've liked to meet him, take care"

The southern district of Mars City was littered with spaceship fragments, especially most of the enemy flagship, at least what remained of it after the explosion of it's engine, the smell of burnt corn filled the air, debris could be seen in the sky, slowly being cleared away by the special crews, the seemingly infinite cornfield was now full of pieces of hull, many as big as the apartment blocks themselves, you could still feel the dust in the air from their descent into orbit

"Word is out on the streets that it was a young orphan, from the Northern district that hit the flagship" said a worker as he pulled on a piece of metal from the rubble "yes i heard it too, that and that he was also the second in command to the Grand Admiral during the battles at the Titan Belt" another worker said as she dried the sweat on her forehead "you think he's alive?" She asked "well i think we would know if he was dead" "I hope he made it"

"So do i, but even if he did he might not be doing so well, rumors are saying that muppet Voss had ordered a retreat to Earth's moon, and that he disobeyed orders with his hit, they might even try to court martial him" he spat on the ground

"impossible the Grand Admiral won't allow it"

Meanwhile, on Earth celebrations were held for the victory over the Ordans, the imminent threat was no longer in humanity's home system.

In one of the many topfloor bars of a high-rise on Earth people were toasting the victory, "to Octavian" "to victory!"

Glasses clanked against each other, the electronic fireplace played an image of a campfire, its golden reflection covering the entire window-wall at their back, as they ordered another corn-cake. Beyond the window-wall, breaking through the night clouds, the council tower.

"They are celebrating him, toasting his name, here on Earth, on Mars, there are reports coming in of festivals of victory even in the frontier colonies" Voss said, struggling to keep himself composed, in front of the security minister "of course they are" Kovac said calmly "he did win the battle" she said, not raising her eyes from the EH-PAD "the question is, can he win the war?" Now she was looking Voss straight in the eyes "could you, win the war, councillor?"

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u/GemmisElf — 9 days ago
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No more retreating—part 2

Part 1 here

The dim light of the office was outmatched by the light coming from the EH-PAD that the security councillor, Elena Kovač held in her hands, reading the reports of the battle above Mars, with the Grand Admiral absent from the battle, command was transferred to the minister of defence, Adrian Voss. He was never particularly good at his job, but he was useful nonetheless, using people like him is what kept her family in control of the council since the first days of the United Earth, but, it seems she had made a grave mistake.

She put the EH-PAD back on the table, went to stare out the window, Earth, the capital, stood at the center of it all, Voss had almost risked it's bombardment with the regroup order. She remembered her aunt's teachings, that control of the council was paramount for humanities safety, that they could never be wrong as they always had the whole picture, did those words still hold the same weight now?

This Octavian, already popular with the whole navy, second in command of the Grand Admiral himself, though unofficially, the Grand Admiral had pulled enough strings with his early graduation and quick promotion to Commander, he couldn't afford making him an Admiral just yet. He seemed to be exactly what Voss so desperately wanted to be, could he take his place? she wondered.

Although, that wouldn't be an easy job as it seems the Grand Admiral was already interested in the young commander, and his influence was insurmountable, even with her web of connections spanning the whole empire, Li Zhengwei was perhaps the single most popular human alive.

His actions during the 3rd obraxian-nurvi war as leader of a mercenary flotilla, especially the battle of Obraxis Prime, earned him the reputation as one of the best tacticians in the galaxy, and that was in his 30s. Now, more than half a century later the war hero was a living legend, every human child knew his name, but as far as the Grand Admiral was concerned Octavian was the only name he cared about.

She would keep an eye on him for now, and she couldn't afford to show any interest about him in the upcoming council meeting.

The council chamber was filled with a low murmur. Every councillor had taken their seat, with the exception of the Grand Admiral.

One of his lungs had nearly collapsed a week prior, and he had been transferred to one of the outer colonies, where the air was cleaner, lighter.

Elena Kovač was the first to speak.

“Dear councillors, I believe our next step is clear… This gross violation of protocol—this disobedience of direct orders—is grounds for a court-martial. At the very least, disciplinary action.”

“Disciplinary action?”

Nickolas Tesla, the governor of the Alpha Centauri System, his voice cut in, sharper than expected.

“He won us the battle. He should be rewarded.”

The Terran and Martian representatives exchanged brief glances, both clearly in agreement.

“There is a reason structure exists,” Adrian Voss said evenly. “We do not reward insubordination.”

The chamber doors opened.

All heads turned.

The Grand Admiral entered slowly, but his presence had already filled the room.

“You couldn’t wait, Kovač?” he said. “I told you I would be here.”

“Our apologies, Grand Admiral,” Kovač replied smoothly. “We felt this matter required immediate attention consi—”

“Indeed,” he interrupted.

His gaze moved across the chamber.

“Deciding how to reward the young commander is no simple matter.”

Whispering now filled the room.

“The order to retreat was cowardly.”

Silence fell instantly.

“How any of you considered abandoning our home system…”

His eyes settled on Voss.

“…is beyond me.”

“We were not abandoning it,” Kovač said, her tone still controlled. “Fleet cohesion had collapsed. It needed to be restored. You were not present during the battle, Admiral.”

“And perhaps that is why the boy had to risk his life to win it.”

He stepped forward, voice sharpening slightly.

“I reviewed the battle reports. You focused on their smaller vessels, relied on dogfighting, on their bombarding ships…”

He shook his head.

“You should have targeted the flagship.”

A brief pause.

“That is how we held the line at the Titan Belt.”

The room remained silent.

“He won the battle alone,” the Admiral continued. “And now the entire navy from cadet to major, sees him as the man who saved them.”

His gaze swept the chamber.

“And you speak of disciplinary action?”

Voss hesitated, just for a moment.

“The Grand Admiral is… correct,” he said carefully. “Disciplinary action could destabilize morale.”

Kovač did not react immediately.

“Very well,” she said at last. “Then we will reconvene on this matter at a later time. But we will not reward insubordination..."

The bright white hospital light burned into Octavian’s eyes.

He turned his head away, wincing, toward the window.

Beyond it, Earth.

A deep blue sky stretched endlessly, scattered with perfect clouds. The sunlight was soft, golden… gentle. Nothing like Mars, where the light felt harsher, heavier, as if it pressed down on you.

Towering structures filled the horizon, rising with impossible precision. At the center of them all stood the tallest, where the Council convened.

He had never been to Earth.

All his training, all his life, had been spent on frontier worlds… or in the void between them.

A low groan escaped him.

From the other side of the room, he heard movement.

He turned his head again.

Tesla.

He hadn’t seen her in almost a year—since Alpha Centauri. Since the night they broke protocol and quietly modified his ship, installing that ancient, experimental ejection system.

He hadn’t expected her to be here. He was… glad.

But at the same time, he didn’t want her seeing him like this.

“How are you feeling?” she asked.

“...Well,” he exhaled weakly, “I’m alive.”

A faint pause.

“How long have you been standing there?”

She hesitated, just slightly.

“That doesn’t matter. Tell me, what do you remember?”

Octavian stared at the ceiling for a moment.

“That we were losing,” he said slowly. “They were bombarding Mars..."

Tesla could feel the anger in his voice.

"Command ordered a retreat. Regroup.”

His jaw tightened.

“I wasn’t going to abandon my world. Not like that. Not with those odds.”

He paused, breath catching.

“Then I armed the system. Like you showed me.”

“My ship… straight into their engine core.”

Another breath.

“I engaged FTL… and hit eject.”

Silence.

Tesla stepped closer, her eyes locked onto his.

“You’re an idiot.”

The words came out sharper than expected.

“What if it didn’t work? What if the timing was off? If the ejection triggered after the jump” her voice tightened, “you would’ve been vaporized.”

She looked away, her expression shifting.

“I never should have installed that.”

Octavian let out a faint breath.

“Hey… I’m alive.”

“And we won.” A faint smile formed. “That’s all that matters.”

The door slid open.

Both of them turned.

Grand Admiral Li Zhengwei entered without announcement.

The air in the room shifted instantly.

“Grand Admiral… it’s good to see you, sir,” Octavian said, struggling to push himself up.

“Don’t even try, Commander.”

Li stepped forward, placing a firm but controlled hand on his shoulder, guiding him back down.

“How are you feeling,” the Admiral continued, voice calm, almost dry, “I’m not the one who had to enter atmosphere in a sardine can.”

A faint trace of humor. Gone just as quickly.

Tesla spoke before Octavian could answer.

“I suppose the Council was a more pressing concern than our hero, Admiral.”

Her tone cut through the room.

Even Octavian didn’t like it.

Li looked at her.

Said nothing.

Then turned back to Octavian.

“There are members of the Council,” he said evenly, “who would like to see you punished. Court-martialed.”

A pause.

“You disobeyed direct orders.” The words lingered.

“But,” Li continued, quieter now, “had I been present… those orders might have been different.”

His gaze hardened slightly.

“As far as I’m concerned, you deserve a medal.”

Another pause.

“I won’t forget that.”

Octavian swallowed.

“Just doing my duty, sir.”

Li studied him for a moment.

“Get well,” he said. “We are regrouping. Rebuilding.” A shift in tone, strategic now.

“The enemy is weakened. We intend to retake the Titan Belt systems.”

Then.

“You will attend the next war council.”

Li turned toward the door.

Then stopped.

Without looking back at first.

“Miss Tesla.”

Now he turned.

“Does your father know you’re here?”

Tesla didn’t hesitate.

“Yes. He does.”

A brief silence.

“I highly doubt that.”

No anger. No accusation. Just certainty.

“Have a good day.” And with that, he left.

The room fell quiet again.

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u/GemmisElf — 15 days ago
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No more retreating

Part 2

All hope seemed lost.

Mars’s orbital defenses had fallen silent, one by one, until nothing remained but drifting wreckage.

“All units, this is High Command. Regroup at lunar orbit. Repeat-regroup at Earth’s moon.”

Octavian’s ship had barely escaped destruction. His lasers were gone, torn apart by enemy fire.

For a moment, he looked down.

The blue of Mars’s oceans stretched beneath him, broken only by a sprawling megacity at its heart, his home, surrounded by endless farmlands. The breadbasket of half the human empire.

If Mars fell… no... He banished that thought from his head.

He looked back up.

The enemy flagship loomed in orbit, vast as a moon, vomiting endless waves of alien craft into the void.

His was the lead ship of the squadron. The only one equipped with an FTL drive. The only one that could still act.

A warning flickered across his console. Emergency ejection protocol: ARMED.

“All units, fall back immediately.”

Octavian closed his eyes for a brief second… then opened a channel.

“No more retreating.” He cut the transmission.

His ship turned, straight toward the enemy flagship’s engine core.

And then he activated the FTL drive.

Two days later, the fires were still burning.

Wreckage from orbit had carved scars across the Martian plains, metal and ash scattered across the farmlands that once fed billions.

A rescue shuttle cut through the smoke-filled sky, descending toward a debris field just outside the impact zone.

“This is the place,” a voice said. “Signal matches the last known trajectory.”

“We’re really doing this?” another replied. “There’s nothing left of that ship.”

“Orders came directly from the Council. And from her.”

“…the engineer?”

“Yeah. She swears her system worked.”

“Or hopes it did.”

The shuttle touched down with a hiss. The team moved fast, spreading out across twisted metal and blackened ground.

“Over here!”

They rushed toward the call. Half-buried beneath shattered plating and dust… a body.

Still.

“No way…”

“Check vitals!”

A moment passed.

“He’s alive.”

Silence.

“That’s him…”

“Octavian.”

“The one who hit the flagship?”

One of them hesitated before kneeling beside him.

“Kid was a legend before this…”

“Youngest cadet ever. Nineteen.”

“Yeah…” another voice muttered. “The guy who helped the Grand Admiral hold the line for two years.”

“And then he goes and does that…”

“He disobeyed orders.”

“He saved Mars.”

No one argued after that.

“Get him on the stretcher. Now.”

Light.

Pain.

Voices, distant and distorted.

“Stay with us!”

“He’s dehydrated, severe trauma”

“We’re losing him!”

Darkness again.

He woke to movement.

A ceiling above him. White. Unfamiliar.

“He’s conscious!”

“Easy now, don’t let him move.”

Then nothing.

“Prep him for transfer. Earth-side facility.”

“Already?”

“Direct orders from the Council.”

“…figures.”

“Half of them want to give him a medal.”

“And the other half?”

“…think he’s dangerous.”

I hope you guys like it, this is my first ever attempt at writing ever.

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u/GemmisElf — 16 days ago