Chapter 1 of my book(mythic fanatsy - 800 words)
Critique This is my first draft of 1st act of chapter 1. Ik it still needs a good editing. Moreover indian fanatsy elements will come gradually as the strory moves forward.
My few challenges are
I think in hindi then translate and write in English
Need good vocab
(Working on both)
Hard to switch emotions from jolly to sad
Bit off on writing scenary
I love to write more dialogue heavy stories
Sometimes think that I'm just info dumping
I genuinely want brutal opinion and advice from others
Also I'll edit more n more chapters in near future so sure apply those advice on them also.
u/General_Career7562 — 3 days ago