Hii,
I wanted to ask if there's a platform where you can upload your scripts to get feedback on the story. I know you can do that here too, but I was wondering if there's something like AO3 just for scripts?
Hi! A few weeks ago, I uploaded the very first version of the script for the pilot episode of my limited TV show “Going Nowhere.” Thanks to you all, I received a lot of feedback! In my new version, I tried to improve everything as much as possible. The camera directions are still my biggest problem, but I tried to remove them as best as I could. I am looking for some feedback on my new draft now :)
**Title:** Going nowhere
**Genre:** horror/thriller/social-drama
**Page count:** 39
**Logline:** When a teen is brutally injured and another one is found dead, a group of troubled teens is pulled into a dark mystery hiding beneath the streets of Berlin.
Full script:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mgX1u1vqh-hUfKw7BF-urcD70jEKiRI7/view?usp=drivesdk
Hi! A few weeks ago, I uploaded the very first version of the script for the pilot episode of my limited TV show “Going Nowhere.” Thanks to you all, I received a lot of feedback! In my new version, I tried to improve everything as much as possible. The camera directions are still my biggest problem, but I tried to remove them as best as I could. I am looking for some feedback on my new draft now :)
**Title:** Going nowhere
**Genre:** horror/thriller/social-drama
**Page count:** 39
**Logline:** When a teen is brutally injured and another one is found dead, a group of troubled teens is pulled into a dark mystery hiding beneath the streets of Berlin.
Full script:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mgX1u1vqh-hUfKw7BF-urcD70jEKiRI7/view?usp=drivesdk
Hi! A few weeks ago, I uploaded the very first version of the script for the pilot episode of my limited TV show “Going Nowhere.” Thanks to you all, I received a lot of feedback! In my new version, I tried to improve everything as much as possible. The camera directions are still my biggest problem, but I tried to remove them as best as I could. I am looking for some feedback on my new draft now :)
**Title:** Going nowhere
**Genre:** horror/thriller/social-drama
**Page count:** 39
**Logline:** When a teen is brutally injured and another one is found dead, a group of troubled teens is pulled into a dark mystery hiding beneath the streets of Berlin.
Full script:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mgX1u1vqh-hUfKw7BF-urcD70jEKiRI7/view?usp=drivesdk