I use AI on DeviantArt. Should I just quit the site?

I use to not use AI generated anything. It didn’t get me very far on DeviantArt. They weren’t even art. I was just using a 3D modeling software “Daz3D Studios” that didn’t look cinematic. Now that I have used it and got more views and followers but I read people’s opinions on AI, I feel like I shouldn’t even exist. One time I posted a few AI images of my own original characters once on Reddit and I got so much backlash. The worst they said was “you should be ashamed of yourself” but to me it felt like they were saying “you’re a disgrace, just die.” God, I don’t know what to do at this point. Part of me just wants to disappear.

reddit.com
u/Grayton14 — 9 hours ago

Thor vs He-Man

I had this thought after the new Masters Of The Universe movie was announced.

P.S I hope this will actually happen in theaters one day. Chris Hemsworth and Nicolas Galitzine as these characters on the same screen is something I would pay to see

reddit.com
u/Grayton14 — 27 days ago

Elias the Wretched (Origin)

(I kept Elias freezing in the Yukon and accepting the gift from Zalgo, but first off... I changed his last name to Thorne to give him a badass family name. Also, I added a story that takes place before the Yukon. A story of how sometimes being turned away can by the people you love can break you in two ways. One way involves ending it all... another way involves becoming something truly... wretched)

Elias Thourn was a very large man. Not just tall—massive. He stood seven feet and six inches, with shoulders broad enough to fill a doorframe and hands that could wrap around a man's skull like a baseball. He'd been that way since he was fifteen years old, towering over his father, his mother, his teachers, everyone. People noticed him wherever he went. They stared. They whispered. They moved out of his way on sidewalks without being asked. 

But size didn't make you important. Not in the Thourn family.

The Thourns were old money. The kind of family that had their name on hospital wings and university buildings. The kind of family that hosted galas where senators shook hands with CEOs and everyone pretended to like each other. From the outside, they were perfect. Charitable. Elegant. Untouchable.

From the inside, they were cold.

Elias learned that early. He remembered being eight years old, sitting at the dinner table while his father, Richard Thourn, read the newspaper without looking up. His mother, Catherine, sipped wine and talked about redecorating the east parlor. No one asked Elias about his day. No one asked him about school. No one asked him anything.

"Dad," young Elias had said, his small voice barely carrying across the long mahogany table. "I made the football team today."

Richard didn't look up. "That's nice."

"The coach said I'm the biggest kid he's ever seen try out. He said I could be really—"

"Elias," his mother interrupted, not unkindly, but with that practiced dismissiveness she'd perfected over years. "Don't talk with food in your mouth, darling."

He didn't have food in his mouth. He hadn't even started eating yet. But he closed his mouth anyway and stared at his plate for the rest of dinner.

The only person who ever truly saw him was Lauren.

Lauren was two years younger, but she carried herself like she was decades wiser. She was everything the Thourn family wanted—graceful, articulate, beautiful in the way that made people stop mid-sentence. But unlike their parents, Lauren had warmth. She had a heart that actually beat for other people.

"Hey," she'd said that same night, appearing in his bedroom doorway after dinner. She was ten years old, wearing pajamas with little stars on them. "I heard about football. That's awesome, Eli."

Elias looked up from his bed, where he'd been staring at the ceiling. "You think so?"

"Are you kidding?" She climbed onto the foot of his bed and sat cross-legged. "You're gonna crush everyone out there. Like a monster truck."

He laughed. A real laugh. "A monster truck?"

"The biggest, scariest monster truck," she said, grinning. "And I'm gonna be at every game. Front row. Screaming your name so loud they'll kick me out."

"You promise?"

"I promise, Eli."

And she kept that promise. For years, Lauren was the one constant in his life. When their parents forgot his birthday—twice—Lauren was the one who baked him a lopsided cake and sang to him alone in the kitchen. When he got into fights at school because other kids called him a freak, Lauren was the one who sat with him in the principal's office and held his hand. When the world made him feel like he was too big, too rough, too much—Lauren made him feel like he was exactly enough.

They were inseparable. Two souls bound together in a family that didn't deserve either of them.

Then came Marcus Webb.

Marcus was the kind of man who entered a room and immediately owned it. Not through size or strength—he was average height, lean, with sharp features and sharper eyes. He owned rooms through charm. Through words. Through the careful, calculated way he made everyone feel like they were the most important person in the world—until they weren't useful anymore.

He met Lauren at a charity function when she was twenty-four. Within six months, they were inseparable. Within a year, he'd proposed.

Elias hated him from the first handshake.

"So you're the famous big brother," Marcus had said at their first meeting, extending his hand with a smile that didn't reach his eyes. "Lauren talks about you all the time."

Elias took his hand. Squeezed. Not enough to hurt—just enough to communicate. "Does she."

"Oh, absolutely. Says you're her protector. Her rock." Marcus's smile widened. "Must be nice, having someone that devoted to you."

There was something in the way he said it. Something possessive. Like he was already planning to change that.

"Lauren's her own person," Elias said carefully. "She doesn't need protecting."

"Of course not," Marcus agreed, pulling his hand back and flexing his fingers subtly. "She's extraordinary. I'm a very lucky man."

Elias watched him walk back to Lauren's side, watched him slip his arm around her waist with practiced ease. Something in his gut twisted. He couldn't name it then. Later, he'd recognize it as the first warning.

The problems started small. Marcus would make comments at family dinners—subtle jabs disguised as jokes.

"Elias, buddy, you sure you need a third plate? I mean, I know you're a big guy, but..." He'd laugh. Everyone would laugh. Lauren would smile uncomfortably but say nothing.

Or: "You know, Elias, Lauren was telling me you still don't have a steady job. That's rough, man. But hey, not everyone's built for the corporate world. Some people are built for... other things." He'd gesture vaguely at Elias's size, implying something crude without ever saying it outright.

Elias would clench his jaw. Breathe. Let it go. For Lauren.

But it escalated. Marcus began finding ways to exclude Elias from family events. Suddenly, dinners were "intimate affairs" with limited seating. Holidays became trips abroad that Elias only heard about after the fact. Lauren's phone calls became shorter. Less frequent. Then rare.

"Lauren," Elias said one evening, having driven forty minutes to catch her at home. "Can we talk?"

She was in the kitchen of the house Marcus had bought her—a sleek, modern thing that looked like it belonged in a magazine. She looked tired. Beautiful, but tired.

"Of course, Eli. What's up?"

"I never see you anymore," he said, leaning against the counter. Even leaning, he towered over her. "Every time I call, you're busy. Every time I try to come over, Marcus has some event planned. It's like—"

"Eli," she said softly, and there was something in her voice. A warning. "Marcus and I are building a life together. Things are different now. I can't just—"

"Can't just what? See your brother?"

"That's not what I'm saying."

"Then what are you saying, Lauren?"

She was quiet for a moment. Then: "Marcus thinks... he thinks you don't like him."

"I don't."

The words hung in the air like smoke. Lauren's expression shifted—hurt, then frustration.

"Eli, you haven't even tried to get to know him."

"I've tried plenty. He's the one who—" Elias stopped himself. Took a breath. "He makes comments, Lauren. All the time. About my size, about my job, about—"

"He's joking. That's just his sense of humor."

"It's not funny."

"Well, maybe if you didn't take everything so personally—"

"So it's my fault." Elias's voice was flat. "It's always my fault."

"I didn't say that."

"You didn't have to."

He left that night without another word. And something between them cracked. Not broke—not yet. But cracked.

Over the months that followed, the pattern repeated. Marcus would provoke. Elias would react. Lauren would side with Marcus. Every single time. It didn't matter who started it. It didn't matter what was said. Lauren chose Marcus. Again and again and again.

Their parents were no better. Richard and Catherine adored Marcus. He was everything they'd wanted in a son—successful, polished, connected. He was the son they wished Elias had been.

"You know, Elias," his father said one Thanksgiving, swirling brandy in a crystal glass, "you could learn a thing or two from Marcus. The man has drive. Ambition. He's going places."

"And where am I going, Dad?" Elias asked quietly.

Richard looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in months. Then he shrugged and turned back to the football game on television. "That's for you to figure out, son."

Elias sat in that leather chair, surrounded by family, and felt more alone than he'd ever felt in his life.

The wedding was in June. A grand affair at the Thourn estate—three hundred guests, imported flowers, a string quartet, the works. Catherine had spent eight months planning it. Every detail was immaculate. Every moment was choreographed. It was supposed to be perfect.

Elias almost didn't go. He'd spent three days staring at the invitation on his kitchen counter, turning it over in his hands, reading his name in that elegant calligraphy and feeling nothing but dread. But Lauren had called him—the first real call in weeks.

"Eli," she'd said, and her voice was soft. Hopeful. "Please come. It won't feel right without you there."

"Lauren..."

"I know things have been... hard. Between us. But you're my brother. You're my best friend. I need you there."

He closed his eyes. Pressed the phone against his ear like he could hold onto her voice.

"Okay," he said. "I'll be there."

"Thank you, Eli. I love you."

"I love you too, Lauren."

He wore his best suit—custom-tailored to fit his enormous frame. He arrived early. He shook hands. He smiled. He did everything right. For her.

The ceremony was beautiful. Lauren looked radiant in white, and when she walked down the aisle, Elias felt his chest tighten with something bittersweet. Pride. Loss. Love. Fear. All of it tangled together until he couldn't tell where one ended and another began.

The reception followed. Champagne flowed. Music played. People danced and laughed and celebrated. Elias sat at his assigned table—not the family table, he noticed; Marcus had seen to that—and nursed a glass of whiskey.

It was during the toasts that it started.

Marcus stood at the head table, microphone in hand, thanking guests. His speech was charming, funny, everything you'd expect. Then he turned his attention to the family.

"And of course, I have to thank my new brother-in-law, Elias," Marcus said, gesturing toward him with his champagne flute. "Big guy in the back there. Hard to miss, right?" 

Laughter from the crowd.

"You know, when I first met Elias, I thought, 'This guy could crush me like a bug.' And honestly? I still think that." More laughter. "But seriously, Elias—I know we've had our differences. I know I'm stealing your little sister away. But I promise you, man... I'll take good care of her. Better care than anyone ever could."

The implication was clear. Better than you could. Elias felt his knuckles whiten around his glass but said nothing. He forced a smile. Nodded.

Later, near the bar, Marcus found him.

"Hey, big man," Marcus said, loosening his tie. He'd had several drinks by now, and the careful mask was slipping. "Enjoying yourself?"

"It's a nice wedding," Elias said evenly.

"It is, isn't it? Cost a fortune, but hey—only the best for Lauren." Marcus leaned against the bar, studying Elias with those sharp eyes. "You know, I gotta say... I'm surprised you showed up."

"She's my sister. Why wouldn't I?"

"Oh, I don't know." Marcus shrugged, swirling his drink. "Just figured... with how things have been... maybe you'd take the hint."

Elias set his glass down slowly. "What hint would that be, Marcus?"

"Come on, Elias. Don't play dumb. It doesn't suit you." Marcus stepped closer, lowering his voice. "Lauren's moved on. She has a new life now. A better life. And honestly? You hovering around like some... lost puppy... it's pathetic. She feels sorry for you. That's the only reason you're here."

The words hit like a physical blow. Elias felt his jaw tighten, felt the heat rising in his chest.

"You don't know what you're talking about," Elias said, his voice low and dangerous.

"Oh, I think I do." Marcus smirked. "You think she still needs you? She doesn't. She has me now. And between us? She's been wanting to cut you loose for months. She just doesn't have the heart to say it."

"That's a lie."

"Is it?" Marcus tilted his head. "When's the last time she called you first, Elias? When's the last time she chose you over me? Face it—you're a relic. A leftover from a life she's outgrown."

Something snapped.

Elias didn't remember reaching for him. One moment Marcus was smirking, and the next, Elias had him by the collar of his expensive suit, lifting him clean off the ground with one hand. Marcus's feet dangled. His champagne glass shattered on the marble floor.

"Elias—!" Marcus choked, his smugness evaporating into genuine terror. "Put me down—!"

"You think you can take her from me?" Elias growled, his voice barely human. "You think you can poison her against her own family and I'll just stand here and take it?"

"ELIAS!"

Lauren's voice cut through the chaos like a blade. Elias turned. She was standing ten feet away, her white dress billowing, her face a mask of horror. Behind her, guests were frozen mid-conversation, staring. His mother had her hand over her mouth. His father was already moving toward them.

"Put him down," Lauren said. Her voice was shaking. "Put him down RIGHT NOW."

Elias looked at Marcus—at the fear in his eyes, at the red marks forming on his neck—and slowly, carefully, set him down. Marcus stumbled backward, gasping, straightening his collar with trembling hands.

"Lauren," Elias started, turning to her. "He said—he was saying things—he provoked—"

"I don't care what he said!" Lauren's voice cracked. Tears were streaming down her face. "This is my WEDDING, Elias! My wedding day! And you—you—"

"Lauren, please, just listen to me—"

"No!" She held up her hand, and the gesture stopped him cold. "No. I'm done listening. I'm done making excuses for you. I'm done."

"Lauren—"

"Get out."

The words were quiet. Final. Like a door closing.

"What?" Elias whispered.

"Get out, Elias. Leave. Now."

He looked at her—really looked at her—searching for some crack in her resolve, some flicker of the sister who'd baked him birthday cakes and cheered at his football games. But all he saw was a stranger. A woman who'd chosen someone else.

He turned to his parents. His father stood with his arms crossed, his expression hard and unreadable. His mother wouldn't even meet his eyes.

"Mom," Elias said, his voice breaking. "Dad. You saw what he—you heard what he said to me—"

"Elias," his father said, and his tone carried the weight of a verdict already decided. "You need to go."

"But—"

"Now."

Elias stood there for a long moment. Three hundred people staring at him. His sister crying. His parents dismissing him. Marcus behind Lauren, one hand on her shoulder, the other rubbing his neck—and even now, even with red marks on his throat, the bastard was smirking. Just barely. Just enough for Elias to see.

No one was on his side. No one had ever been on his side.

"Fine," Elias said. His voice was hollow. Empty. Like something vital had been carved out of him. "Fine."

He turned and walked out of the reception hall. His footsteps echoed on the marble. No one called after him. No one followed. He pushed through the grand double doors into the warm June evening, and the sounds of the wedding—the music, the murmuring, his sister's muffled sobs—faded behind him.

He got in his truck. Started the engine. Sat there for a long time, hands on the steering wheel, staring at nothing.

Then he drove away. And he never came back.

He drove north. He didn't know why—only that he needed to be as far from them as possible. Far from the money, the judgment, the hollow smiles. Far from Lauren. Far from the memory of her face when she told him to leave.

He drove for days. Through cities, then towns, then villages, then nothing. The landscape changed around him—green giving way to grey, warmth giving way to cold. He crossed into Canada without caring. Kept going. The roads narrowed. The trees thickened. The sky grew heavy and pale.

He ended up in a small town in the Yukon—a cluster of buildings huddled against the cold like frightened animals. He stopped for supplies. The man at the general store, a weathered old-timer with kind eyes, watched Elias load canned food and blankets into his truck.

"You heading up into the mountains?" the old man asked.

"Yeah," Elias said. He didn't elaborate.

"How far?"

"Far."

The old man studied him for a long moment. "Son, I've lived here forty years. I've seen men go up into those mountains. Big men. Strong men. Tougher than you, no offense." He paused. "They don't come back."

Elias looked at him. Something in his eyes must have communicated what words couldn't, because the old man's expression shifted from concern to something like pity.

"I'm not looking to come back," Elias said quietly.

The old man nodded slowly. "Then God help you, son."

Elias drove deeper into the frozen wilderness until the roads disappeared entirely. He found a small cabin—abandoned, half-buried in snow, but structurally sound. It would do. It would have to.

The first weeks were manageable. He had supplies. He had firewood. He had silence. The silence was what he wanted most. No voices. No judgments. No one telling him he wasn't enough.

But the Yukon winter was merciless. It descended like a living thing, wrapping itself around the cabin, pressing against the walls, seeping through every crack and gap. Temperatures plummeted below -40 degrees Celsius. The wind howled—not like an animal, but like something older. Something hungry.

His firewood ran out first. Then his food dwindled. The blizzards came one after another, relentless, making it impossible to venture outside for more than minutes at a time. His blankets—thin, inadequate things—did nothing against the penetrating cold.

Elias could feel his sanity slipping. The isolation that had once felt like freedom now felt like a prison. The howling wind outside became voices. Whispers. Accusations.

You're nothing.

You were always nothing.

Not even your own sister wanted you.

He pressed his hands over his ears, but the voices weren't outside. They were inside. They were him.

Days blurred together. He stopped eating—there was nothing left to eat. He stopped moving—there was nowhere to go. He simply lay on the frozen floor of the cabin, wrapped in his useless blankets, and waited.

The cold took him slowly. It started in his extremities—fingers and toes going numb, then his hands, his feet. It crept inward like a tide, claiming more of him with every passing hour. His shivering grew violent, then weak, then stopped entirely. That was the worst sign. He knew enough to know that when the shivering stopped, the body had given up.

His vision began to fade. The dim interior of the cabin grew darker, darker, until he couldn't tell if his eyes were open or closed. His heartbeat slowed—he could feel it, each beat coming further apart, like a clock winding down. His blood was turning to ice in his veins.

This is it, he thought. This is how I die. Alone. Forgotten. Exactly like they always wanted.

Then everything went black.

Elias opened his eyes to nothing.

Not darkness—nothing. An absence so complete it had weight. He floated in it, or stood in it, or existed in it—he couldn't tell. There was no ground beneath his feet, no sky above his head. Just an infinite, empty void that stretched in every direction forever.

He looked down. He could see his hands. They were pale, trembling, still bearing the frostbite marks from the cabin. He could see his body, his clothes, himself—clearly, as if lit from within. But there was no light source. No shadows. Just... visibility in a place where visibility shouldn't exist.

"What the hell..." he whispered. His voice didn't echo. It simply existed and then was gone, swallowed by the void.

He turned in a slow circle, scanning for anything—a wall, a floor, a horizon. Nothing. Just endless, oppressive emptiness.

Then the voice came.

It didn't come from a direction. It came from everywhere and nowhere simultaneously—a sound that seemed to originate inside his skull and outside his body at the same time. It was cold, impossibly cold, like the voice itself was made of frost and shadow. But there was something else in it too. Something almost... welcoming. Like a fire burning at the bottom of a frozen lake.

"You look cold... you will get sick and die like that..."

Elias spun around. Nothing. No one. Just the void.

"Who's there?" he demanded, his voice hoarse. "Show yourself!"

Silence. Long, heavy, suffocating silence. Then:

"You look cold," the voice repeated, slower this time, savoring each word. "Shivering... fading... dying. How pitiful."

"Wait—" Elias's mind raced. "I'm not dead?!"

More silence. Elias counted the seconds. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Each one felt like an hour.

"Not yet," the voice finally answered. There was amusement in it. Dark, ancient amusement. "But it won't be long. Your body is failing. Your heart is barely beating. A few more minutes in that frozen tomb of yours, and you'll be nothing but a frozen corpse that no one will ever find."

The words hit Elias like a physical blow. Not because they were cruel—but because they were true.

"And what am I supposed to do?!" Elias snapped, his frustration boiling over. "I have no wood for fire! I have no food! I don't even have a good blanket! What CAN I do?! Tell me! What the hell am I supposed to do?!"

His voice cracked on the last word. The anger drained out of him as quickly as it had come, leaving only exhaustion. Despair. He was so tired. So cold. So alone.

A low chuckle rolled through the void. It was deep and resonant, vibrating in Elias's chest like the rumble of distant thunder. It went on for several seconds—unhurried, savoring his desperation.

"I might be able to help you," the voice said at last.

Elias raised an eyebrow. Despite everything—despite the cold, the void, the impossibility of his situation—curiosity flickered in him. A tiny flame refusing to die.

"Help me?" he repeated. "How? And... how can you do that when I don't even know who you are? Where are you? What is this place?"

"So many questions," the voice mused. "You humans always ask so many questions. Who, what, where, why. As if the answers would change anything."

"I think knowing who's offering me help in a literal void is a pretty reasonable question," Elias shot back.

Another chuckle. Longer this time. Almost appreciative.

"Very well," the voice said, and the void seemed to darken—if that was even possible. The temperature, already nonexistent, seemed to drop further. "I am called many things. In many tongues. In many worlds. But you... you may call me Zalgo."

The name landed in Elias's mind like a stone dropped into still water. It rippled outward, carrying with it a primal, instinctive dread—the kind that lived in the oldest part of the human brain. The part that remembered what it was like to be prey.

"Zalgo," Elias repeated. The word felt wrong in his mouth. Heavy. Alive. "What... what are you?"

"I am what waits at the end of all things," Zalgo said. His voice had shifted—no longer playful, but vast. Infinite. Like hearing the ocean speak. "I am the darkness between stars. The silence after the last scream. I am inevitability."

Elias swallowed hard. "And you want to... help me?"

"I want to offer you a choice," Zalgo corrected. "There is a difference."

"What choice?"

"I can make you better, Elias. Stronger. Faster. More durable than anything that walks or crawls or flies. The cold will never touch you again. Pain will be a memory. Weakness—a forgotten dream. I can remake you into something... magnificent."

Elias was quiet for a long time. The void pressed against him, patient and eternal.

"And if I accept this... offer," Elias said slowly, carefully, "what do you get out of it?"

"Ah." Zalgo's voice carried a smile—Elias could hear it, even without seeing a face. "There it is. The smart question. The only question that matters."

"So answer it."

"What do I get?" Zalgo repeated, as if tasting the words. "I get... entertainment. I get to watch what you become. I get to see what a broken man does when he's given the power of something far beyond broken."

"That's it? You just want to watch?"

"You ask too many questions, Elias." The voice hardened. The playfulness evaporated, replaced by something cold and absolute. "My offer is about to expire. The window between life and death is narrow, and yours is closing fast. So what's it going to be?"

Silence.

"Freeze and die alone in that cabin?" Zalgo continued. "Become a frozen corpse that your family will never find? That your sister will never mourn? That the world will never notice is gone?" Each word was a knife, precise and merciless. "Or... live. Live stronger than you could ever be. Live as something that will never be ignored. Never be dismissed. Never be made to feel small again."

Elias closed his eyes. He thought of Lauren. Of her face at the wedding. Of the words: Get out, Elias. Leave. He thought of his father's crossed arms. His mother's averted eyes. He thought of Marcus's smirk. He thought of every dinner where no one asked about his day. Every birthday they forgot. Every moment he'd been made to feel like he didn't matter.

He thought of the cold. The endless, merciless cold that was killing him right now, in that cabin, alone.

"Alright," Elias said. His voice was barely a whisper. "Whatever it is... just... please... make sure I never feel this freezing cold again."

The void was silent for a moment. Then Zalgo spoke, and his voice was silk and venom and satisfaction all at once.

"Oh, Elias... you won't feel a thing."

A flash of blinding white erupted in the void—so bright it burned through Elias's closed eyelids, so intense it seemed to rewrite reality itself. 

Then his eyes shot open.

He was back in the cabin. The same rotting walls. The same frost-covered floor. The same howling blizzard outside. But everything was different. Everything was wrong. Or maybe—everything was finally right.

He blinked. Once. Twice. Three times. His vision was sharper than it had ever been. He could see individual ice crystals forming on the wooden beams above him. He could see the grain of the wood in perfect detail, even in the near-total darkness.

Slowly, he stood up. His body moved with an ease that shouldn't have been possible for a man who'd been dying moments ago. There was no stiffness. No pain. No weakness. He rose to his full height—all six feet and seven inches—and felt... powerful. Overwhelmingly, terrifyingly powerful.

And the cold.

The cold was gone.

He could hear the blizzard raging outside—the wind screaming, the snow hammering against the cabin walls—but he felt nothing. No chill. No discomfort. It was as if the cold simply... didn't apply to him anymore. Like he existed outside its jurisdiction.

"What..." he murmured, looking down at himself. "What did you do to me?"

No answer. Zalgo's voice was gone. The void was gone. There was only the cabin, the storm, and whatever Elias had become.

He found himself walking toward the cabin door. Not deciding to walk—simply walking, as if his body knew what to do before his mind caught up. His hand closed around the frozen door handle. He didn't feel the cold of the metal. He pushed.

The door flew open with such force that it nearly tore off its hinges. The blizzard hit him full force—a wall of wind and snow and ice that should have knocked him backward, should have frozen him solid in seconds. Instead, he stood in the doorway like a monolith, unmoved, unflinching.

And he could see. Through the blinding white of the storm, through the dense curtain of snow, he could see everything. The trees, fifty yards away, were crystal clear. The mountain ridge beyond them, sharp as a photograph. His eyes cut through the blizzard like it was nothing more than a light fog.

"This is impossible," he whispered.

He took one step out into the storm. The snow crunched beneath his boot—but he didn't sink. The wind pushed against him—but he didn't sway. He stood in the heart of a Yukon blizzard, wearing nothing but the clothes he'd been dying in, and felt absolutely nothing.

He looked at his hands.

They were not his hands anymore.

The skin was pale white—not the pink-white of cold, but the dead white of a corpse. It looked like frozen flesh, like skin that had died and hardened into something new. And his fingers... his nails had changed. They were longer now, darker, curving into sharp, claw-like points that gleamed even in the dim storm-light.

He flexed his fingers. The claws responded perfectly, naturally, as if they'd always been there.

He should have been horrified. He should have screamed, should have panicked, should have clawed at his own skin trying to find the man underneath. But he didn't. Instead, he felt something he hadn't felt in years.

He felt like himself.

No—better than himself. He felt like what he was always supposed to be.

He walked deeper into the storm. Each step was sure, powerful, deliberate. The wind parted around him like water around a stone. The snow swirled but didn't touch him. He was a force moving through a force, and the blizzard was losing.

After what felt like hours—or minutes, time had lost its meaning—the storm began to die down. The wind softened. The snow thinned. The world emerged around him in shades of white and grey and black, a frozen landscape of skeletal trees and endless snow.

Then he felt it. Eyes on him.

He stopped. Stood perfectly still. His new senses—sharper than any human's had a right to be—reached out into the frozen forest. He could hear heartbeats. Multiple. Fast. Hungry.

Wolves.

He scanned the treeline with his enhanced vision. There—a grey shape between the pines. There—another, circling to his left. And there, and there, and there. A full pack, at least eight strong, stalking him from every direction. They were thin. Starving. Desperate enough to attack something his size.

Elias didn't move. He didn't run. He didn't even tense.

Instead, he smiled.

It was a terrible smile. The kind that had no warmth in it. The kind that belonged to something that had stopped being prey and become something else entirely.

"Come on, then," he whispered into the frozen air. "Try me."

The alpha struck first. It launched from the treeline like a grey missile, jaws wide, aiming for Elias's throat. Elias didn't dodge. He let it come. The wolf's teeth clamped down on his forearm with crushing force—enough to shatter bone in any normal man.

Elias felt the pressure. The squeeze. The wolf's jaw working, trying to tear through flesh.

But there was no pain. None. It was like being gripped by a vice—uncomfortable, perhaps, but utterly harmless.

He looked down at the wolf hanging from his arm, its yellow eyes wild with confusion. It had bitten down with everything it had, and its prey hadn't even flinched.

"My turn," Elias said.

He grabbed the wolf by the scruff of its neck with his free hand and ripped it off his arm. The animal yelped, thrashing, but Elias's grip was iron. He lifted the wolf—sixty, seventy pounds of muscle and fur—like it weighed nothing. Then he threw it.

The wolf sailed through the air and crashed into a tree trunk ten feet away with a sickening thud. It slid to the ground and didn't get up.

The pack hesitated. Elias could see them in the trees, see their confusion, their fear warring with their hunger. Then another wolf lunged—this one from behind, going for his legs.

Elias spun with impossible speed for a man his size. He caught the wolf mid-leap, one massive hand closing around its throat. The animal's momentum died instantly, its body swinging forward while its neck stayed locked in Elias's grip.

He squeezed.

The snap was loud. Clear. Final. The wolf's body went limp instantly, its eyes glazing over in a heartbeat. Elias held it for a moment—feeling the weight of it, the stillness of it—then let it drop to the snow.

Dead.

The rest of the pack attacked all at once. Eight wolves, driven mad by hunger and pack instinct, launched themselves at Elias from every direction. Teeth and claws and snarling fury.

What followed was not a fight. It was a massacre.

Elias moved through them like a force of nature. His claws—those terrible, beautiful claws—tore through fur and flesh and bone with horrifying ease. He grabbed wolves out of the air and broke them. He caught them mid-bite and crushed them. He moved with a speed and brutality that no human body should have been capable of, and when it was over—when the snarling stopped and the snow was painted red—Elias stood alone in a field of carnage.

He was breathing hard. Not from exhaustion—from exhilaration.

He looked at the pack, massacred across the snow-covered ground. Eight wolves. Dead. Torn apart by his bare hands. And he felt... good. Alive. More alive than he'd felt in years.

He reached down and picked up one of the dead wolves. Gripped its hind leg. And tore it off with a single, effortless pull. The sound of separating flesh and snapping bone filled the quiet forest.

He pulled down his mouth cover and took a huge bite of raw meat.

It was delicious. Not just edible—genuinely, deeply delicious. The blood was warm on his lips, the flesh tender between his teeth. He'd always preferred his meat cooked, but this... this was something else entirely. This satisfied a hunger he hadn't known he had.

He ate. And as he ate, he remembered to check his wounds. The first wolf had bitten him—hard. He'd felt the teeth pierce his skin, felt the pressure deep in his flesh. He looked at his forearm.

Nothing. The skin was smooth. Pale and dead-looking, yes, but unbroken. No punctures. No tears. No blood. It was as if the wound had never existed.

He checked his legs where other wolves had gotten their teeth in during the melee. Same thing. Nothing. Every wound, healed. Instantly. Completely.

Elias stood in the bloody snow, surrounded by death, and understood what he had become. He wasn't human anymore. He wasn't sure he was even alive in any way that word traditionally meant. He was something else. Something new. Something wretched and powerful and free.

He thought of his family. Of Lauren. Of Marcus. Of his parents. Of the wedding. Of the words get out and that's for you to figure out and you're a relic.

He thought of Zalgo's voice in the void. You won't feel a thing.

And he didn't. He didn't feel the cold. He didn't feel pain. He didn't feel the weakness that had defined his entire human life.

But he felt something else. Something dark and hungry and patient, coiling in his chest like a serpent waiting to strike.

He didn't feel human anymore. But whatever he had become—this wretched thing, born of betrayal and cold and the dark gift of Zalgo—was something he embraced completely.

Elias Thourn was dead. He'd frozen to death in a cabin in the Yukon, alone and forgotten, just like his family always wanted.

But Elias the Wretched was alive. And he would never be cold again.

He would never be ignored again.

reddit.com
u/Grayton14 — 2 months ago

The Prodigal (Origin)

(I got the idea for this origin when I was listening to the song "The Last Crusade" by Echo Harper. I imagined the Prodigal emerging from a battlefield massacre with that song playing in the background)

Before he was known as The Prodigal, he was Maverick Stone, a man forged in the unforgiving Appalachian mountains of Virginia. His hands, calloused from years of working the unforgiving land, were now stained with the grim reality of war. Conscripted into the Confederate army, Maverick was a tall, quiet, stoic figure, his eyes reflecting the deep-seated weariness that plagued every soldier. The Civil War, like a ravenous beast, devoured men and souls alike, and Maverick, a man of simple faith, found his convictions eroding with each bloody skirmish.

He had seen too much. The gleam of bayonets in the pale moonlight, the desperate pleas of dying men, the hollow eyes of comrades who had witnessed unspeakable acts. The Battle of Antietam had been a turning point, a maelstrom of lead and steel that left him questioning the very nature of humanity.

"What God," he'd whispered to a dying friend, "would allow such a hell to be wrought by His own children?"

The winter of 1864 brought with it a cold that seeped into the very bones of the soldiers. Maverick's regiment, caught in a brutal ambush, was scattered and decimated. He found himself alone, wounded, and freezing, deep behind Union lines. Delirious from a fever that burned through him like wildfire, and with hunger gnawing at his gut, he stumbled through a desolate, snow-covered forest. The trees, skeletal and stark, seemed to point towards an ancient, forgotten burial ground, its weathered, moss-covered stones whispering forgotten tales of sacrifice and despair.

He collapsed amidst the graves, the cold seeping into his very core. In his desperation, with death's icy embrace drawing near, Maverick cried out, not to the God he felt had abandoned them, but to anything, any power, that would listen.

"I beg of you!" he rasped, his voice raw and broken. "End this suffering! End this endless war! I will give anything, my very being, if only this madness would cease! Punish those who revel in this destruction, those who profit from the blood of innocents!"

His desperate plea hung in the frigid air, a desperate offering. A chilling silence descended, deeper than the winter's hush. Then, from the very earth beneath him, a presence stirred. It was ancient, primordial, a malevolent force that had slumbered for centuries, awakened by the raw anguish of a dying man. A voice, not of sound but of thought, echoed in his mind, cold and resonant- 

"You seek an end to suffering, mortal? You seek justice for the innocent? I can grant you the power to be both judge and executioner. But the cost... the cost will be everything you once were. Your humanity, your name, your very voice... all will be forfeit. You will become an instrument of retribution, forever bound to the shadows."

Maverick, his mind clouded by pain and despair, saw only the promise of an end to the bloodshed.

"I accept!" he croaked, his last human word. "Let me be your instrument!"

The transformation was agonizing. His body contorted, his muscles coiling with unnatural strength. His skin tightened, becoming smooth and bald, his features sharpening into something inhuman. His eyes, once a weary blue, ignited with a furious, unholy red glow. His mouth, the instrument of his desperate plea, sealed itself shut, a permanent testament to the vow he had made. He felt an immense power surge through him, a connection to the very fabric of shadow, allowing him to flicker from one place to another in an instant.

He rose from the graves, no longer Maverick Stone, but something else entirely. He found a massive scythe, seemingly woven from the very darkness that now enveloped him, lying beside him. He returned to the battlefield, a silent, towering figure, his new form striking terror into the hearts of all who beheld him. He moved with impossible speed, teleporting through the chaos, the scythe a deadly extension of his will. He cut down soldiers from both sides, not with malice, but with a chilling, detached efficiency, a grim reaper seeking to end the war by ending all who fought in it. He was a force of nature, a living embodiment of the war's despair, a prodigal son returned from the abyss, forever cursed to hunt those who inflict pain, a twisted echo of the soldier he once was, forever bound to a pact made in the darkest hour of the Civil War. He is the ultimate consequence of man's inhumanity, a silent, red-eyed judge, teleporting through the shadows to deliver his grim, scythe-wielding justice to those he deems worthy of his eternal pursuit. His origins are lost.

reddit.com
u/Grayton14 — 2 months ago

Damian the Blackout (New Origin)

(I got the idea for this origin for Damian from a Dhar Mann video... one of the best filmmakers on YouTube. But events like this would normally break someone)

The rain in Oakhaven did not wash things clean. It only made the soot and grease of the valley stick to the brick walls of the high school. Damian sat at the kitchen table, staring into a mug of black coffee that had gone cold an hour ago. Across from him, his father, Thomas, sat in his police uniform, though his badge had been stripped from his chest, leaving only a pale, unfaded shield-shaped patch on the dark blue fabric. 

"They are moving her to the state facility on Tuesday," Thomas said. His voice was flat, dried out by weeks of shouting in courtrooms and whispering in precinct corridors. "They won't let us see her before the transfer. Standard procedure, they said. But we know why."

Damian did not look up. "Because of Councilman Miller."

"Because of Ethan," Thomas corrected, though his jaw tightened so hard the muscle bunched under his stubble. "And his father. A councilman’s word is law in this town, Damian. Especially when his star-quarterback son is sitting in a hospital bed with shattered legs."

"Ethan was drunk, Dad," Damian said, his voice barely a whisper, yet carrying a jagged edge. "Mom was driving thirty miles an hour. She had her seatbelt on. She had the green light. Everyone in that precinct knows the breathalyzer results disappeared from the evidence locker."

Thomas closed his eyes. The silence that followed was heavy, punctuated only by the rhythmic dripping of a leaky pipe under the sink. "I know. But the report says she crossed the yellow line. The report says she was distracted by her grading papers. And now... now they’re looking at your uncle Marcus. The school board is investigating him for 'financial discrepancies' in the athletic department. They won't stop until they’ve cleared every one of us out of this county."

"It’s a purge," Damian said.

"It's Oakhaven," Thomas replied, standing up and reaching for his keys. "Go to school, Damian. Keep your head down. Don't look at them. Don't talk to them. Just... survive the semester."

But survival was a luxury Damian could no longer afford. When he walked through the double doors of Oakhaven High that morning, the air felt different. It was thicker, charged with a cruel energy. The whispers started before he even reached his locker.

"There he is."

"Cop's kid. His mom tried to kill Ethan."

"Should be in a cell right next to her."

Damian gripped the strap of his backpack until his knuckles turned white. He looked down, his mother’s advice echoing in his mind: The truth is a quiet thing, Damian. It doesn't need to scream to be real. But the truth was currently locked behind iron bars in a county jail, while the lie walked the halls with a polished grin.

Ethan Miller sat in his chrome wheelchair at the end of the hallway, his legs encased in heavy plaster casts. His varsity jacket was draped over his shoulders, but it felt like a lead weight. Around him, his teammates—the Oakhaven Wolves—were laughing, throwing crumpled paper balls at the freshman lockers. 

"Look at the freak," Jax, the defensive end, muttered, nodding toward Damian as he walked past. Jax stepped out, deliberately blocking Damian’s path with his massive frame. "Hey, Miller-killer. Your old lady get her cafeteria tray yet? I hear the meatloaf in lockup is great."

Damian stopped. He didn't look up, but his shoulders were rigid. 

"Leave it, Jax," Ethan said. His voice was weak, lacking the booming authority he used to command on the field. 

Jax laughed, turning back to Ethan. "Come on, man. He’s the reason you’re in that chair. If his bitch mother knew how to drive, we’d be heading to the state championships next week. We’re just keeping him honest."

"I said leave it," Ethan repeated, his grip tightening on the armrests of his wheelchair. He looked at Damian, trying to catch his eye, wanting to say something—anything—to bridge the chasm between them. But Damian’s face was a mask of cold, unyielding stone. Damian walked around Jax, his boots clicking rhythmically against the linoleum.

Later that evening, in the grand, high-ceilinged study of the Miller estate, Ethan confronted his father. Councilman Richard Miller was pouring himself a scotch, the amber liquid catching the light of the fireplace.

"Dad, we have to stop this," Ethan said, his voice trembling. "The police report... the breathalyzer... you changed it. I was the one who drank the vodka at the tailgate. I was the one who ran the light."

Richard Miller didn't turn around immediately. He took a slow sip of his drink, then set the glass down with a soft, deliberate clack on the mahogany desk. When he turned, his eyes were cold, devoid of the warmth he showed to voters.

"We have discussed this, Ethan," Richard said softly. "You have a scholarship to State. You have a future. A felony DUI would have ruined your life before it even began."

"But Mrs. Vance is in prison!" Ethan shouted, his voice cracking. "And Damian... they’re destroying his family, Dad! They suspended his father. They’re trying to fire his uncle. Jax and the guys are torturing him at school!"

Richard walked over, kneeling beside his son’s wheelchair. He placed a heavy, manicured hand on Ethan’s shoulder. "Mrs. Vance was a public school teacher with a mediocre record. Her husband is a low-level beat cop who didn't know his place. They are acceptable casualties, Ethan. You are not. You will keep your mouth shut, you will play the victim, and you will let this pass. If you speak a single word of this to anyone, I will ensure that the Vance family suffers in ways you cannot possibly comprehend. Do you understand me?"

Ethan looked into his father’s eyes and saw a bottomless, chilling vacancy. He nodded slowly, the weight of the lie crushing the remaining air from his lungs.

The change in Damian didn't happen overnight. It was a slow, agonizing erosion. 

It started with the graffiti on his locker—MURDERER written in thick, red permanent marker. The administration did nothing. "We don't have the janitorial staff to clean every little scribble, Damian," the vice principal had said, not even looking up from his computer. "Perhaps if your family wasn't causing so much public distraction, these things wouldn't happen."

Then came the physical confrontations. 

It was a Thursday afternoon when Jax and two other players cornered him in the boys' locker room. They grabbed his backpack, dumping his books into a toilet bowl. When Damian reached for them, Jax shoved him against the rusted metal lockers.

"What are you gonna do, cry to your daddy?" Jax sneered. "Oh wait, he doesn't have a badge anymore. He’s just another drunk loser sitting on a porch."

Something in Damian snapped. He didn't scream. He didn't curse. He simply lunged forward, his fist striking Jax squarely in the jaw. The crack of bone was loud in the tiled room. Jax stumbled back, blood pooling in his mouth, his eyes wide with shock. The other two players immediately tackled Damian to the floor, kicking him repeatedly in the ribs, but Damian didn't make a sound. He just stared up at them through the blood dripping from his eyebrow, his eyes wide, unblinking, and terrifyingly calm.

"He's psycho," one of the players whispered, backing away. "Look at him. He’s not even crying."

From that day on, Damian stopped hiding. He didn't keep his head down. When he walked the halls, he stared directly at his tormentors. His silence was no longer a sign of submission; it was a promise. 

The fog was thick over the Oakhaven Gorge on Friday night. The old iron truss bridge, long closed to vehicular traffic, was a shortcut between the high school and the lower valley where Damian lived. The rusted metal structures groaned in the wind, suspended eighty feet above the jagged rocks and shallow, rushing waters of the river below.

Damian was halfway across the bridge when the headlights of a pickup truck flickered through the mist at the far end. The engine roared, and the truck skidded to a halt, blocking the exit. Three figures stepped out of the cab, their silhouettes tall and menacing in the yellow glare of the high beams.

It was Jax, his jaw wired shut and covered in a thick bandage, accompanied by Brody and Marcus—the starting offensive line.

"Nowhere to run tonight, Vance," Brody called out, his voice echoing off the iron girders. He carried a heavy wooden baseball bat, tapping it rhythmically against his palm.

Damian stopped. He looked back, but the fog had swallowed the path behind him. He was trapped in the middle of the span.

"You think you're tough because you got a lucky shot on Jax?" Marcus sneered, stepping forward. "You ruined our season. You ruined Ethan’s life. And now you’re gonna pay the toll."

Damian didn't back up. He stood his ground as the three boys closed the distance. "Ethan ran the light," Damian said, his voice flat, unaffected by the cold wind or the threat of the bat. "He was drunk. Your school, your town, your parents—they are all built on a rot. And you are the maggots crawling inside it."

With a roar of anger, Brody swung the bat. Damian ducked, the wooden barrel whistling inches above his hair. He drove his shoulder into Brody’s midsection, lifting the larger boy and slamming him against the iron railing. Jax lunged, grabbing Damian from behind in a chokehold, while Marcus rained punches into Damian’s stomach.

Damian fought like a feral animal. He bit Jax’s forearm, forcing the boy to scream through his wired jaw and release his grip. Damian spun, catching Marcus with a sharp elbow to the temple, sending him stumbling back into the fog. He was winning. Even outnumbered, the sheer, concentrated hatred in his veins gave him a strength that defied his slender frame.

Brody scrambled to his feet, his face pale, his nose bleeding. He looked at Damian, who was advancing on him with a bloody smile, his eyes reflecting the yellow headlights like a predator in the brush. Panic—pure, unadulterated, cowardly panic—took hold of Brody.

"Get away from me!" Brody shrieked. 

As Damian stepped forward, Brody lunged with both hands, throwing his entire weight into a desperate, frantic shove. 

Damian’s boots lost their grip on the wet, rusted iron of the bridge deck. He stumbled backward, his spine hitting the low safety railing. For a fraction of a second, he hung in the air, his eyes locked onto Brody’s terrified face. 

Then, he fell.

The drop was silent. There was no scream. Just the rushing of the wind, the sudden, violent impact of the rocks, and then... nothing.

On the bridge, the three boys stood frozen. Brody crept to the edge, looking down into the black abyss of the gorge. The fog swirled, hiding the bottom, but the sound of the rushing water was deafening.

"Is he... did he..." Marcus stammered, his hands shaking.

"He's dead," Jax hissed, his voice muffled by his bandages. "He has to be. Nobody survives that fall."

"Oh my god, oh my god, we killed him," Brody whispered, dropping the bat. "We’re going to jail. We’re going to jail!"

"Shut up!" Jax grabbed Brody by the collar, shaking him. "Nobody saw us. The fog is too thick. We were at the diner all night. We don't say a word. We run. Now!"

They scrambled back to the truck, the tires screeching as they backed off the bridge, leaving nothing behind but the scent of burning rubber and the cold, indifferent mist.

At the bottom of the gorge, Damian lay flat on his back. His legs were bent at unnatural angles, his chest crushed, his eyes staring wide and lifeless at the dark sky above. The water lapped at his boots, turning the blood pooling around his head into a pale, pink froth.

He was dead.

Damian did not wake up in heaven, nor did he descend into hell. He woke up in a place where the concept of direction did not exist. 

The sky was the color of dried blood, a bruised, static crimson that seemed to pulse with a low, vibrating hum. There was no ground, yet he stood upright. There was no air, yet he could breathe. The silence here was not the absence of sound; it was a heavy, suffocating pressure that pressed against his eardrums like deep water.

"Damian..."

The voice did not come from a specific direction. It vibrated through his bones, shaking the very marrow inside them. It sounded like a thousand voices speaking in unison—some crying, some laughing, some screaming in agony, all woven into a single, terrifying chord.

Damian looked around. The crimson space began to tear. Seven great, jagged fissures opened in the air around him, bleeding a thick, pitch-black darkness that did not mix with the red light. From the largest fissure, a shadow emerged. It had no definite shape, but Damian could see eyes—hundreds of them, yellow and needle-thin, blinking in the darkness.

"Who are you?" Damian asked. His voice did not sound like his own. It was hollow, echoing as if spoken in a vast, empty cavern.

"We are the shadow beneath the floorboards," the voice rumbled, the fissures widening. "We are the rot in the roots. We are Zalgo. And you, Damian Vance, are a very beautiful instrument of wrath."

"I'm dead," Damian said, looking down at his hands. They were pale, almost translucent, the veins beneath his skin running with a dark, sluggish fluid that was definitely not blood.

"You were discarded," Zalgo purred, the sound like dry autumn leaves scraping against concrete. "Thrown away by those who build their castles on your silence. They sleep soundly in their beds, Damian. They believe the darkness has swallowed their secrets. But they do not know... the darkness belongs to us."

A shadow crept across the non-existent floor, wrapping around Damian’s ankles like cold, wet vines. 

"We can give you back your breath," Zalgo whispered, the yellow eyes closing in around him. "We can give you the power to extinguish their lights. Every candle they lit to guide their futures, you shall snuff out. You will be their blackout. You will make them suffer a demise so dark, so absolute, that even the earth will forget their names. Do you accept our gift?"

Damian thought of his mother, sitting alone in her grey cell, her spirit slowly breaking. He thought of his father, staring at his useless badge. He thought of Jax, Brody, and Marcus, laughing in their varsity jackets, protected by the golden shield of their parents' wealth.

A cold, terrible smile spread across Damian’s face.

"Give me the dark," Damian said.

The red sky shattered. The black fluid in the fissures surged forward, pouring into Damian’s mouth, his eyes, his ears, drowning him in a cold, suffocating tide of absolute, ancient malice.

The next morning, the sun rose over Oakhaven, but it did not feel warm. A strange, oppressive overcast hung over the town, filtering the light into a dull, sickly grey.

At Oakhaven High, the second-period English class was quiet. It was the class Mrs. Vance used to teach, now occupied by a nervous substitute who sat at the desk, frantically grading papers. Jax, Brody, and Marcus sat in the back row. They were pale, their eyes bloodshot, jumping at every sudden sound. 

"Did you hear?" Brody whispered to Jax, his voice shaking. "They haven't found him yet. His dad reported him missing this morning."

"Shut up," Jax hissed through his wired jaw. "We don't know anything. Just act normal."

Suddenly, the heavy wooden door of the classroom creaked open. 

The substitute teacher looked up, a scowl forming on her face. "You're late, young man. What is your—"

She stopped. The entire classroom went dead silent. 

Damian stood in the doorway. 

He looked like himself, yet entirely wrong. His skin was the color of damp plaster, devoid of any warmth or life. He wore his usual dark jacket, but the fabric seemed to absorb the light around it, casting no shadow on the floor. But it was his eyes that made the substitute's breath catch in her throat. The sclera—the whites of his eyes—were pitch black, and his pupils glowed with a faint, static-like grey light, like an old television set tuned to a dead channel.

He did not look at the teacher. He did not look at his classmates. He stepped into the room, his movements slow, fluid, and completely silent. 

Jax gripped his desk so hard the metal frame creaked. Brody looked as if he were about to vomit. 

Damian turned back to the door. He closed it slowly. The heavy brass latch clicked into place. Then, he reached down, grabbed the key that was sitting in the lock from the inside, turned it until it clicked, and snapped the key off in the mechanism. The metal snapped with a sound like a pistol shot.

"Hey! What are you doing?" Marcus shouted, his voice high and panicked as he stood up from his desk. "Unlock the door!"

Damian turned around. The grey static in his eyes flared. 

The lights in the classroom flickered. Once. Twice. And then, they went out. 

But it wasn't just a power outage. The windows, which had been letting in the grey morning light, suddenly became pitch black, as if someone had painted them with thick, light-consuming ink. The room was plunged into an absolute, suffocating darkness.

"What's happening?!" a girl shrieked.

"I can't see my hands! I can't see anything!"

Then, the screaming began. 

It was not a normal scream of fear. It was the sound of pure, unadulterated agony, accompanied by a wet, tearing sound and the heavy, metallic smell of fresh blood filling the air. The darkness itself seemed to be moving, shifting like a physical weight, pressing down on their chests, choking the air from their throats.

Ethan Miller rolled his wheelchair down the empty hallway. He was late for second period; his father had insisted on meeting with the principal that morning to discuss "security measures" regarding the Vance family. 

As he approached the English classroom, he noticed the silence. The hallway was completely deserted, but the air near the classroom felt freezing. His breath began to bloom in white plumes before him. The digital clock on the wall was flickering wildly, the red numbers spinning out of control before dying completely.

Squeak. Squeak.

The wheels of his chair were the only sound in the corridor. 

He reached the door. He noticed the keyhole first—the broken brass key still sticking out of it. And then, he smelled it. 

It was a smell he had only encountered once before, at the scene of his own accident. The smell of copper, of torn iron, of raw, exposed life.

"Jax?" Ethan called out, his hand trembling as he reached for the doorknob. "Brody? Is someone in there?"

The door wasn't locked from the outside. He pushed it. 

The door swung open with a heavy, wet groan. 

The classroom was not dark anymore, but the light that illuminated it was wrong. The overhead fluorescent bulbs were dead, but a faint, pulsing crimson glow emanated from the walls, as if the very bricks were bleeding light. 

Ethan’s breath hitched. He tried to scream, but the sound died in his throat.

The desks were overturned, shattered into splinters. The walls were painted with thick, dark arterial spray, dripping down the whiteboard and pooling on the linoleum. In the center of the room, a mountain of bodies lay tangled together—the Oakhaven Wolves, the substitute teacher, the classmates who had laughed, all of them torn apart with a savage, unnatural violence. Their eyes were wide, but the pupils had been burned out, leaving only empty, blackened sockets that looked like charred wood.

And standing in the center of the carnage was Damian.

He was covered in blood, but it didn't seem to be his. The black fluid in his veins pulsed visibly beneath his pale skin. He was holding Jax’s varsity jacket in his left hand, the fabric shredded to ribbons.

"Damian..." Ethan whispered, his voice cracking, tears streaming down his face as his wheelchair rolled back an inch. "What... what did you do? Oh my god, what did you do?"

Damian did not answer. 

He slowly turned his head. The black voids of his eyes locked onto Ethan. For a second, Ethan thought he saw a flicker of the old Damian—the quiet boy who used to sit in the back of the library, the boy whose mother used to bring cookies for the class. But then, the grey static in his pupils flared, cold and dead.

Damian let go of the jacket. It hit the bloody floor with a soft, wet thud. 

He walked forward. He didn't rush. He didn't raise his hands in a threat. He simply walked past Ethan’s wheelchair, his shoulder brushing against Ethan’s varsity jacket. The cold that radiated from him was so intense that Ethan’s shoulder went completely numb, the fabric of his jacket instantly frosting over with a thin layer of white ice.

Damian did not look back. He walked out into the hallway, his boots leaving wet, red prints on the clean tiles, disappearing into the grey fog that had begun to seep through the school's ventilation shafts.

Councilman Richard Miller sat in his office at the municipal building, his fingers tapping impatiently on his desk. The phones were down. The internet was down. The entire block had lost power ten minutes ago, and his assistants were running around like headless chickens trying to find a backup generator.

"Incompetent fools," Richard muttered, standing up and walking to the window. 

Outside, the streetlights were dead. The cars had stopped in the middle of the road, their hazard lights failing to blink. The sky above was no longer grey; it was a deep, bruised purple, the clouds churning in a slow, unnatural spiral directly over the town hall.

The door to his office clicked.

"I told you not to disturb me until the power was—" Richard began, turning around.

The words died in his mouth.

The room went black. Not the darkness of a closed room, but a heavy, physical blackness that rushed in like water through a broken dam. The emergency lights on the wall didn't turn on. The screen of his laptop died instantly. Even the fire in the hearth was snuffed out, the glowing embers turning to grey ash in a fraction of a second.

"Who's there?" Richard demanded, his hand reaching for the heavy brass paperweight on his desk. "I have a gun in this drawer. I suggest you leave."

"Your gun cannot shoot what it cannot see, Richard."

The voice did not come from the room. It came from inside his own head, a chorus of whispering, scraping voices that made his teeth ache.

A figure materialized in the center of the room. It was Damian, but he was no longer solid. He seemed to be made of the darkness itself, his outline shifting and blurring like smoke. The only solid parts of him were his eyes—two black voids with glowing grey static humming inside them.

"Damian Vance," Richard whispered, his bravado crumbling. He backed away until his spine hit the glass of the window. "I... I can help your mother. I can get her out. I have connections. I can make the charges disappear!"

"The charges are already gone," the voices whispered from the shadows. "Along with the school. Along with the team. Along with your legacy."

"What... what do you want?" Richard sobbed, sliding down the glass to his knees. "Please. I'll give you anything. Money. The town. Just let me go."

The figure of Damian leaned down, his face inches from Richard’s. The cold radiating from him was absolute, freezing the tears on Richard’s cheeks into ice.

"I want the lights out," Damian whispered.

Richard opened his mouth to scream, but the darkness rushed in, filling his throat, his lungs, his eyes. 

When the police finally managed to enter the municipal building three days later, they found the councilman’s office completely intact. Nothing was stolen. No windows were broken. 

But Richard Miller was still there, sitting in his leather chair. 

His skin was pale and cold as marble. His eyes were wide open, but the pupils had been completely burned away, leaving only charred, empty sockets. The expression on his face was one of absolute, eternal horror. 

And on his mahogany desk, written in a thick, frost-like substance that refused to melt, were four words-

THE LIGHT IS GONE.

Oakhaven is a ghost town now. The state government quarantined the valley, citing a "severe environmental hazard and localized atmospheric anomaly." The power grid was never restored. No matter how many generators they bring in, no matter how many cables they lay, the electricity simply dies the moment it crosses the valley line.

But if you ever find yourself driving past the old highway exit on a foggy night, when the moon is swallowed by the clouds and your car engine begins to sputter... 

Look at your dashboard. Watch the digital clock flicker and die. Feel the sudden, freezing chill that creeps through your vents.

And if you look out into the mist toward the old iron bridge, you might just see him. A large figure standing in the middle of the road, his eyes glowing with the cold, dead static of a forgotten channel, waiting to turn your lights out forever.

Because Damian doesn't just want revenge anymore. 

He is the dark. And the dark is hungry.

reddit.com
u/Grayton14 — 2 months ago