Common app essay
Hi i want to apply to nyu and i am currently working on essay ideas i have come up with two ideas that revolve around the same topic
The GPS turn essay
So this is gonna be about how one day when my sister and I were driving we took the wrong turn but the GPS didn’t tell us to go back to the start or back through the same road it gave us another way to reach our destination a longer way but it still got us to were we want to be, and I am gonna link that to losing my mother and how when i lost her i didn’t have to stop going or go back to the start no the path I’m on is not a mistake, just a different route to where I’m meant to be.
The cell essay
This is gonna talk about the cell and how each part of the cell had its own function so i am gonna link the losing the nucleus to losing my mother ( because the nucleus is what controls the cell and keeps it stable) and how i thought that now i can never be stable and i cant live until i realised that her memories are my nucleus they are what shaped and guided me to where and that losing her doesn’t mean i have to forget her it means i live for her make her proud even if she isn’t her and then i am gonna link the different parts of the cells like mitochondria and cell membrane to how i adapted and without her and what helped me
Would appreciate any help and feedbacks!!
P.S ill apply to biology with a minor in environmental science