u/Honey-Blob

Feedback for Animated Logo Timing
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Feedback for Animated Logo Timing

I am helping out the small business I work for and am trying to take the logo and animate it. I am using adobe after effect for the first time. But my goodness the timing is terrible. I have simply added all my key frames and effects, separated by one second each. I have no reference other than the logo itself. I have edited out the company name just because. I have received some feedback from a coworker, he thought the eyeball was "tumbling" or rolling. How do I make it look more like a blink? Do I make it a more believable blink by messing with the timing as well? Thank you for any feedback! Link to animated logo

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u/Honey-Blob — 11 days ago