u/I_need_a_new-name

This is a very amateur screenplay, and I honestly only started it for fun and as a writing exercise to get back into the groove of writing, but now I’m kind of wondering if it has any sort of potential, and I just wanna see what other people besides my friends have to say.
its going to be a horror movie with some satirical elements, but it’s pretty short so far so it doesn’t really get into the meat of it. I can explain more about my idea in the comments if asked.
any advice would be appreciated!!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1glKjHB5_nUUWB5dkslR7_NQGtmkwuSJe/view?usp=drivesdk

It’s taken a lot of fighting with my insurance company and patience but I’m finally on T!! Im literally freshly on it and I’m so excited yet so, so nervous and I really wish I wasn’t so anxious. I‘m so grateful to be on it, like don’t get me wrong but part of me is so afraid. Like one of the major things for me is singing voice, because I’ve essentially been singing all of my life, and I sing at least once every hour of the day even if it’s not like fully fledged performing, y’know? I just wanna be able to have fun with my voice as it changes, it’s not like I expect to keep my super crazy high notes. Those are tired anyway.
also I’m kind of nervous about the hunger part alongside a bunch of other things, but in the end its the same exact learning curve that cis guys have to go through, and if I give into my fears then I’m just never gonna get where I need to be. i’ll probably end up checking up on this post again in a few months to give an update on where I am :)

But yeah any general advice you might have would be appreciated!
Thanks for reading everyone!! hope you have a good rest of your day/night :)