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so I am writing a book for fun about twisted angels in a cyberpunk city and in the middle of the city is the tree of the knowledge of good and evil and when someone eats from it they go mad and like go crazy immediately after eating the fruit I know thats not what happens in the bible (I am not Christian but my book is based off the Bible) but it is based on it, could this work?

could a book be like futuristic, glowing swords and guns, laser, floating cars stuff like that but at the same time could it be more like medieval thinking, mediaeval like style of social life like Emperor, Shogun, Daimyo, Samurai, Ashigaru, Peasants, Artisans, Merchants, Buddhist monks, Shinto priests, etc but like futuristic could that work?

the names are Japanese for a book I am writing for fun but I don’t know if they are too hard to read or pronounce and is it‘s disrespectful that the names are Japanese and I am not

Gōman Mushi — 傲慢無視

Shitto Kōkyō — 嫉妬恐怖

Fukushū Fundo — 復讐憤怒

Taida no Fukō — 怠惰不幸

Gōyoku Shakkin — 強欲借金

Taishoku Yume — 大食夢

Shikiyoku Sonkei — 色欲尊敬

Jigoku Akuma — 地獄悪魔

so I am writing a book for fun but all the names are Japanese and mean things in Japanese, is that rude or disrespectful and do you beautiful people of Reddit think the names are too hard to read or say out loud

Gōman Mushi — 傲慢無視

Shitto Kōkyō — 嫉妬恐怖

Fukushū Fundo — 復讐憤怒

Taida no Fukō — 怠惰不幸

Gōyoku Shakkin — 強欲借金

Taishoku Yume — 大食夢

Shikiyoku Sonkei — 色欲尊敬

Jigoku Akuma — 地獄悪魔

is 8 main characters too much for a book and is there a minimal or maximum of main characters for a book and what Is a good speed to meet all the main characters like how fast can you meet all the main characters and could there be more like side kinda main characters so like a big group

my story is a dystopian, bible inspired, cyberpunk, fantasy vibes

Seven Sins of the Righteous Goddess

Seven sins of an Hidden goddess

Sins of an hidden goddess 

Seven Sins of the righteous 

Sins of the righteous 

Sins of a righteous goddess 

Righteous goddess of sins 

The righteous goddess of sins 

Righteous sins of a goddess 

Devil goddess of heaven 

Devil follower 

Bound by a promise 

The true meaning of hell

The true hell 

Goddess of pride 

Just misunderstood 

Bloodlust of a angel 

Heaven’s creation 

Heaven of sins

Faithful of the devil 

Tied in blood but not by heart 

just saying if you don’t like any of these, you can suggest new names

So I like writing and I’ve always been writing poem, songs abd stories and I wrote this poem recently. It’s really short just a few words and not politic at all. It’s just symbolizes something and my friend said it wasn’t good enough because it wasn’t poetic so it is this a bad poem, cause it’s not poetic and what should they add to it? here it is:

The world will always be a horrible place with horrible people So why shouldn’t we be the last ones laughing?

So I like writing and I’ve always been writing poem, songs abd stories and I wrote this poem recently. It’s really short just a few words and not politic at all. It’s just symbolizes something and my friend said it wasn’t good enough because it wasn’t poetic so it is this a bad poem, cause it’s not poetic and what should they add to it? here it is:

The world will always be a horrible place with horrible people So why shouldn’t we be the last ones laughing?

Seven Sins of the Righteous Goddess

Seven sins of an Hidden goddess

Sins of an hidden goddess 

Seven Sins of the righteous 

Sins of the righteous 

Sins of a righteous goddess 

Righteous goddess of sins 

The righteous goddess of sins 

Righteous sins of a goddess 

Devil goddess of heaven 

Devil follower 

Bound by a promise 

The true meaning of hell

The true hell 

Goddess of pride 

Just misunderstood 

Bloodlust of a angel 

Heaven’s creation 

Heaven of sins

Faithful of the devil 

Tied in blood but not by heart 

just saying if you don’t like any of these, you can suggest new names