Can you review these slides and provide some advice (Science outreach talk).
Hi I am giving this presentation tomorrow. It's a public engagement lecture/ university outreach so I want it to be fun, informal and a bit tacky 1980's themed. but I also want it to be good quality: people are paying to ome see the talk and coming in their spare time. Any advice for improving these slides. The main message I want to convey is Newcastle should be proud of our achievements in Engineering. is this too much blowing of my own trumpet. is there enough experimental results in this? how hard is it to understand as a first time reader/ layman? it's got to be accessable but I don't want it to be too patronising for the audience either.