u/JacePark_Wonderwheel

Hi!

I’m Jace Park, a game designer based in Korea. I’m testing a rough game opening animatic for a small game concept.

It’s still an early edit made from rough storyboard sketches, so I’m not looking for art polish feedback yet. I’m mainly testing whether the visual sequence, pacing, and premise are readable.

I also attached the rough storyboard sheet as a reference, in case it helps with panel-by-panel feedback.

If possible, I’d love for you to watch the video first and let me know:

1. What story do you think is happening?
2. Does it feel cute, funny, or charming?
3. Are there any cuts, transitions, or pacing issues that feel confusing?

The intended premise is:

>!Alien slimes try to invade Earth, but humans reject them in their slime form. Then they discover that humans love cats, so they disguise themselves as cats and begin their invasion that way.!<

After reading that, does the premise come across clearly? And does that hook feel interesting?

Any early feedback would be really helpful. Thanks!

Hi!

This is a WIP game opening storyboard sketched by our artist for a small game concept.

It’s still an early rough sketch, so I’m not looking for art polish feedback yet. I’m mainly testing whether the visual sequence reads clearly.

If possible, I’d love for you to look at the image first and let me know:

1. What story do you think is happening?
2. Does the sequence feel cute, funny, or charming?
3. Are there any panels or transitions that feel confusing?

The intended premise is:

>!Alien slimes try to invade Earth, but humans reject them in their slime form. Then they discover that humans love cats, so they disguise themselves as cats and begin their invasion that way.!<

After reading that, does the premise come across clearly? And does that hook feel interesting?

Any early feedback would be really helpful. Thanks!