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So I'm writing two villains with being INTP as their type, I would like to know what you guys think about this

First INTP villain:

This person is devoted to a diety of creation.

No matter what the Lord of Creation brings, they will cherish it deeply.

But, when they are reincarnated in a world full of death, it disturbed them

This person wanted creation to reach its unknown potential. They wanted to learn and see what more creation could bring in the realm of living, may it be Abominations, disturbing, horrifying, or Eldritch. It doesn't matter. This person wanted them to exist and never be removed again. Therefore, it layed it's eyes on the one true problem. Death.

By removing Death, Creation is finally free from limitations.

Thus, this person created avatars that they can control while staying anonymous, using these avatars to manipulate political systems, social networks, and other sources of power. When these avatars have finally reached the highest level, they obtain the power to remove Death and give it to the villain.

Once death was removed, the world faced an era of decay and unwanted immortality.

The protagonist on this story is ISTP

2nd villain:

This person lived a life of suffering from creatures that is very different from humans. These creatures gain vitality through the suffering of others, and unfurtunately, this person was born in the domain of these creatures. But, one day, a Man saved them, and he sluaghtered all of the person's captors and not leaving a single one alive.

This person was amazed, the slaughter gave a feeling they had never felt before, Silence, peace, and freedom.

After a few moments, the man left without saying anything. That's the last time they've ever seen him, but it is enough for them to form an obsession towards that man, a feeling that could be called Love ?

This person formed theory that if they slay anything that differs from their kind ( elves, orcs,etc), that Man will notice them, and be with them in a world of Silence, Peace and Freedom.

This person wants to make that fantasy to reality. Therefore, they entered the realm of magic, this person mutilated and experimented themselves, created a new form of magic that no ancient lifeforms have ever seen.

This person alone destroyed multiple cities, committing xeno-čịɗè with no traces of their identity left behind. They hacked in the systems of kingdoms, using them as a puppet to commit more annihilation and providing them the power and logistics to make this all possible, this is done while their name remains unknown. This created an era where the lands is filled with 💀, the sounds of destruction, the removal of life.

It birthed silence, peace, and freedom.

The protagonist of this story is ENFJ

Tell me about your opinions on these characters and the plot. They are just drafts, and tell me what I could be missing.

I'm writing two intp antagonists, and I was hoping to get help writing them

Here are my ideas for them :

1st character:

A devote follower of an undying and endless creation, he/she wanted to learn and see what creation could give within the realm of living. May it be abominations, Monsterous, Eldritch, Horrific/Disturbing.

What may it be he/she wants them to exist, to be created, to be learned.

With this devotion, the person grew a deep hatred for death, setting her goal to remove it to existence.

In their mind, death has no logic and only hindering Creation to its full potential.

The person achieved this by manipulating politics and social networks until reaching a certain power to execute her goal by removing death. This, in turn, caused their state of existence to be filled with undying decay,restlessness, and nihilism.

2nd Character :

The villian was born on a cruel life as a slave, then captured and tortured by beings beyond human comprehension. They've only felt suffering and evil of another being... Then, one day, a figure saved them.

The figure slaughtered all of the captors, not leaving a single one alive except the villain.

The villain was amazed, the slaughter created peace, silence, and freedom. Such things are so foreign to them, and it felt heavenly.

The figure left quickly without saying a word, but this is enough for the villain to develop a deep obsession with the figure.

The villian would imagine themselves and the figure living together alone with no other life to bother them, even developing a theory that the figure wanted those beings to be exterminated to spread the feeling of Freedom, Silence and peace around existence.

With the villain's obsession, she wanted to follow the actions of their saviour, But they also think that by killing these alien races from existence no one would enslave the future lives of the villain's kind again. And thus they'd entered the realm of destructive magic, experimented, and mutilated themselves. Even creating a kind of power so unheard of. The villian executed their actions alone, killing other races that are not the same of themselves, not saying a single word, nor expressing any kind of emotions. This is enough for them to gain Allies and quickly spread throughout the lands, committing slaughters, genocides and massacres with no intent to stop, even if that creature is innocent, a child, helpless, harmless.

The villain will annihilate them all.

Just to see the future with that person, together with no other kind to disturb them.