Is my intro too strange??
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Is my intro too strange??

Hi, I've recently started creating songs and I'm still discovering new techniques, any feedback on things I should improve? For this track, I took inspiration from radiohead's "Nude". Let me know your thoughts and if it has potential, please.

Here's the link for the instrumental: https://on.soundcloud.com/lJRhyR6HqtlPeLStJR

u/King_Potatoo — 10 days ago

Under My Star (post rock) - Instrumental

I've been trying to make my own songs for a month now. This is my 3rd fully edited song ever! I also have the lyrics but, since I'm 14 and my voice isn't on its best stage to sing, I decided not to include them and start by publishing the instrumental. Let me know your thoughts! Anything I should add or change? What should I improve? I would apreciate any feedback

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u/King_Potatoo — 1 month ago