
advice on how to improve
did this for school, the theme is "liberty" but my professor told me that both my tecnique and the message of the painting was weak, but proceeded to give me a 9/10 on the final valuation, this being said we have a "rough relationship" and I can't wrap my mind about what I could do to improve, especially the message, which I thought was explicit. so I just thought "what if he's the one who's just not getting it?".
so that's it, the title of this painting is "liberty?", what does it makes you feel and do you perceive something or am I making things up?