
u/Line_boy
r/GetStudying r/HappyMarriages r/BetaReaders r/WholesomeComics r/comics r/wholesomememes r/alanismorissette

▲ 2 r/BetaReaders
[Complete] [104k] [Adult Sci-Fi Horror] Breach
A grieving physicist builds a machine to see his dead family and tears a hole between the living world and somewhere else. Told as sixteen connected episodes across different characters, genres, and decades: a family of ghosts, a corporate lab that should have stopped, a spec-ops squad phased out of reality, and the thing on the other side that notices.
Think Love, Death + Robots meets World War Z.
Content warnings: violence, child death, body horror.
Looking for 2–3 readers for overall impressions: where you got bored, whether the ending lands, which section was weakest.
Happy to swap and critique your manuscript in return.
u/Line_boy — 1 month ago