u/No-Letter3595

I seem to go unnoticed

Wherever I go

Like an old car with broken windows and a failing engine

Covered in snow

The days move slow

And i dont know

If people will stay or go

But the tranquile river will continue to flow

Just like the faint wind blows

And the shiny moon with its luminous light will say goodnight

Maybe if the world has all this light, there must be a little bit of it in me, right?

Any feedback is appreciated, one of my beginner poems

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vs7r68/spineless/p4kprts/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vsf144/i_wish_i_was_blind/p4kp9wl/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

Fields full of grass

appear as far as one can see

bright yellow dandelions catch my gaze as i look down at my feet

no one else is here

but who will accompany my lonely days

rays of sun

look into my soul and stare

a soul full of despair

but i was unaware

that the tranquility is right here

Couple of edits on a beginner poem. Any feedback is appreciated!

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vs47tb/hornets/p4ilanh/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vrvhb5/my_longest_friend/p4iogfj/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

A field full of grass Yellow dandelions appear The sun shining bright yet no one else is here

Maybe this is the parts of life That my dead heart yearns to bear

Beginner poem, any feedback is appreciated!

Links to comments:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vrwyzw/a_life_well_spent/p4i1pqu/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1v9x17t/a_little_longer/p4i2rl7/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=1&utm_term=1&context=3

Hi everyone, I hope you all are well.

I am 21 F, and honestly I’ve had a lot of trouble making friends in the past. Probably because I’m shy, awkward, insecure, etc.

But in the recent years I put in effort to make friends and talk to people. I check in on them time to time, ask them if they need help, celebrate their accomplishments and am genuinely happy for them and care about them.

But then I remember that I can’t really remember the last time they reached out first, remember things about me, or ask to hang out as I am usually the person initiating it. They don’t usually text me first, and it seems like I’m not really a priority to them. They dont really ask questions about me besides generic stuff like how are you, etc. It just feels like they don’t really value me.

I don’t know what to do. If I’ve done something wrong I wish they would tell me or if they don’t wanna be friends.

I mean I have my own hobbies and am fine with being alone, but at times when you’re always alone it really negatively impacts you.

I still respect them but I have no idea what to do and this is really impacting my mental health. Any advice would be appreciated ❤️

Hi everyone. I am currently a tech at a hospital, and am planning to get my bachelors in nursing after i complete my non nursing health degree.

I like helping people, and genuinely want to give patients adequate care. Yet, I always feel like some part of me is inadequate. After every shift, I overthink of anything that I could have done that could get me in trouble. Even though the reality is that I didnt do anything wrong, there is still a lingering fear that I did something wrong or neglected the patients. I steuggle with depression and anxiety, and can sometimes be distracted easily and forgetful. For example, I had one patient fall, because I forgot to put on their proper safety equipment. Even though they did not get hurt, I still am in fear that I could make a mistake and hurt someone in the future.

I really have alwayd wanted to be a nurse, and a good one at that. Yet, Im not sure if my personality and mental health issues can sustain this work in the future. I dont want to end up harming a patient in the future. This fear consumes me unhealthily where at times i cant think about anything else.

I am looking for support and advice from anyone who has experienced this feeling. Should I continue learning and working, or change my career paths?

Thank you!