u/No_Transportation714

Favorite song on the album
Difficult rhythm guitar at the start for sure

Beginning of a project. I know it kinda sounds shitty but mixing and mastering and adding bass are in the future, can I get any advice regarding song structure and drum programming I feel these are weak points. Also general feedback would be great.

In this vid for the first riff in Gp is the first or the second way I played it correct.
I can’t work it out and the first way seems impossible full speed.

Looking for tips because sweep still sounds sloppy and wondering whether fingering isn’t optimal
Also sorry about audio quality it sucks

Looking for tips on how to get the last alternate picking bit up to speed
Plus any other general tips to solidify the song