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Please give me feedback for the, the new revision after the failed logo i create before it.

Thank for your time

Edit : this is just my practice to make a logo, the practice are client called Astra industries who work on quantum technology and develop the quantum technology for general market, in this practice the client want something simple with word 'A' and want that associate with program element, so i chose Angle bracket to represent the symbol used to input a new line of programming, i chose it since if rotate 90 degree it look similiar to word A, while the blue color are just placeholder and can be changed.

hello r/learndesign, i am a newbie at graphic design, currently i am developing a identity brand for fictional giant company called Astra, a quantum technology based development who making game called astral gear. The company whole brand are themed space and star as this is guding human toward new era of technology of quantum.

Sorry for the fictional story, this is the design.

Please give me honest feedback to improve the design, i am bit struggling with the star negative space.