u/Olfff

Panel un progress

If you have any input on how to improve before inking, i'll take it. This panel was a real struggle.

I feel this is ok, but I might as well ask. Thank you

u/Olfff — 2 days ago

Storyboard

Please tell me it you think of any way to improve it. Thank you.

u/Olfff — 4 days ago

Storyboard finished before inking. Anything wrong you spot ?

The posture 1st panel, the bubble 2nd panel, the perspective shot, the désintégration effect bottom panel. Any problems ?

They all gave me small headaches. I think this is fine but I does not hurt to ask.

u/Olfff — 8 days ago

Storyboard continued. Reworking first panel and death ray rings for more impact.

u/Olfff — 8 days ago