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If you don't speak Italian you won't get much out of the dialogue, I'm sorry, but to deacribe the scene :
We meet this group of stoners mid conversation, our protagonist (the one with the mohawk) is depressed and only half listening but perks up when the guy with the glasses makes some weird comments over a case of infidelity.
The protagonist argues with him for a bit but to no success and then ends up saying something that was better left unsaid.
The incident marks the breaking of this friendship and leaves the protagonist alone with no support network.
It is kinda better if you don't understand, though. I am curious to know how do the panels flow, if the scene and emotions are decently readable even without text and if you got some sort of reaction out of it.