Trying out "clean" vocals for the first time. Sort of spoken-ish. Idk felt like the section called for something like this.
Artist: Noah's Akusausus
EP: The Rain Came and Never Ceased
Song: Divine Abandonment
here's my shit: https://open.spotify.com/artist/6ukdqAA27gXXY3XUk62qUX
clips are from "Misanthropic Messiah" and "Lethal Injection Jesus"
I've narrowed it down to two, if anyone cares to give a listen even just to the first 20 seconds of each, I'd appreciate any opinions
Divine Abandonment: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0X895zGz558
Organized Groveling: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kx-jy1yZmvk
Any opinions much appreciated. I'm really disappointed but also don't know if I'm justified in that feeling. Be sure to crank the volume on my mix, there's no mastering there.
My mix: https://jumpshare.com/share/1X2KM0gzaB1E0JvKR5Ak
New mix+master: https://jumpshare.com/share/Wm38aaQyQZtqm931YLw8
Been sitting on an EP for months bc I've been trying to learn how to scream. This is the first full track with vocals, any feedback appreciated!!