The Zephyr - A archetype of Speed and flow

Hello! this is my first ever attempt at homebrewing for PF2E and I decided to try and translate one of my favorite 5e Homebrews into an archetype!

I'm very much looking for feedback for balance and for formatting and wording. as I want to get into homebrewing more! I for sure want to add more features but wanted feedback on what I have so far

(I got permission from the original creator to make and post this)

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u/Puzzleheaded_Bell553 — 2 days ago

First "finished" map looking for feedback!

Building out my pathfinder campaign and took a shot at making a world map! I still need to go in and label the important areas but before I get into it, I wanted to see if some other eyes on it can see some problem areas I've glanced over.

quick note: the world is supposed to be pretty arid, so water is supposed to be very scarce which is why there are little to no rivers even in the greener areas

Any feedback suggestions or even just questions about the world are very welcome!

u/Puzzleheaded_Bell553 — 17 days ago

Player wants a different spell list. thoughts?

My player is picking up a Witch with the Resentment Patron but is really not a fan of the occult spell list and wants to use the primal spell list instead.

does this break anything? I don't think I personally care but I don't know enough about the spell lists to 100% say yes. so just want second opinion.

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u/Puzzleheaded_Bell553 — 23 days ago