Convince Me - Acoustic Original
How is this? It was one of my first songs I wrote at 16, a couple friends said it was decent enough to share. Feedback? Necessary changes? I wrote this after a relationship with someone who presented a certain way in public but acted very differently in a private relationship with me.
lyrics:
Revolutions
Revelations
You become a poet when it gets dark
My head’s in your lap
I can’t talk back
Blood in the water
You’re a shark
Convince me you love me
Make me believe it
Convince me you mean it in all that you do
Convince me you want me
Make me believe it
Convince me I should want you too
Gentle bodies
Gentle movements
Your skin is like a work of art
You keep a thesaurus
Under your nightstand
I know you do it to make you look smart
Convince me you love me
Make me believe it
Convince me you mean it in all that you do
Convince me you want me
I’ll keep it a secret
Convince me I should want you too
Revelations
Change the station
You never were good at telling the truth
But I can’t blame you
Nor can I change you
I secretly hate you and all that you do
Convince me you love me
Make me believe it
Convince me you mean it in all that you do
Convince me you want me
I’ll keep it our secret
Convince me I will want you too
Convince me
Convince me
Convince me you love me
Convince me
Convince me
Convince me I will want you too