I wanted to make it more distinct from the official "Ultra" states, so I gave them more distinctive custom eyes. The first one is essentially a form of "Partial Transformation", the halfway point, so I thought it made sense that the change in the eyes would seem unstable or incomplete.
A comment from chapter 234 of Shonen Jump Plus saying something like "Okarun should be a regular human, he shouldn't be thrown with enough force to break walls, he's not a Saiyan" and I immediately remembered this scene in DB Legends.
It's just a parallel, but Jiren seemed to handle the Genki Dama push from a Goku SSB x20 much better than Kid Buu did, even against a base Goku (even an exhausted one). The parallel seems to suggest a difference of at least 400 times between a restrained Jiren and Goku at his best at that point in the Tournament of Power, and also reinforces one of Vegeta's later comments to Jiren, regarding his energy being the strongest he had ever felt.
I mean, these are the Fish Folk, right? Considering Hastur (The King in Yellow) and Kashimoto's Aphoom-Zhah, Emperor Kur is going to end up being something like Cthulhu.
So, when I played and read about the lore of Dragon Ball Online, there were always mentions or information about this character, however, he was never officially revealed, so I made my version just to see him interact with my main OC (which is essentially thought of as a continuation of the one I had in DBO).
Translation:
>Age 940
• For the first time, an evil egg originating from the negative feelings of Namekians residing on Earth is confirmed.
• The egg is rigorously sealed.
>Age 972
• From the sealed evil egg, the Dark Namekian “Narak” is born.
• Narak increases his allies and begins conflicts with the Namekians.
It's almost like chapter 93 in reverse; it's actually quite funny that the comments are almost mirror images:
"He could have done it differently..."
"Okarun/Momo doesn't know how to set boundaries."
"Especially when Okarun/Momo is in a coma/amnesia."
"Momo/Okarun is a bitch/pussy."
"Jiji/Aira were taking advantage."
Since some Hakaishins are based on animals, he decided to create this one with the same premise:
- The appearance is inspired by the Brazilian monkey, the Golden Lion Tamarin, and the name is derived from "Cointreau," a French liqueur.
- The character "Brandy," which i had createde previously under the same concept, is his predecessor. "God of time destruction" is basically the equivalent of the originals G.o.D for SKOT/Chronoa; his role would be to eliminate irreparably damaged timelines.
As some may have noticed, most Glind in SDBH who use the form Unleashed Time Power gain a jewel (usually a crown). How do you think it looks best for Saiyan/Human?
- With a crown (golden metallic)
- With a crown (as an energy construct)
- Without a crown?