u/Randommattguy

Hi guys, I just finished a rather interesting chapter of my own story. It's a rewrite called Rapunzel Tangled Adventure on Archive Of Our Own called: Rapunzel Tangled Adventure: Sins of the Parents and the latest chapter is out (it is also a big one):

Cassandra's Revenge Part 1 (Part 1 of 2).

I would like advice on how I can improve on the story such as writing mechanics, story telling ability, etc.

Course this is still a work in progress but I hope you enjoy.

Link here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/88153171?view_full_work=true

Hi guys, I know I have been making a bit of posts here, but this is a bit different. Some might have known I have been working on a rewrite of Rapunzel Tangled Adventure on Archive Of Our Own called: Rapunzel Tangled Adventure: Sins of the Parents and the latest chapter is out (it is also a big one):

Cassandra's Revenge Part 1 (Part 1 of 2).

While the chapter sounds the same as the episode, there has been massive changes to its build up. Furthermore, I have been rewriting the story with the attempt of rewriting Cassandra's character. A lot of stuff had happened in the previous chapters so context is necessary. Hopefully you enjoy it and comment about the changes made . I happily accept feedback.

If there is a hook for this story I say: What if we gave Cassandra proper redemption arc?

Course this is still a work in progress but I hope you enjoy.

Link here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/88153171?view_full_work=true

Am I the only one thinking like this but isn't a bit odd that Frederick before Season 3 only has resentment for Cassandra for sneaking Rapunzel out?

I am sure that the Captain and by extension the King knows that Cassandra is adopted and the daughter of Rapunzel's kidnapper (A.K.A Gothel) and Cassandra made it obvious in Season 3 Episode 1 Rapunzel's Return (Part I Of II). Furthermore, if we were to consider the punishment people received from the monarchy in the show/movie (Varian being imprisoned, Lady Caine's father being locked away till his death, Eugene almost getting hanged for stealing the Princess' crown). Then how isn't it odd that Frederick was just absolutely chill with Cassandra being in the castle for 18 years when we can speculate that he knew of her identity of being Gothel's daughter? The same woman that committed the ultimate treason against the crown.

I know this might come as an odd question, but besides what we know in the comics and shows. Has there been any definitive ideas of Cassandra's childhood in the castle? Like we know that Gothel dumped her when she was four but for eighteen years of her life, there isn't much details on it. Are there any ideas of what happened or has it been open to speculation?

Hi folks, I have been working on a passion project of mine on Tangled The Series. It's called Rapunzel Tangled Adventure: Sins of the Parents. It's on Archive of Our Own.

The story is basically a rewrite of Season 3 that keeps the main plot points. The goal isn't to replace the original story, but reimagine the events that lead to the ending. In other words, same ending but entirely different story (that also addresses some of the flaws from the original story).

If I have to make one hook for this story it be: What are the implications of Cassandra being Gothel's daughter?

(It might be an odd hook but it is one of the central question that drives the story forward).

This story focuses more on Cassandra and reinterpreting her character arc in Season 3. There are also other good things involved in the story including some interesting plot points.

This is my first ever long-term project so I love to hear you what guys and gals have to say about this. This story is also a work in progress and it is my first time writing stories so I am learning and improving with each release of chapter. I would love to hear what you guys think about it. I have also finished my first two part chapter on this story so check it out.

Thanks if you read it.

One thing I do have to warn is that the first few chapters are a bit disjointed as it focuses on Season 1 and Season 2 events before fully investing into Season 3. So knowledge of the show is heavily recommended but I guess everyone in this community already does.

Either way, if you are curious and want to check it out, enjoy.

Link is here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/88153171?view_full_work=true

Hey guys, I just recently finished my work on two part chapter in a rewrite of Season 3. For those who don't know, I have been working on a passion project called Rapunzel Tangled Adventure: Sins of the Parent.

It is still a work in progress story but it's constantly being updated. Recently, I just finished my first two part Chapter. It's kind of a first for me and I am eager to see how you guys think of it it.

Small reminder, the initial chapters are a bit disjointed as they focus on events of Season 1, Season 2, and Cassandra's initial interactions with Zhan Tiri but it does get more smooth after that.

One last thing: you guys mind if I occasional post updates here? I am eager to see how this passion project goes and I like a TTS community's feedback on it.

Link to the full story here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/88153171?view_full_work=true

Hi folks, I have been working on a passion project of mine on this show. It's called Rapunzel Tangled Adventure: Sins of the Parents. It's on Archive of Our Own.

The story is basically a rewrite of Season 3 that keeps the main plot point. The goal isn't to replace the original story, but reimagine the events that lead to the ending. In other words, same ending but entirely different story.

If I have to make one hook for this story it be: What are the implications of Cassandra being Gothel's daughter?

(It might be an odd hook but it is one of the central question that drives the story forward).

This story focuses more on Cassandra and reinterpreting her character arc in Season 3. There are also other good things involved in the story including some interesting plot points.

This is my first ever long-term project so I love to hear you what guys and gals have to say about this. This story is also a work in progress and it is my first time writing stories so I am learning and improving with each release of chapter. I would love to hear what you guys think about it.

Thanks if you read it.

One thing I do have to warn is that the first few chapters are a bit disjointed as it focuses on Season 1 and Season 2 events before fully investing into Season 3. So knowledge of the show is heavily recommended but I guess everyone in this community already does.

Either way, if you are curious and want to check it out, enjoy.

Link is here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/88153171?view_full_work=true

PS: My top three songs in show are: #3: Ready as I'll Ever Be #2: Nothing Left to Lose #1: Waiting in the Wing