Spare lense

Spare lense

[CHORUS 1 - POP SINGER - SAD]
My spirit’s not departed, mind’s filled up with fog.
Call Moses to come and part it—I’ve been lost for so long.
Yeah, it’s fun to party—wake up still alone.
Tryna figure if I’m masked… or my emotions stay recluse.
Thought my soul got sold, wasn’t even worth spare change.
Different lens in my scope, so I’m test drivin’ new lanes.
When my heart go cold, and my mind not home,
Just a piece on the globe gettin’ moved—no control.

[VERSE 1 - RAPPER - SERIOUS]
Jumped out a spiral, landed in a loop—
No, I ain’t talkin’ ’bout lacin’ up boots.
Ran from the drugs, but the bottle still moved,
On repeat in my room—
Fiend liquor, floats my boat, i puke you aint sea-n sicker
peg legged limp, clean trigger, cause i musket-beer, so i steer center

Mapped-up the goal, not Dutch, but think I was Danny when this phantom goes ghost
burn it all down i wont stay here alone.

Finally admit that I’m spineless, get told what to do by my substance abuse.

[VERSE 1B - INNER SELF - PERSONALITY SHIFT]
Okay,-- now that’s retarded…
Quit,-- the reason you had balls to get your dreams started?
You slept in passenger, I was steerin’—gears grindin,
Fear’s blinded, but go ahead, TELL EM THE TRUTH ABOUT THE VOICES YOU HEAR VIRUS!

wipe those tears,crack us a beer.
What? I’m being sincere—
Build us a house you can live in the mirror.

[CHORUS 2 - POP SINGER - UPBEAT POP SWITCH + CALL/RESPONSE ADLIBS]
My spirit’s not departed, Its not over im just starting.
Still real far from where we started—I’ve been lost for so long.
Yeah, it’s fun to party—wake up still alone.
Tryna figure if I’m masked… or my emotions stay recluse.
Thought my soul got sold, Now im turning down the bag that they passed.
Different lens in my scope, now its me and my mask.
when i leave,ill achieve or we wont meet again,
at the least ill make it bleed at last.

[VERSE 2A - RAPPER - UPBEAT POP-RAP]
ill-be-alladin-street-rat-thief-of-the-night,
return-jafar-in-that-sequel-you-died,
human torchin, all my bridges, narcissist the arsonist, ADDICTION! how many years we had this argument?

[VERSE 2B - INNER VOICE - BACK-AND-FORTH]
im inevitable,your filler bars for vegetables,color in your book ill finish what we started
say-thank-you-grim, im-boring-just-as-virus

[VERSE 2A - RAPPER - UPBEAT POP-RAP]
if im boring sober ill take it plain, instead of david blaine one trick multiple ways, like two faced, got my cake and eat it the same

[CHORUS 3 - POP SINGER - UPBEAT POP + CHANTY ECHOES]
My spirit’s not departed, fogs dicipating,lets go home
got rid of that mask… will it ever be back i dont know .
Different lens in my scope, this one shows me theres still hope .

Thats all folks

Song link: https://open.spotify.com/track/5cAAmlgkU3pSTRxSLheBYy?si=KGN00SsNROS9Q-zE9KBcHw

u/Rare-Advertising884 — 1 day ago

Dark Dreams

[CHORUS 1 — POP — Creepy-Dark — SPACED CHANT]
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(ghost laugh) hahaha…

Nightmares plagued me all my life dosent do no good to try to hide… when you’re running from your mind

Dark Dreams — every time I close my eyes
Dark Dreams — I’m still stuck inside

[VERSE 1 – RAP – FAST]
[SHOTGUN RAP — one breath — double-time]
Skeletons-fell-out-my-closet-now-I-got-a-bone-to-pick-cause-my-spine-just-twitched-pandoras-box-if-my-mind-ain’t-hinged-take-a-deep-breath-and-let-all-this-virus-in
[regular speed rap]
Every time I’m at the top of the rope I’m seeing the goal,
my mind takes control,
raising the bar while it’s got a knife to my throat

[CHORUS 1 — POP — Creepy-Dark — SPACED CHANT]
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(ghost laugh) hahaha…

Nightmares plagued me all my life dosent do no good to try to hide… when you’re running from your mind

Dark Dreams — every time I close my eyes
Dark Dreams — I’m still stuck inside

[VERSE 2 – RAP – Fast Rap]
damn hell needs a doorman, cause these nightmares are grilling me like George foreman,and there’s like four man, god just send the damn horsemen

Thought-it was scary-already but here-comes the shredder-slicing my-brain soft as-spaghetti

[CHORUS 3 – POP/RAP – BIGGEST – 8 lines]

Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
Dark Dreams…
(ghost laugh) hahaha…

Nightmares, don’t try to hide,
you’re the ones who finally made me this kind of guy,
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
can’t haunt me now, I’m not afraid to die,
Dark Dreams…
(2 beats)
now you’re stuck inside

[VERSE 3]

[VERSE 3]

Had to fix up my vision,
now in the dark is where my knife starts spinnin’,
suffered enough, learned to talk like a snake,
slither past the ops in my brain,
my venom hit light — now I let that shit spray

Till the evil in my head itself starts to pray,
begging forgiveness after it drove me insane,
I look it right in the eyes with a smile on my face,
with my best poker face made it think it was safe…
pulled the trigger and blew it away, next time trauma keeps knocking I won’t let that bitch stay.

Song link: https://open.spotify.com/track/7JpPKQqUBHHuKc2igZhVhr?si=1CS0fTa7RKiVErBl226dew

u/Rare-Advertising884 — 1 day ago

Dancing With The Devil

Song Title: Dance With The Devil

[Intro]
[Dark cinematic horror trap beat]
[Two-character rap battle]
[Devil voice: low, raspy, sinister, taunting]
[Virus voice: sharper, aggressive, unstable, confident]

[Chorus 1]
Floor turns to flames as he moves his feet,
Told him I don’t dance, I just groove off beat,
You can moonwalk, tango, and shimmy all week,
But if you want this soul, gotta out-spit this disease

[Verse 1 - Devil Voice]{
Stay conjoined at the hip till you hate that you breathe,
What’s wrong, twin? Thought you avoided your dreams,
Close those eyes, get some rest, start counting those sheep,
I’m the wolf in the pen, came to steal everything,
Valuables, money; if you weren’t broke I’d take diamonds, chains, riches and fame
}
[Verse 1 - Virus Voice]{
Only staying conjoined cause the landlords took pity,
If they kept the door locked, you’d overdose, Mr. Fent Fiend,
I’ll always spit clean, pass you Listerine,
Every time you talk, shit flies out,
Heroin veins with a snarky meth mouth,hope your tooth pays rent, already evicted 31 down
}
[Verse 1 - Devil Voice]{
I cooked the shit that got you hooked,
Kept you up for days,
Hypnotist with your thoughts,
A doll in my game,
But this marionette had bad intentions,
So I strung you away,
Then puppeteered your actions,
You were playing checkers, I had Monopoly,
Every step that we’d take, was a step to your grave
}
[Verse 1 - Virus Voice]{
Shit’s lame
}
[Verse 1 - Devil Voice]{
Or maybe you were always insane
}
[Verse 1 - Virus Voice]{
Can’t gaslight me anymore, bitch,
Found my screws to my brain,
Keep ’em in my pocket,
So I know that they’re safe
}
[Chorus 2]
Spitting with the devil, now he tangos to my lead,
Almost took my soul, but my life’s in one piece,
If you burn my world down, I’ll just crank the AC,
His nickname was Jihad, so I hope this track stings

[Verse 2]

[Verse 2 - Virus Voice]{
Gave me a hot shot,
Lost my vision ,my thoughts went silent,
Wasn’t enough, to kill ol virus,
Grim, gonna Make your mind glitch
}

[Verse 2 - grim Voice]{
You’re partially the reason when I have a bad day, could just let a gat spray, pretend it’s just bad rain,

Dr suess-chicken-picken-with-crack-brain-but-which-thing-one-two-or-am-I-the-bad-thing?

Thought you had my leash,I been off the chain, lookin at me like I’m insane but you just made me that way
}

[Verse 2 -Devil Voice]{
Need two of you brought a army to beef, but I’m the Sargent you see, have you March to your death, knew you before virus, when grim ran the show, still got his brain in my notes, keep him up for a week, with tweek, won’t speak, nothing in his mind, that’s when I know his brains weak, virus was a cold, I sneezed, not allergic to beef, little vegan get back in your damn strings}
}

[Verse 2- grim Voice]{
Cut the cord, grim diggin graves, welcome to my, morgue, me no listen to jihad no more, see no, hear no, speak no evil, but he still shootin up on the back of his moms porch, kamikazid himself still walking, corpse, no remorse left that part of our lives like a bubble, torched…..}

}

[Chorus 3]
Spitting with the devil he got murdered on this beat,
Moved that skeleton from my closet then I hung it from a tree,
Out of site out of mind just don’t let the man speak

Song link : https://open.spotify.com/track/29Ld0xnxr43b8AS7nBTanO?si=PUpk36fYT5u81IpSv6S6Gg

u/Rare-Advertising884 — 1 day ago

Reveal

[VERSE 1]

Wanna hear my voice?

Just say so.

Wanted my identity

in a cage though.

Still kill it on a track,

deal out bars—

have ’em fiending

like a coke addict,

with brain static.

Caught this virus,

black plague status.

Grim lace the ink,

then my pen sprays madness.

Gonna live lavish,

either coffin or a mansion.

still spit acid,

till I’m at the top

or I’m in the casket.

Dig my own grave,

pass you a match

and gas can.

Cause unless I’m ash, man,

still haunt the game, like a mad, man,

Phantom rapper

waiting for disses,

I’m comfortable with it.

Don’t stand a ghost of a chance

paranormal hands swinging.

Guess ill let the chorus bump for a minute.

[CHORUS 1 — STACCATO RAP — ONE-WORD PAUSES — DARK CONFIDENT]

Grim.

Running.

Laps.

Virus.

In the back.

Voice reveal.

So I’m gonna.

Have to Revamp.

Off The meds.

Verse two.

Coming fast.

So let’s hit em.

Like a sledge

[VERSE 2]

Raising the bar, high as a kite
like my nose doing lines, with my head on a pendulum, rules I stay bending em, been a savable sinner at minimum, cause I spark like wet lithium so ill skydive to do a drive by no parachute so it’s a fly by, hit the ground running, want a foot up in the game, but if they say break a leg do they mean yours or mine ?

[CHORUS 1 — STACCATO RAP — ONE-WORD PAUSES — DARK CONFIDENT]

Grim.

Running.

Laps.

Virus.

In the back.

Voice reveal.

So I’m gonna.

Have to Revamp.

Off The meds.

Welcome.

To.

My.

Thoughts.

I.

Chain.

Inside.

My.

Head.

Song link: https://open.spotify.com/track/3JpZHclYHnuWLJsvvTK58a?si=tZJoCFhbTBKpNM2G7Adhgw

u/Rare-Advertising884 — 1 day ago

Thoughts on the lyrics from my song off the meds?

I’m GRIM-VIRUs on all streaming platforms spotify YouTube etc would love feedback on my lyrics for one of my most popular songs so far off the meds

[inteo dialogue]

Breaker, breaker, mayday! Virus off the meds again

{Verse 1}

No razorblades when I wrap my Christmas yall get packed,

flows a scalpel I cut dope lines from crack,

so when I spit ill dice you while i make you a addict

I-Escalate-to-excellence-you-dig-yourself-to-excrement-when-virus-makes-it-viral-best-believe-ill-be-infecting-them

Tha goals pollute the masses needle nosed-mosquito spreading my plague like Larry bird making free-throws,

if you kaiba I’m grilling blue eyed white dragon cooking out with dark magician in a speedo,

I don’t have to rack the slide, everytime I spit it’s automatic reload

{chorus}

Teas gone cold I’m wondering why,

I forgot my meds,

virus forgot his meds,

and now I wanna get a bag… wanna get a baaaaag!

{verse2}

walk like-a glitch,

Float through-the crypt,

No ghosts-writing shit,

Cause I’m the phantom with a pen

Walking down your block with a zen in my jaw and a Glock in my pocket,

drunk as Jim Lahey when the liquor gets talking,

cocky as a rooster with a hen on my cock,

bag of dope in my sock guess that means it’s been stomped

I’m the specter-stalking-you in the dead-of-the-night let’s get you fitted-for-a-noose and a new-bow-tie-guillotines-sharpened-rest-your-head-inside-cause-everyone’s-a-corpse-by-the-end-of-the-night

My-brain went insane so I lined it and chalked-it

didnt need it anyway im a deadman-walkin

Chorus 2 (Bridge)

Teas gone cold, I’m wonderin’ why…

…nah— wait, fuck that.

I self-medicated again—

cut the Stan ref-ren-ces.

Lemme tell you about portsmouth ohio

{verse3}

A small little town where I used to exist......

used to cook dope-sell packs-yea I was the shit

thought id die by 20 or be king of the crib,

mine-sweeper when-you walk-streets filled-with syringes

court-rooms-with-judges-hands-dirty-with-sin-cop-coverups-lawyers-are-pimps-if-they-dont-get-there-money-then..

you're sleepin in the river, food for nemo and all his friends

{Chours 3}{

Fuck the chorus

}

heres the song link if you wanna hear it all feedback is very appreciated !!

https://open.spotify.com/track/1mmLfQfG5dq7kzM4lmgIoD?si=nQxJ1Zz2SHKqIx1ohUfNgg&rowId=931dddfc98b33a33

u/Rare-Advertising884 — 1 month ago

Would like constructive feedback on 3 of my songs if you want

I’m GRIM-VIRUs on all streaming platforms including Spotify and YouTube check me out my best top 3 songs in my opinion to check out are off the meds, dark dreams and spare lense in that order let me know what ya think all criticism helps as long as it’s constructive !  

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