Would you read this? This is my draft.
I have waited for hours. Then minutes, then seconds, and finally I was done.
'' How much time?'' I looked at Mark; he had his stupid mask around his face like usual.
'' Time for what, Jai?''
''Don't call me th-''
'' Jai.''
''Don't.''
He struck a smile, his eyes twinkling under the half mask. '' Jai.''
'' I'm going- DAREDEVIL hunting.''
She rolled her eyes- then looked at his hands. They weren't covered in blood this time, at least. If they were- that would be a matter to investigate.
'' You're going to get hurt.''
'' You care.''
'' Mark.''
''Jai.''
She crumpled her face, looking around the room: the suspicious clock, Mark's face, the couch splattered at the corner of the white room of broken lines. The clock struck 7.
'' Ok.''
He raised a brow.
'' OK?
'' Yes, we can escape now. It's safe.''
'' That's exactly what I LIKE about you!''
She smiled. '' Sure, ego-boy.''
CONTEXT: they are actually faking an adventure; Mark is actually making an effort to fake it while Jai is scanning the room. Also, behind the couch there is a creature with a camera. This all happened because Jai- the smart one- crept inside the room of a powerful being who...is the antagonist. It's a white room. Unfortunately, there was nothing there, and the door- not actually- the room shut itself.
Also, yes, I am aware of the lack of dialogue tags. I'm lazy.🙂