



I don't want feedback or opinions on who I had win this fight. Vs debating is subjective, everyone has their own opinions, blah blah blah.
I want feedback on entertainment value, characterization, humor, logic, reasoning, stuff like that. If it sucks please don't try to sugar coat it, I won't get better if you do. Also any advice would be cool.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CqRTL4qHiUdPuBJOxkn_c0b0bJLc3qtTEbBdhj2t8lU/edit?usp=sharing