Could anybody who's gone through the process take a look at my current rough draft and tell me if I'm headed in the right direction? I'm having a bit of trouble finding a pivot for my conclusion and shaping the overall structure. Unfortunately, I had to scrap 2 drafts because they just weren't great stories, so I want to avoid the same thing.
Does anybody have any information on professors Mick Stukes or Nicholas Inman for the online classes? I found very limited information on RateYourProfessor specifically for MAT 271, though I'm trying to avoid Prof Tadvick and Bean.
Would anyone who is college-bound be willing to read my draft personal statement? I've had trouble finding help, as I believe it's more of a taboo topic where I'm from. I would really appreciate any help, as I'm a bit unfamiliar with the US admissions process (I moved here 2 years ago). I'd really like to know whether I should edit this draft or write another before August 1st. Thanks!