I’m looking for any constructive criticism of this or what you like and especially if this would hook you enough to keep you reading. Line edits aren’t as important because it sounds like I’ll be rewriting a lot of it anyway. The book is finished so I’ve posted elsewhere about beta readers but this is just about the first pages. Thank you. If you have any questions feel free to ask me.
A Princess, a getaway pilot, an assassin, a demon and a vampire work together to uncover a conspiracy threatening an empire that spans galaxies.
The story is finished and has been through multiple edits with editors. I am looking for beta readers to give feedback.
A Princess, a getaway pilot, an assassin, a demon and a vampire work together to uncover a conspiracy threatening an empire that spans galaxies.
The story is finished and has been through multiple edits with editors. I am looking for beta readers to give feedback.