u/Similar_Football927

So, I was brought up speaking romaninan as a child and have been trying to test my hand at poetry in romanian and would like y'alls input on this poem I wrote in romanian to see how it flows and y'alls opinion on my writings. Having said that all criticism is welcomed. Thank you for oyu time and without further ado her it is: What about this in its entirety?

Am scolat odată,

Am ridicat en un sudoare rece.

N-am simpțit la fel,

Adică sufletul meu

A uitat, en ce corp eu sunt?

Audă fără sens.

Am stat cuminte.

Când mama mă rugat,

Dar când am fost și singur,

Nici minta Mea; m-a iubit

Deja eu am gândit,

Și emoții mei a vorbit

Dacă eu nu mă iubesc?

Cine afara de mine,

Sa mă iubește în jurul meu?

Mirare mea a infectat cunoștință mea

N-am fost bolnav,

Dar când m-am văzut;

Inima mi-a înghețat

Am vizionat un focul teribil.

Un fluviu de ura mă acoperit.

Cu flăcări, ascuțit cam stridente de copii mici.

Urechi mei a rănit cam clopotele;

Am mers inapoi la culcare.

I have been listing too much Milo J and Ca4triel and pacco as of late and it put me in a poetic mood. I am trying my hand at spanish as a third language having said that i cam up with this the sentence poem (fi you can call it that) and want to see what other spanish speakers might thing about it. having said this I would like to present, the poem: Los rucos de antes han ido, pero las ruinas siguieron a las sombras jóvenes. Tampoco lejos pa esconder, pero cerca de oír.