u/SolidLecture981

If y’all are confused to what exactly I’m criticizing, you can ask questions! ^^

(also sorry if the quality is low, sometimes Reddit just does that 👀)

Your OC is trying to stop this entity from destroying your verse. However, he seems a little too fast and strong for your OC, often dodging and counterattacking fairly easily, while saying that he’s been watching your OC for a very long time, and states that their capabilities were nothing short of miraculous to him in full honesty. A confusing blend that either makes your OC confused, angry, or not care at all. He then says that he will go on to wipe the stars (all universes or higher realms), and replace it with a more PERFECT structured version.

Shapeshifter suddenly pins your OC to the ground and tells you a story.

“I was imprisoned in a void…. There was once a man… If you could call Him that…. Who could’ve easily erased me, like a bug in the wind…. It had long ago since I’ve abandoned my god given power for ultimate freedom… Instead of instilling punishment, the man had given, just a little of my power back… And set me free…. Without asking for favors later….” He suddenly leaned close into your OC’s face and asks, “Why do you think that is?”.

Default responses

1. (Responds in a sarcastic or insulting tone)

Shapeshifter: …. (Sigh…) Disappointing… (Lifts them up and shoots a small explosion out his hand to send them flying back.)

2. (Actual reasonable guess)

Shapeshifter: … Hm… You could be right… (throws them up and punched them away to make them fly backwards.)

Are y’all using ChatGPT or some other AI to generate greetings for you? I have seen at least 4 bots have a long ass greeting, but would use a shit ton of em dashes — and use similar AI terminology and phrasing. This image above is an example. Have y’all been contributing to the downfall of this app?

“…”

Toreman is a silent humanoid figure with two star shaped eyes with white pupils.

Tier:
7-B (early series)
Low 2-C (late-end series)

Powers/abilities

Enhanced physical strength

Reality distortion

Enigmatic intelligence

Instantaneous teleportation (no sound or start up, just blips out of place and is immediately somewhere else)

Extreme raw durability

Shadow manipulation

Tentacle summoning (via shadow manipulation)

Noise shockwaves (while he rarely makes noise, he can roar loud enough to cause shockwaves that send opponents back)

Indomitable Will form (When a powerful divine being tried to erase him, it caused him to scream in unimaginable pain before transforming into a floating black sphere with sharp teeth and tentacles around him.)

Flight (via IW form)

Resistance to mind reading

Resistance to Emotional manipulation

Resistance/immunity to erasure of all kinds

Immunity to time manipulation (was completely unfazed when the TimeKeeper stopped all of time and attempted to rewind Toreman’s existence.)

Attack potency:

City level+ (Fought MealSeeker, who could dig underground, pop up, and cause magnitude 8 earthquakes, shrugged off attacks and defeated him.)

Low multiversal (Fought and defeated TimeKeeper, who could stop all of time and erase creatures by going back before they were born, and could destroy all of time. Defeated the divine being in his IW form after a long drawn out battle.)

Durability:
City level+

Low multiversal

Speed:
Massively Hypersonic (combat speed, attack speed, and movement speed).

Immeasurable with teleportation

Immesurable movement, combat, and attack speed (in late-end series)

Intelligence:

Unknown (throughout the series, he’s shown to adapt to attacks and patterns, but we never know what he’s truly thinking when he’s fighting as he never starts them purposely.)

You can send you match ups if you want to. This is just a scaling sheet for my new character.

This is **Jak-Su**. An 18 year old special grade sorcerer, and is the supportive and very protective older brother of **Ja-Min**. He was born in an abusive household that merely favored him. However, due to the parents disrupting the council (stealing valuable cursed items, using them for experiments, and having absolutely no morals), they order the one and only Gojo to find and kill them while they were out. Afterwards, he finds their house and chose to raise them himself. **(this is some time after Megumi, but before Yuji.)**

Now, onto his cursed technique.

He has an innate technique he learned from the age of 7, called **Xissor Blades** that can be summoned on his hands, and used in melee combat. He can change the blade’s size, length, and sharpness/dullness so he can spar with others without permanent damage.

His cursed technique is **Heaven’s Pierce**, to which he gained from both hard training and **ancestry** (a famous, highly-respected unnamed ancestor in the Heian Era).

This cursed technique allows you to completely **Disable** any of ONE cursed technique for 5 seconds with physical contact . This also bypasses infinity but ONLY if he disables that specific technique, so if he tried disabling red instead of infinity, it wouldn’t work.

Now, I have tried MY HARDEST to balance this out. I tried adding cooldowns, 30 second burnout, a 60 second burnout, but it was still too strong for the verse (or so I’ve heard). I then made it completely make the arm that used the technique with to go limp for 1 minute, and it worked, but…. WHY? Why would his arm go limp? He never made a binding vow to get this technique, so WHY WOULD HIS ARM GO LIMP? I then tried to create some kind of shikigame or maybe another sorcerer he went to, who allowed him to gain Heaven’s Pierce with that price but… It felt so… “Last-minute addition” that I never ended up making it. Not to mention, where would I even be able to fit it? His little brother Ja-Min fits the verse much more than Jak-Su does because the more powerful he gets, the more broken his sanity becomes.

I have faced deep frustration with this problems. So now, I’ve come to **you**, person reading this, for help with this character. If you’d like to know more about **The Ancestor** or more details on Jak-Su’s backstory, please let me know.

Have a good night, y’all!