u/Specific-Still-7266

Okay I dont know how to even use this app

Context, this isnt graded its to see what we know, but i just got nervous..

Instructions were "write an extended paragraph, indicate the purpose, audience and tone"

But im stuck on the extended paragraph, like I know it sounds self explanatory, i was just planning on writing more, but the more i kept thinking about it the more nervous I got so I just thought I would ask

I know im an idiot please💔💔 dont bully me

SO, i know everything is a mess.. but I specifically want help on the arm ( the messily cropped one is just a vision to see if a diff placement would help )

This is my first ever post on reddit so sorry if im doin sum wrong idk, but anywho I want help with my coloring, i feel like theres something better i could do but i dont know what it is, also ik the back anatomy isnt completely accurate