Please provide feedback

Please take a moment to read the book on Wattpad called Pieces Of The Gods and provide honest, constructive feedback. This is not a promotional post; I’m simply looking for genuine reader feedback.
I’d appreciate your thoughts on the story, characters, pacing, writing, and overall experience, as well as any areas you feel could be improved. Honest and respectful criticism is welcome and would be genuinely helpful.

My account name is lazuli13_ on wattpad.

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u/StudioLazuli13_ — 8 days ago

Please provide feedback

It’s been years in the making and began before the rise of AI. It is continued to be written without the use of AI.

The book is completed but not fully published in an entire manuscript BEFORE THE INVENTION OF AI.

Please view the Wattpad profile for my own personal history of creating of this story.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/175179293?utm\_source=ios&utm\_medium=link&utm\_content=share\_writing&wp\_page=create&wp\_uname=Lazuli13\_

u/StudioLazuli13_ — 9 days ago

Introducing

**✦ A Note from the Creator ✦**
Welcome to *Pieces of the Gods*.
This story is more than just a fantasy—it’s a world I’ve been creating from the ground up, filled with original characters, realms, mythology, secrets, and stories within stories.
Every character has a place. Every realm has a history. And some details may mean more than they seem to at first.
As you read, I invite you to explore, question, theorize, and get lost in the world alongside me. There are mysteries waiting to unfold, and I hope you’ll enjoy discovering them one piece at a time.
Thank you for stepping into my world.
**— The Creator of** ***Pieces of the Gods*** ✦
*Every God left something behind.*

Book is on Wattpad

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u/StudioLazuli13_ — 9 days ago

Introducing

✦ A Note from the Creator ✦
Welcome to Pieces of the Gods.
I have no one to personally give me any feedback. So I hope to get some here.
This story is more than just a fantasy—it’s a world I’ve been creating from the ground up, filled with original characters, realms, mythology, secrets, and stories within stories.
Every character has a place. Every realm has a history. And some details may mean more than they seem to at first.
As you read, I invite you to explore, question, theorize, and get lost in the world alongside me. There are mysteries waiting to unfold, and I hope you’ll enjoy discovering them one piece at a time.
Thank you, and I hope you step into my world.
— The Creator of Pieces of the Gods
Every God left something behind.

Book is on Wattpad.

u/StudioLazuli13_ — 9 days ago