The man in my room
I was ten years old when my family moved to a new town.
My dad had gotten a job at a factory that paid really well—too well for him to pass up. My mom had always been a teacher, and not long after we moved, she found a job at the local elementary school.
Everything seemed to be falling into place.
To celebrate my tenth birthday and, I guess, our new beginning, my parents threw me a huge birthday party.
They rented a bounce house, bought a massive cake, and invited all the neighbors.
Well, I say invited.
It was more like people saw the bounce house and started bringing their kids over. My parents are kind people, though, so they didn’t mind. What better way to get introduced to the neighborhood?
I couldn’t believe how many people showed up. I had never had a birthday party that big before.
Even my first day at my new school went well. I made friends almost immediately. Some of them I’m still friends with to this day.
For a while, everything seemed perfect.
Then, about two months after we moved in, something happened.
I woke up in the middle of the night.
I didn’t know what had woken me. The house was quiet, and my bedroom was dark except for the faint glow of my nightlight.
I glanced at the clock.
It was a little after one in the morning.
My eyes were heavy, and I was about to roll over and go back to sleep when I noticed something.
Someone was standing in the corner of my room.
I froze.
At first, I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me.
But the longer I stared, the clearer the shape became.
It was a man.
I couldn’t see his face. The room was too dark. All I could make out was the outline of his body and the faint glisten of two eyes staring back at me.
He didn’t move. He didn’t say anything. He just stood there.
Watching me.
I yanked the blanket over my head.
“Mom! Dad!”
I screamed as loud as I could.
Within seconds, my bedroom door flew open.
My parents rushed inside.
I screamed, “There’s a man in my room! He was just there!”
My dad searched the room while my mom sat beside me.
There was nobody there.
My father looked tired and frustrated, but my mother climbed into bed and wrapped her arms around me.
“It’s okay,” she whispered. “It’s probably just the new house. You’re still getting used to things.”
She stayed with me for hours before finally going back to her room.
But I knew what I had seen.
There had been a man standing in the corner of my room.
And that wasn’t the last time I saw him.
Over the next year, he came back.
Sometimes weeks passed between visits. Sometimes months.
But every time, it happened the same way.
I woke up.
He was standing in the corner.
And he was watching me.
By the seventh or eighth time, my parents had started to worry—not about the man, but about me.
One night, their voices carried down the hallway.
“I can’t keep doing this,” my dad told my mom. “I’m barely sleeping. I can’t afford to lose this job.”
After that, I stopped screaming for them.
Or at least I tried to.
Whenever the man appeared, I pulled the blankets over my head, squeezed my eyes shut, and waited for morning.
Eventually, the visits became less frequent.
By the time my twelfth birthday approached, I had almost convinced myself they were over.
My parents decided to throw me another big birthday party.
The night before, I went to bed early because, in my twelve-year-old mind, the sooner I fell asleep, the sooner my birthday would get here.
For once, I wasn’t thinking about the man.
I was thinking about cake.
Presents.
My friends.
I fell asleep almost immediately.
The next morning, I jumped out of bed and rushed into the kitchen. My parents were already getting everything ready.
A few hours later, people started arriving.
Before long, the house was packed.
We had cake, ice cream, games, and more food than we knew what to do with.
Then came the best part.
Presents.
My parents handed me a box.
I tore it open.
A PlayStation.
I lost my mind.
There was no way anybody was topping that.
One present after another was passed to me. By the time I was finished, I was surrounded by torn wrapping paper and boxes.
My mother handed me a poorly wrapped gift. It looked like someone had used an old brown paper bag for the wrapping paper and pieces of duct tape to seal it all together.
My dad looked confused.
“From who?”
I looked at the long rectangular package and examined it.
“There’s no name on it.”
My dad shrugged.
“We’ll figure it out later.”
The box was heavier than I expected.
I shook it.
Something solid shifted inside.
Maybe an action figure.
Maybe some kind of water gun.
I ripped away the paper and opened the box.
Inside was an old metal flashlight. My parents looked confused, but I didn’t think much of it, so I tossed it aside and moved on to everything else.
Within an hour, I had forgotten all about it.
That night, after spending the entire day playing my new PlayStation with my friends, the last guests finally left.
I got ready for bed.
My mom came into my room and kissed me goodnight.
“Happy birthday, sweetheart.”
“Thanks, Mom.”
My dad came in a few minutes later.
“Have a good birthday?”
“The best.”
He smiled.
As he turned to leave, he noticed the old flashlight lying among my presents.
He picked it up.
“Does this thing work?”
“I don’t know.”
He pressed the switch.
Nothing.
He gave it a little smack against his palm and tried again.
The bulb flickered to life.
“Huh.”
He set it on my nightstand, wished me a happy birthday one last time, and then left for bed.
I was exhausted.
Within minutes, I was asleep.
At some point during the night, I woke up suddenly.
My bed was shaking.
Not a little.
Violently.
The mattress jerked beneath me.
I sat straight up.
And then the shaking stopped.
The room became completely still.
I looked toward the foot of my bed.
My stomach dropped.
He was there.
The man.
For the first time in months, he was standing at the end of my bed.
Only that night, something felt different.
I scrambled backward until my back pressed against the headboard.
He didn’t move.
I couldn’t see his face.
Then I remembered.
The flashlight.
I reached for it.
My hand was shaking so badly that I almost knocked it onto the floor.
I grabbed the cold metal and wrapped both hands around it.
The man remained perfectly still.
I pointed the flashlight toward him.
My thumb found the switch.
Click.
Light flooded the room.
For the first time, I saw him.
Really saw him.
He wasn’t a shadowy monster.
He was an old man.
His face was pale and weathered, covered in deep wrinkles. His clothes were dirty and worn. Gray hair clung to the sides of his head.
He stood there, staring directly at me.
I couldn’t move.
I couldn’t scream.
The old man slowly raised one finger.
He pressed it against his lips.
“Shhh…”
His voice was so quiet I could barely hear it.
I dropped the flashlight.
The room went dark.
“No…”
I panicked, clawing through the sheets until my fingers touched cold metal.
I grabbed the flashlight and raised it again.
The beam shot across the room.
The old man was gone.
My heart pounded.
I swung the light around, searching for him.
Nothing.
Then the beam landed on my closet.
The doors were moving.
Just slightly.
Like someone had just closed them.
I screamed.
“DAD!”
My bedroom door flew open.
My mother rushed in first, my father right behind her.
“What happened?”
“He was here!”
My dad closed his eyes.
“Not this again.”
“He was standing right there!”
I pointed toward the end of the bed.
“I saw him! I saw his face this time!”
My father’s concern disappeared.
Frustration took its place.
“That’s enough.”
“But—”
“No.” His voice rose. “You’re twelve years old now. This has to stop.”
“I know what I saw!”
“There is nobody in this room!”
“He went into the closet!”
My father stared at me.
“The closet?”
I pointed toward it.
“He went in there.”
My dad stormed across the room.
“Fine.”
He grabbed both closet doors.
“You want to see?”
He ripped them open.
“Look!”
My clothes hung inside.
Nothing else.
“There’s nobody here!”
He started pushing clothes aside.
“See?”
He pulled shirts and jackets from their hangers and threw them onto the floor.
“Nothing!”
“You’re too old to still be afraid of the boogeyman.”
Then something fell.
My father stopped.
We all looked down.
A small piece of sheetrock lay on the closet floor.
For a moment, nobody said anything.
My father looked at the back wall.
There was a crack in it.
He reached forward and touched it.
Behind it was darkness.
My mother stepped closer.
“What is that?”
My dad didn’t answer.
He grabbed the loose edge of the sheetrock and pulled.
A larger section came away.
Behind my closet wall was an opening.
It was about four feet high and maybe three feet wide.
More than big enough for a person to crawl through.
Nobody moved.
My father shined my flashlight into the opening.
There was a small hidden space behind my bedroom wall.
And at the far end of it was another opening.
One that led down beneath the house.
Into the crawlspace.
My father just stared.
I would never forget the look on his face.
Because for the first time, he believed me.
My father called the police that night. They searched the crawlspace and found scattered garbage and a sleeping bag. They said whoever had been living there appeared to have been there for quite some time.
My parents packed whatever they could into the car and took me to my grandparents’ house.
I never slept in that bedroom again.
Not long afterward, my parents sold the house.
None of us ever stepped foot inside it again.
Years passed.
We never found out who the old man was.
Sometimes I still think About that night.
About the way the old man looked at me when the light finally hit his face.
About the finger he slowly raised to his lips.
About how the old man had been able to crawl out of the darkness behind my closet whenever he wanted. And the thing I think about most is who left me that flashlight.