Hi there, I’m new to Reddit and making creepypasta, but I came up with this one called The Playground. I was wondering if you’d help me if it’s good. Please tell me things wrong with it, so I can make it better. the link is https://www.reddit.com/u/The_Null_Archives/s/bq0R8c3yQ4
In this dimension, people on the verge of death get one last chance to live in a place of torture and pain. Here, people are forced to play twisted versions of games from our world, and from others. Twisted versions of Seesaw, The Human Knot, Ring Around The Rosy, Tag, Hide And Seek, anything you can think of. All twisted and made something unrecognizable. Rumors on The Playground say once, a group of people had to play The Human Knot, and were fused into one biomass and were forced into tearing themselves out of the mass. They could push people in to get out, or pull people out and get pushed in. And if you cheat the game, alien entities defying logic and physics will come for you and put you back into the games, but harder. And there is no death here, only pain. If you loose the game, you just get made a part of the dimension and it’s games, but nobody really knows. And if you somehow manage to escape, there’s only a void of non-Euclidean structures and Lovecraftian Beings, with Eldritch Entities in the darkest corners. Death is no end, it’s only the beginning of eternal pain
