

▲ 15 r/TheWire
The Wire: The Musical
Link: The Wire: The Musical
This has probably been posted before, but this is the first time I've seen this and I thought it was hilarious. Quality stuff.
u/TonyThePriest — 2 months ago
▲ 2 r/Screenwriting
Can you explain a relation in action lines?
I'm writing a pilot. There's a couple scenes with the protagonists younger brother. I've avoided using any lines I found cringe, such as "you're my brother" or anything else obvious.
I feel reading the script you can pick up that their brothers, cousins or at least from the same neighborhood. Which I think is fine for in a TV show. Things like that become more clear as things go on.
I'm more wondering since the Pilot is a pitch to networks, should I have a line like "he sees _____, his younger brother" or something like that? Just to make things clear.
u/TonyThePriest — 4 months ago