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Hey you all,
I hope it's all right to ask this question here.

I am writing a H2O just add water fanfiction, next generation. My FMC is the daughter of Cleo and Lewis and she will eventually turn in to a mermaid at Mako Island. By accident (Cleo and Lewis will of course find out. They know the signs).

Now I am wondering. I of course have noticed the inconsistency of when the girls changed in a mermaid in the series.

What would you like to have seen changed? To keep the changing in a mermaid consistent? I was thinking that they could only change when touching salt water, but... that makes the whole keeping the mermaid tail secret a bit boring, but I have no clue what else to change/add.

Would love to hear your input!

First of all. Thank you all for the replies on the previous post.

Jared seems to be the perfect fit for my FMC! That means Jared will imprint on my FMC, but how will he react to imprinting (it will happen during a bonfire).

I don't see him as the kind of guy to go full anger, but at this point he maybe enjoying his single life (or dates Kim without being imprinted on her).

I also don't see him refusing the imprint.

So what do you think? How would Jared react? Would love to have your input on this and then I can continue writing the story🥳.

I am hoping I am allowed to ask this question here because I don't know where else to ask it.

I am writing a Twilight fanfic but I just can't figure out which wolf should imprint on my FMC.

Anyone who can help me out? I am leaning towards Paul or Jacob, but I am not sure.

I kinda have the storyline set except the romantic storyline.

My character is a famous ice figure skater, but retires in the story and moves to Forks with her brother who has become a shape shifter (there is a storyline behind that). He joins Jacobs pack in Forks.

Sam leads the La Push pack. Story takes place after Breaking Dawn.