As the title says, I'm looking for a beta (I use this term lightly) for an Enhypen fic. My current beta is really busy (but still has access to my doc) and i was just wondering if anyone would be open to chatting and or looking for spelling or grammatical errors. This will be my first time posting an Enhypen fic.
So recently I found myself reading a fan fic that has a lot of main characters (8) and I love the story, but the author has a habit of doing their dialog in a hard to read manner.
"Person a will say this" but person B reacts. Then person A reacts. "And person B says this" so Person C blinks at the conversation.
I find it super hard to follow and usually have to read it multiple times because sometimes the person (Person A) who was talking;
"Actually spoke in the paragraph above and has nothing to do with this paragraph." Where Person B will act. Then Person C will lean back. "Then Person D will speak up"
But you don't know its person D until this paragraph.
And it could be their writing style but it's very hard to follow. And I want to leave a comment, but I don't want them to accuse me of hating them. I'm not, I literally can just barely follow when they have more than two people speaking.
Like should I leave a comment or just be a ghost reader?
Also, I checked their comment section and nobody else mentioned it. Instead they were all talking about an upcoming fandom event that was mentioned in the author's note.
Edit: I did not mention my issues with the dialog, I simply told them that I liked their story and chatted about fandom stuff.
Lowkey obsessed with this comment. We as fan fiction writers are usually willing to go to great lengths for our fics. And I always adore the response. Definitely made me laugh. (No, I absolutely yeeted that book, no kisses)
Lost my Leebit between Brisbane and Bundaberg. I hope whoever finds him is nice to that little shit. Don't count on having him for long because I've lost him 3 times already