u/Wayne_kur

This is art from the comics by the way

part 2 https://www.reddit.com/r/shittyhalolore/s/r7UZuV2xqA

part 1

https://www.reddit.com/r/shittyhalolore/s/VHp6u4ZHvr

Here is the final part. Hot Damn, this project was a massive undertaking. I really don't want to do this again. I just want to thank everyone for their feedback and positive reception.

All I ask in return is if would like and share these around. I would appreciate it.

I'm going to be taking a break from projects for a bit and get caught up on some studies I have been putting off And play some more First Berserker Khazan. Until next time.

Hello Everyone it's finally here. Firstly I just want to say thank you so much for all the positive reception and constructive criticism the previous post got.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TheActMan/s/lHjlYw2C0f

Sorry for the wait, one of the reasons why this took so long is that I was originally going to keep it short and just rewrite Williams' scenes and dialogue.

But as I was writing the script it evolved into something more, growing over double in size than part 1. However, that means I have to split what was originally going to be 2 parts into 3 since the most Images I can post is 20.

Don't worry, part 3 will be up around 24 hours after this one. Honestly, I believe in terms of writing, I cooked up something quite special. But, that is not for me to say, as you will all be judges of that.

Again like last time:

This is a first draft. Aside from fixing grammatical errors, no refinement was made

I am not a professional writer or artist.

This is an experiment to see if a random nobody on the internet can write a better story than the hacks on Microsoft's payroll.

Hello Everyone it's finally here. Firstly I just want to say thank you so much for all the positive reception and constructive criticism the previous post got.

https://www.reddit.com/r/shittyhalolore/s/QAYU7pOURq

Sorry for the wait, one of the reasons why this took so long is that I was originally going to keep it short and just rewrite Williams' scenes and dialogue.

But as I was writing the script it evolved into something more, growing over double in size as part 1. However, that means I have to split what was originally going to be 2 parts into 3 since the most I can post is 20.

Don't worry, part 3 will be up around 24 hours after this one. Honestly, I believe in terms of writing, I cooked up something quite special. But, that is not for me to say, as you will all be judges of that.

Again like last time:

1. This is a first draft. Aside from fixing grammatical errors, no refinement was made

2. I am not a professional writer or artist.

3. This is an experiment to see if a random nobody on the internet can write a better story than the hacks on Microsoft's payroll.

Hello Everyone, here is a rewrite of undoubtedly the worst cutscene in Halo. And part 1 of 2 of this project

I admit, I was originally going to release my inner Garth Ennis and draw Harmony along with Williams dying horrifically gruesome deaths and call it a day.

But then I thought: “Those scenes are so horribly presented/written. I bet some random no-faced nobody on the internet can do better. Or at the very least make it less shitty”.

Why not put that theory to the test? So here's a little experiment. I wrote a script and made some very rough story board sketches. I could have gotten this project done a whole lot sooner but I am a lazy asshole.

Anyway, you be the judges of that. Give me your honest thoughts. Good? Terrible? Cringe? Better? Worse? Whatever it is, let me hear it.

Some things to keep in mind:

1. I am not a professional writer, nor artist. I am an amateur in both regards.
2. The script is the first draft that I wrote in less than a day. Other than fixing grammatical errors, no modifications were made to it.
3. Again this project is an experiment to see if some complete rando on the internet can write a better scene or at least make it less shitty than so called “professionals” under Microsoft's payroll.

I couldn't stop thinking about it, I couldn't resist.

Finally got this comic done. I honestly could have gotten it finished a few days earlier, but I got really lazy. Anyway, like always, constructive criticism is appreciated.

A little chunky but I think I did pretty well.

Constructive criticism is appreciated.

Hello everyone, It's finally here! I hope it was worth the wait. I really wanted to post it on the 4th of July, but everything wanted to keep getting in my way. So sadly, that didn't happen.

I didn't want to hold it hostage for another year, so I decided to share it. Y'all waited long enough. Unlike that lying cunt, Bonnie Ross, I make good on my promises.

If this post gets enough attention, I'll make a view of the rear.

Let's say, I don't know. 500 upvotes?

Anyway, as always, constructive criticism is appreciated.

1. Not learning from his 1st encounter with Conquest.

2. Trying to fight Thragg alone despite being explicitly warned not to.

u/Abbadon74 u/ParticulardDerp Got it done.

Could have gone it done a lot faster, but life kept getting in the way.