u/Wide-Future2391

So I found out Royal Road loves AI so I pulled all my stuff off it. Now I'm working on redrafting them, go for actual publication. Really liked this paragraph, its the opener. Feedback is welcomed!

Look the game is real good I just have everything else about it. The setting is dog shit and the models dip into gooner bait. I really wish it had better fluff so I could sink my teeth into it, but alas, all I got is watered down Altered Carbon and rejected Mass Effect desgins.

[Exerpt from Dead Waves]

The cult was upon her now, en masse. They lacked Domitia's raw strength, but they had numbers. The sheer weight caused her to fall to a knee, with them piling on her shoulders, arms, and legs. Shivs and hunting knives bit at her joints and armor seals, and pistols bounced off her helmet as they tried to finish her. Domitia roared as she forced herself to her feet, shaking her shoulders and arms free of cultists. She contemptuously cranked her kinetic maul and then smashed it into a coral man, turning bone to powder and scattering his comrades. A blast from her lance vaporized the torso of another and caused many to break and run. 

Others rushed in with bigger guns, opening fire at point-blank range. Buckshot cratered into her chest, Domitia replying with a bolt of ion to the man's head. Another raced forward with a big game rifle. The spiralling patterns along the barrel shone underneath the coral growth that grew from his chest. Domitia saw him and stomped forward, swinging her kinetic maul, crunching his neck; the ensuing explosion of kinetic energy caused his head to pop. As he fell, he managed to fire a single shot; the immense round glanced off her helmet, sparking and causing her to whip back. The concussion caused her to see stars as she stumbled back. The cult saw weakness and piled on her again, redoubling their efforts as her vision blurred.

"Let me," a darkly sweet voice in the back of her mind said, "Let me take care of this, war-horse." 

Sejanus, her Legacy, began to assert itself over her. She could feel it pumping hormones and stimulating throughout her. She began to feel herself slip away; the roar of the cultists grew muted, the figures a blurry mix of colors as her eyes unfocused, an alien smile slowly overtaking her face.

"No." Her hand found a grenade. "I got it." 

Really liked this one. Based off a scene where she is facing off against a mech.

Im writing a collection of short stories featuring the character above. Domitia is a Bellator, a biological enhanced soldier created by the Coalition. After becoming disillusioned with the seemingly unending wars to protect the corporate interests of the Coalition she joined a revolt against the Security Council and the Big Five Corporations. The rebel Bellators were ultimately defeated, Domitia barely survived, saved by Dell, a diminutive alien who had been exiled by the crime syndicate he'd been born into.

Together the two trek the Liminal Lanes of the Fringe, the edge of known space. They scrape out an existence Bounty hunting, running supplies, and battling the occasional horror from beyond the stars.

Idk if this is allowed but I thought id share it here since her design and a bit of her personality was definitely shaped by Samus.

Edit: ALMOST FORGOrT

Artist is Jeetdoh