u/alexb179

Hello, I wanted to get more into writing so I wrote a few thoughts of mine down. It’s quite rough, but I’d still like some feedback on it if possible. I’m unsure whether or not my writing skills are all that great and I’m also worried about the uniqueness of my story. 

Anyway, the idea behind this particular chapter was to try and introduce the reader into the bloody world where this story takes place, and I figured an interesting way of doing this would be to start the story with a regular soldier rather than a main character. Thanks once again for your time and feedback, I really appreciate it.

I’m trying to get back into insect glaive as it’s been a while since I used it, but I’m confused as to why I got hit here even though it looked like I got the offset? Any advice on gameplay as well helps, thanks.