Updated my App Store screenshots after feedback. Is the app’s purpose clearer now?
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Updated my App Store screenshots after feedback. Is the app’s purpose clearer now?

I’m working on the screenshots for my travel app, and the biggest feedback on my previous set was that people couldn’t tell what the app actually did.

I’ve replaced the vague captions with direct benefits and used real app screens alongside examples of what users can create. I also made the phone sizes and layout consistent.

Before explaining the app here and influencing your first impression: what would you expect this app to do from these screenshots alone?

Would you keep this order, or is there a stronger screenshot to lead with? Honest criticism welcome.

u/cvsaysenur — 12 days ago

I built an iPhone app that turns your travel routes into stories worth sharing

A photo captures where you stopped. I wanted something that shows the journey too.

I’m building Acheli: Voyage, and the video shows one of my favorite features: putting your flight or road trip route on your own photos, including the stops along the way. You can move and resize the route and details, then save or share the recap.

It also creates animated route videos, boarding pass-style stories, and AI travel artwork. There’s a personal travel map for your visited cities and an AI assistant for planning your days.

I recently updated the screenshots and simplified the app, but getting it discovered is still the hard part.

Does this video make the app’s appeal clear, or would you show something different first? I’d appreciate an outside perspective before making more demos.

  App Store: Acheli Voyage

u/cvsaysenur — 28 days ago